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RPGM Midnight Fever - NTR/Corruption Game - [Development Thread]

mentosa

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I have a bunch of different maps and art ready but the main problem is that I'm really bad at writing dialogues, lol.
It took me days to write a one scene dialogue.
Here are examples of scenes I'm currently working on.



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I hope it's not too much for me to give tips, but in general women are more attractive when they are "womanly" - not loud, obnoxious, cursing and screaming. Make her inner monologue more gentile:
- You are going to tear me apart (not "my ass apart").
- I can't believe I'm going to do this (after he said X / after he did Y) (not "kiss that motherfucker's dick").
 
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Kuroki Nagai

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I hope it's not too much for me to give tips, but in general women are more attractive when they are "womanly" - not loud, obnoxious, cursing and screaming. Make her inner monologue more gentile:
- You are going to tear me apart (not "my ass apart").
- I can't believe I'm going to do this (after he said X / after he did Y) (not "kiss that motherfucker's dick").
I really need some tips on writing dialogues, haha.

I don't know about her loudness tho.
I wanted to make FMC more defiant and bratty because there's too many games where the female protag too shy or timid, but I'm going to rework a lot of the dialogues in the future
 

phantomz

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I really need some tips on writing dialogues, haha.

I don't know about her loudness tho.
I wanted to make FMC more defiant and bratty because there's too many games where the female protag too shy or timid, but I'm going to rework a lot of the dialogues in the future
Agreed
We already have seen a lot of fmc with shy and gentle personality that turned to a slut .

It would be more interesting to see a tough girl learn her place and turn to a slut . Because it's harder to break her and that could make the story and game more fun and interesting.

Ofc that's only my opinion

And your comment about milfs broke my heart
 
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Agreed
We already have seen a lot of fmc with shy and gentle personality that turned to a slut .

It would be more interesting to see a tough girl learn her place and turn to a slut . Because it's harder to break her and that could make the story and game more fun and interesting.

Ofc that's only my opinion

And your comment about milfs broke my heart
I love the trope of shy and gentle turing sluts but also agree that toughs ones are great. Think the biggest problem is that many turn them almost instant into to sluts instead of let it build slowly. Star Knightess Aura had the premise down pretty great but my time playing been mixed mostly because the you mainly play Aura which is kinda boring in my opinion but i do like the rpg side of it. Im hoping the game gonna change some things before its done like having you be able to go between worlds. Either way looking foward to both games for sure.
 

mentosa

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I really need some tips on writing dialogues, haha.

I don't know about her loudness tho.
I wanted to make FMC more defiant and bratty because there's too many games where the female protag too shy or timid, but I'm going to rework a lot of the dialogues in the future
I'm not too sure that bratty women will be a good product differentiator.
I would go for a good pace (not too fast), consistency in releases and
most importantly NTR-ish situations (story). I think creating 1 or 2 good NTR
situations is the ticket to success. Take a look at this: - starting from minute 11:00. The office wife
goes to a diner party with her husband and gets fucked by his boss and boss's friend
while the man suspects but does nothing about it. One of the hottest NTR scenes I know.

Again, don't want to be rude with my ideas, because it is your game and
I think doing things you like is important for motivation and I like
your ideas and tastes very much - we need more people like you. So
I would be better if you created what you like if it motivates you.
 

Salomon108

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This game is promising and the art is very beautiful , i suggest the story and the corruption of the fem prot is for the slow progression i mean i dont wanna that she became a slut in a week of the game. In the end i hope this game is not gonna be abbandoned it looks very promising.
 
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Kuroki Nagai

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Will there be sph scenes or situations were the FMC compares the MMCs dick with that of the antagonists ?
Yes, a few of them.



This game is promising and the art is very beautiful , i suggest the story and the corruption of the fem prot is for the slow progression i mean i dont wanna that she became a slut in a week of the game. In the end i hope this game is not gonna be abbandoned it looks very promising.
Yeah, games with slow progression are the best. I also love when the game allows you to stay pure and have as little sexual intercourses as possible like in Karryn's Prison.
 

Kuroki Nagai

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Hey guys! Apologies for staying silent for so long. Had some academic problems.

Anyway, here's a sneak-peek at the design of one of the main characters and the interior of the nightclub.
I wasn't satisfied with the previous designs of the club, so I decided to redo it a few times.
Right now I'm plugging the game and working on Bartender/Waitress job system for FMC.
I'm really sorry but I won't be able to release demo this month. I didn't expect RPGM to be this hard lol. Really want my game to be polished and detailed, so I'll spend some more time developing.

To my few patreon supporters:
Thank you for your help! You don't need to renew your subscription once the game is out. I will personally DM you a demo of the game when it will be available.
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Knight6797

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Btw what kind of game genre is that exactly? Is it free roam quest type game or rather a VN walking sim/scene collector? Do you have random events like harrasments or only one time events? I always prefer the former but I can always see the difficulties in adding it. In general, I just like sims so that's why I like if the game doesn't straight up hold my hand to get where it wants me to be.
 

Berenympho

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I think you can add some upgradable clothing feature. For example you can use a sewing machine to make your clothes more sexier and gain compliment from npc's.
Actually I want to see a porn site or twitter like sites that you can post your adult pics/videos in game. That sites can opens new routes for character.

I hope you can finish your game soon as possible and we can play till we dryed xD
GOOD LUCK
 

Kuroki Nagai

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Hey guys, sorry for not replying. For some reason I haven't received any notifications that I have new posts in my thread.

I deeply apologize for all the delays.
Took me a long time to redo most of the art and music to match the same style of the game since my art is quite inconsistent.
Also had to remove some of unfinished rape/non-consent sex scenes to match the patreon safe content policy.

With that out the way, I plan to release a first version of the game mid-february! (can't promise tho) Update_1.png
 
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Kuroki Nagai

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Btw what kind of game genre is that exactly? Is it free roam quest type game or rather a VN walking sim/scene collector? Do you have random events like harrasments or only one time events? I always prefer the former but I can always see the difficulties in adding it. In general, I just like sims so that's why I like if the game doesn't straight up hold my hand to get where it wants me to be.
It is a free roam with the gameplay similar to Alansya Chronicles but most of the maps lack side quests and random encounters as I have focused on the main story, but I will add them later. I want the player to do whatever he wants as soon as he finishes the prologue.
 
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Kuroki Nagai

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I think you can add some upgradable clothing feature. For example you can use a sewing machine to make your clothes more sexier and gain compliment from npc's.
Actually I want to see a porn site or twitter like sites that you can post your adult pics/videos in game. That sites can opens new routes for character.

I hope you can finish your game soon as possible and we can play till we dryed xD
GOOD LUCK
Thats actually a great idea! I'll think about adding sewing machine since I've already added a clothing store where you can buy outfits. (only one for now)

At the moment, the heroine has 4 outfits.
1. Default Outfit.
2. Waitress Outfit
3. Underwear.
4. Purchasable dress.

About the porn site.
I had the idea of a analogue of onlyfans so the heroine could sell her nude pics online. Don't know how to name it yet, lol.

Really looking forward to this, can't wait to play the first rendition/demo. GL @Kuroki Nagai.
Also thank you all for your support, I'll try to release as soon as possible!