I really need some tips on writing dialogues, haha.
I don't know about her loudness tho.
I wanted to make FMC more defiant and bratty because there's too many games where the female protag too shy or timid, but I'm going to rework a lot of the dialogues in the future
I'm not too sure that bratty women will be a good product differentiator.
I would go for a good pace (not too fast), consistency in releases and
most importantly NTR-ish situations (story). I think creating 1 or 2 good NTR
situations is the ticket to success. Take a look at this:
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- starting from minute 11:00. The office wife
goes to a diner party with her husband and gets fucked by his boss and boss's friend
while the man suspects but does nothing about it. One of the hottest NTR scenes I know.
Again, don't want to be rude with my ideas, because it is your game and
I think doing things you like is important for motivation and I like
your ideas and tastes very much - we need more people like you. So
I would be better if you created what you like if it motivates you.