VN Ren'Py Mila AI [v1.3.3b] [aDDont]

[alex870821]

thank you

You need to choose NTR route - send selfies to Dick at the start then don't tell Paul about it. After that there is no choices yet.
Also you can see all of the scenes and hints on how to get them in the gallery)

thank you for your reply. Can you please send me your save before this last update?

 

[Savadekah]

Really awesome Game dD, and finally kinda playable on Android with the new Textbox. But still, its such a turn off, that you cant hide the Textbox.

I would surely subscribe and pay for the Game, when this is fixed. Anyway...

Good Job. You made a fantastic game at all

 

[DomSoul]

This update makes it seem like there's BNWO CIA psyop bullshit going on training gullible young harlots into promoting societal revolution through blowjobs and more efficient logistical operations through international waters.

O No! He is on to you, DD!
Helmutt Will be killed by young psyop harlots givning him blowjobs!
Thus getting America freedom on the open seas and Securing the Jobs on the Pacific rim for both North and south America. So called rimjobs.
Curtesy of shadow goverment!

 

[aDDont]

Can you please send me your save before this last update?

There is no choices in NTR path, just hold on control key if you don't want to read all the text in a minute you'll get to the end of the whole path)

Sadly a story that doesn't know where it's goin is the definition of bad writting.
Every reader make a story his own. And when you drive your story to direction that have nothing to do with the story as it was before, you just spit on all the story your reader made for themselves.

And honestly, isn't it a tad too early anyway? Dick is litteraly telling a girl he knew for 3 day about his secret scheme? That makes for a very gullible character. And introducing such a ground breaking theme to the story without a single clue before hand... That make for gullible writting.

It just feel like it comes from nowhere and doesn't really belong in the world you've been building until now. I mean it was somewhat realist, but that theme is full on fictionnal. You introduce bigger than life characters. You make up an app that would be outright illegal in real life. And all that like it's nothing at all.

Let's put it this way: it's not that I don't know how the story will end—I have a general idea, a feeling, or emotion that I want to convey at the end of each story arc. But it's more of a direction rather than a precise understanding. This gives me room to maneuver along the way, taking into account what people say—whether they're interested in the story, whether they understand the characters, and so on.

During discussions, sometimes people suggest ideas that I find exciting, so I weave them into the plot. If I don’t like an idea, I ignore it. What I mean is, I'm not trying to please everyone; I'm creating a story that I personally enjoy. It moves in the direction that interests me. But I haven't mapped out every step in my head—I've tried to do that three times, but I keep changing it so often that I stopped. Instead, I just sketch out the main milestones I focus on.

As for Dick and his website, I'm not entirely sure what you mean. It's essentially like Tor Browser. As far as I know, using it isn't illegal in itself. There are illegal resources, sure, but there are also legal ones. To be honest, I initially had the idea of an underground society like in John Wick, with coins of varying values and activities you could purchase with them. But the more I developed it, the more I realized that if I wanted to tell that kind of story, the universe would need to be a part of the narrative in every arc, not just one, otherwise, it would seem odd.

In our case, Dick has influential acquaintances because of his website. Similar sites exist in reality, so I don't see anything too far-fetched here. He doesn’t really have much to hide from Mila—he’s not giving her some big names or revealing any dark secrets. Essentially, I just wanted to create a virtual space where the girls could loosen up without fearing consequences. That's the function of the site and the community—a way to introduce anonymous characters for group events, without repercussions, so to speak. No "Red Sparrows" or revolutions here.

...why adding Mila's domme path, if she hasn't a single dominant bone in her body? It just doesn't make any sense. Should be choice between either full sub path and some neutral path.

But the art is great. Though I hope, for the future players, that author is going to revisit some art to make it more consistent. Especially those loli pictures at the beginning. You can't really add a 12 years old looking character and say "she's 30, everything is good, move on". But most importantly inconsistencies just hurts the game in general.

I’m not quite sure what dominant behavior without emotions is, to be honest. Wouldn't that just be aggression in such a case? The whole idea of dom-sub dynamics is about the transfer of control. The dominant can take only as much control as the sub can and wants to give. It’s a very delicate balance of power. There’s a saying in Russian, I’m not sure of the exact English equivalent, but it’s something like: "If you know how to obey, you know how to command."

If you take away from BDSM the silly options like hypnosis or blackmail, what remains are pure emotions. And if the dom pushes a little harder, the sub will just say the safe word. Or they’ll stop "playing." So, who really controls the situation then? This is exactly what I wanted to explore in the game, from different perspectives. Because without emotions, in my view, it all loses its meaning.

As for the art, yeah, my eyes bleed too when I replay certain scenes. So, I'll either start polishing and fixing the art after finishing all the story branches, or I'll reach a breaking point and take a break just to fix everything that bothers me.

Thanks!

 

[ToshikaNakamura]

I'm really invested more in bob's route! keep going bro!

 

[whf]

I’m not quite sure what dominant behavior without emotions is, to be honest...

It's not really about no emotions at all or something, it's more about Mila being too emotional.

And about the dom sub. Yes, you have to understand both sides if you want to be a domme or sub, but that's talking about lifestyle again. I prefer dom/sub relations to be more natural, in no way seeming as some lame roleplay with characters wearing funny constumes, calling each other dumb names like mistress, slave, daddy or whatever, but just simple "I like to give orders, you like to be ordered" kind of stuff. My favorite scene in the game is the cowgirl fuck scene in Mila's domme route. She's on top, she's in control, but she doesn't act as a domme. I like it that way, it's very hot. But it is as well a scene that would fit a possible neutral path too with no problems.

Submissive women are dime a dozen, dominant ones are one in a million. That's why it's so much easier to create a submissive female characters and make it feel natural but so difficult to create a dominant one. And switches are people that can PRETEND to be either dominant or submissive based on the situation but in reality they are none but actors.

 

[Silwith]

Submissive women are dime a dozen, dominant ones are one in a million. That's why it's so much easier to create a submissive female characters and make it feel natural but so difficult to create a dominant one. And switches are people that can PRETEND to be either dominant or submissive based on the situation but in reality they are none but actors.

You clearly have zero idea how this stuff works in real life, sorry...

 

[Ashira13]

It's not really about no emotions at all or something, it's more about Mila being too emotional.

And about the dom sub. Yes, you have to understand both sides if you want to be a domme or sub, but that's talking about lifestyle again. I prefer dom/sub relations to be more natural, in no way seeming as some lame roleplay with characters wearing funny constumes, calling each other dumb names like mistress, slave, daddy or whatever, but just simple "I like to give orders, you like to be ordered" kind of stuff. My favorite scene in the game is the cowgirl fuck scene in Mila's domme route. She's on top, she's in control, but she doesn't act as a domme. I like it that way, it's very hot. But it is as well a scene that would fit a possible neutral path too with no problems.

Submissive women are dime a dozen, dominant ones are one in a million. That's why it's so much easier to create a submissive female characters and make it feel natural but so difficult to create a dominant one. And switches are people that can PRETEND to be either dominant or submissive based on the situation but in reality they are none but actors.

well, depending on the partner. a woman that is a switch, doesn't really choose to be either dominant or submissive. some men's behavior dictates if one wants to be submissive or dominant towards them. so i wouldn't call it acting if the emotions are present. and a sidepoint. blowjobs and handjobs aren't really submissive acts. its the woman that is in control in that moment, unless giving up control and lets herself be facefucked or similar situations.

 

[atrebor68]

There's actually a lot of things that could make a non-NTR/NTRS route hot. Like you mentioned, ropes and toys (not really my thing), but also exhibitionism/public sex, water sports, spanking, etc. I'd totally play that route if it had stuff like that. It's when it's actual vanilla (missionary sex, doggy sex, anal sex -> done)... that's when those sorts of routes are boring.

Damn, you're so right !! Wife's exibitionism is steamy ! I suggest ALL couples to try it almost one time in the life!

 

[Back]

NTS: I like that in this game that Bob isn't one of those stereotypical, psychotic evil fat boss bastard types one might see in such works. He has character and those scenes were pretty intense. And I'm not one that typically likes the old, fat man trope so that's saying a lot. The inclusion of this character on the NTS routes is done quite well in Mila AI. Bravo, aDDont.

Reminds me of the happy meme/doujinshi/short comic with the sinister-looking man and the frightened elf. It ends serenely with her placing a flower crown on the fat man's head as he sleeps peacefully under a tree. And for the love of gawd, I cannot find this image when I searched earlier.

NTR: The NTR route with the unseen character on the other end of the phone is an interesting take as well. But as Mila changes, I hope that she'll be able to incorporate some things she's "learned" as her inhibitions falls away into her marriage as well. Paul might even like it. It's possible that this route can go into very hard NTR which some users will surely enjoy, or even diverge away from that and morph into a different type of NTS later which may be more interesting.

Music Bug: I did note that sometimes the cover songs breaks into game saves at times. It's an odd bug which typically happens when switching the main menu's image and song, and then loading a save file. (Don't overwrite your save if this happens.) A workaround that worked for me is to get around this annoying issue is to start a new game, and then immediately load a save game afterwards.

Loyal Path: I'm actually really looking forward to the inclusion of this route. The developer promised that it will actually have weight with its own scenes and consequences. That sounds really promising! Considering what was already said in this thread and what's in the game already I'm sure that path won't be boring!

 

[Creator13]

The teasing in this game is wonderful, but I am also interested how you kept AI generating same character. I just start learning Automatic 1111 and .. it is not easy

 

[Pagoramix]

As for Dick and his website, I'm not entirely sure what you mean. It's essentially like Tor Browser. As far as I know, using it isn't illegal in itself. There are illegal resources, sure, but there are also legal ones. To be honest, I initially had the idea of an underground society like in John Wick, with coins of varying values and activities you could purchase with them. But the more I developed it, the more I realized that if I wanted to tell that kind of story, the universe would need to be a part of the narrative in every arc, not just one, otherwise, it would seem odd.

In our case, Dick has influential acquaintances because of his website. Similar sites exist in reality, so I don't see anything too far-fetched here. He doesn’t really have much to hide from Mila—he’s not giving her some big names or revealing any dark secrets. Essentially, I just wanted to create a virtual space where the girls could loosen up without fearing consequences. That's the function of the site and the community—a way to introduce anonymous characters for group events, without repercussions, so to speak. No "Red Sparrows" or revolutions here.

Well, i do find it far-fetched.
Dick goes from a nobody to a person of interest in a blink of an eye. Not only he is remarquable for other reason than Mila interest but for someone that used to be quite mysterious he is now quite famous and wouldn't be hard to track down with a simple google search. That would be a pretty big deal for the little girl that you made Mila.
Not only is he famous, but he's the very creator of the app Mila is on, and he tells shit about how men pays and girls don't meanwhile actively tracking girl to teach them how to be proper slut for the male user of the app? That seems like a pretty dark scheme to me. The kind that u wouldn't like to tell the said girl before hand. The kind that is border line legal. The kind that is far fetched.
And anyway, my issue isn't that it could exist, or that it is far fetched, it is that it doesn't quite fit the theme you've been developping so far. Mila goes from exploring her sexuality to being the target of a larger planin the matter of a few lines.

Well, i thought it was simply too much too quickly, not that this plot is bad in itself. Only that it is bringed up out of nowhere.

 

[aDDont]

Reminds me of the happy meme/doujinshi/short comic with the sinister-looking man and the frightened elf.

NTR: The NTR route with the unseen character on the other end of the phone is an interesting take as well. But as Mila changes, I hope that she'll be able to incorporate some things she's "learned" as her inhibitions falls away into her marriage as well. Paul might even like it. It's possible that this route can go into very hard NTR which some users will surely enjoy, or even diverge away from that and morph into a different type of NTS later which may be more interesting.

tbh I struggle with Paul in this route, I don't want to make him pathetic and bath in his suffering - not my thing. And netorase don't seem like fit here neither (to me). But I had a thought about Liz seducing him and then they both (Mila and Paul) will reveal their secrets and deal with it somehow. But again it's too far from the direction I chose at first. Not quite fit, I think) Will need to give it some thought and time to brew. Maybe we'll see some kind of variation of this plot)

Music Bug

We'll try to fix that, thanks!

The teasing in this game is wonderful, but I am also interested how you kept AI generating same character. I just start learning Automatic 1111 and .. it is not easy

I trained a character Lora for Mila. It's the only way to make the character consistent enough and not stiff enough to make variety of emotions and angles at the same time, without affecting the style.
It's not that hard to train one, actually, especially now, when we have adaptive schedulers and models. When I trained forst models it was a lot of handwork, much more than now)

Well, i do find it far-fetched.
Dick goes from a nobody to a person of interest in a blink of an eye. Not only he is remarquable for other reason than Mila interest but for someone that used to be quite mysterious he is now quite famous and wouldn't be hard to track down with a simple google search. That would be a pretty big deal for the little girl that you made Mila.
Not only is he famous, but he's the very creator of the app Mila is on, and he tells shit about how men pays and girls don't meanwhile actively tracking girl to teach them how to be proper slut for the male user of the app? That seems like a pretty dark scheme to me. The kind that u wouldn't like to tell the said girl before hand. The kind that is border line legal. The kind that is far fetched.
And anyway, my issue isn't that it could exist, or that it is far fetched, it is that it doesn't quite fit the theme you've been developping so far. Mila goes from exploring her sexuality to being the target of a larger planin the matter of a few lines.

Well, i thought it was simply too much too quickly, not that this plot is bad in itself. Only that it is bringed up out of nowhere.

Now I get it)
i wouldn't call him famous, more like "well known in close circles", but yeah I get what you mean.

Dick doesn’t interact with all the girls on there, only with those who ‘seem promising.’ There are definitely a lot of gold diggers on the site, and he just ignores them. But as soon as he notices someone interesting, he might join in, and not so much for the site or the users, but for himself. There’s something captivating for a lot of people (myself included) about watching something pure and innocent turn into something corrupted and depraved.

But I think I got your point, and I even agree. The inconsistency probably stems from the fact that I’m adjusting the plot ‘on the go.’ After several read-throughs, once the whole story is finished, I’ll probably change some things. There might still be unfinished threads or forgotten twists—I've had that happen before when writing a novel. I ended up rewriting it three times, and it’s waiting for a fourth round.
It's never enough for me, if I start polishing every little thing before publishing I'll stuck on one place.
Anyway thanks for noticing this, I will give it a proper thought)

 

[DomSoul]

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tbh I struggle with Paul in this route, I don't want to make him pathetic and bath in his suffering - not my thing. And netorase don't seem like fit here neither (to me). But I had a thought about Liz seducing him and then they both (Mila and Paul) will reveal their secrets and deal with it somehow. But again it's too far from the direction I chose at first. Not quite fit, I think) Will need to give it some thought and time to brew. Maybe we'll see some kind of variation of this plot)

We'll try to fix that, thanks!


I trained a character Lora for Mila. It's the only way to make the character consistent enough and not stiff enough to make variety of emotions and angles at the same time, without affecting the style.
It's not that hard to train one, actually, especially now, when we have adaptive schedulers and models. When I trained forst models it was a lot of handwork, much more than now)


Now I get it)
i wouldn't call him famous, more like "well known in close circles", but yeah I get what you mean.

Dick doesn’t interact with all the girls on there, only with those who ‘seem promising.’ There are definitely a lot of gold diggers on the site, and he just ignores them. But as soon as he notices someone interesting, he might join in, and not so much for the site or the users, but for himself. There’s something captivating for a lot of people (myself included) about watching something pure and innocent turn into something corrupted and depraved.

But I think I got your point, and I even agree. The inconsistency probably stems from the fact that I’m adjusting the plot ‘on the go.’ After several read-throughs, once the whole story is finished, I’ll probably change some things. There might still be unfinished threads or forgotten twists—I've had that happen before when writing a novel. I ended up rewriting it three times, and it’s waiting for a fourth round.
It's never enough for me, if I start polishing every little thing before publishing I'll stuck on one place.
Anyway thanks for noticing this, I will give it a proper thought)

Keep up the good work

 

[Savadekah]

Its such a amazing experience here.

Normally, i play one route and im done with the game for a while. But damn... i just cant stop. This is a masterpiece.

 

[Лекса Лекса]

Please tell me how to start the game, just buy?

 

[aDDont]

Please tell me how to start the game, just buy?

The links is on the first page of this topic - download the game to your device. Then extract and run) it's free

 

[Germanbuss]

I have never donate the games, but if you make a Incest, I will personally throw at least $ 25, but just in the same schedule!
Dude is cool! I don't care what a neural network.

 

[SevenCostanza]

Another +1 from me for the Bob route. Not really interested in Paul in either story line though.
Also that part with Bob where you choose what she calls you and what you call her doesn't seem to save for scenes after that. At least in the gallery it doesn't save. I had to edit the rpy file for it to be a consistent thing.
Not sure if it's just me but I wish there was more dirty talking during the scenes as opposed to 90% of it being *thinking* text and one or two lines of actual talking scattered through.
These are all of course minor personal preferences so feel free to ignore me and keep doing your thing.
Overall great game my hats off to you sir!

 

[aDDont]

I have never donate the games, but if you make a Incest, I will personally throw at least $ 25, but just in the same schedule!
Dude is cool! I don't care what a neural network.

I don't have plans for incest in this game, maybe in the next one) The most incesty thing may be Mila's sister trying to lure away Paul from her, but I am not sure if it will be implemented or not.
Thanks)

Also that part with Bob where you choose what she calls you and what you call her doesn't seem to save for scenes after that.
Not sure if it's just me but I wish there was more dirty talking during the scenes as opposed to 90% of it being *thinking* text and one or two lines of actual talking scattered through.

Will try to fix the naming thing in the next updates.

About dirty talking - I am more into more natural (for me) sounds, like grunts, light moans, slurping, coughing etc. Of course I make the characters to overreact a bit for better picture, but anyway.
Dirty talking is cool (for me) for foreplay, to get you and your partner in the right mood. So I wouldn't expect much more of it in the future, but in NTR route there will be a bit more dirty talking before "the main action" and in the end, probably. But I won't promise that it will be the rule - I'll use it if it fits the mood (imo).
Thanks