VN Ren'Py Mila AI [v1.5.3public] [aDDont]

[aDDont]

But the end of previous update has an error, wife should has her face full of black smudged eyeliner, at the end.
Only my opinion.

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She is telling that she washed up, that's why, but yeah, you are right, I think it will be hotter if I add at least one CG with runny makeup)

Where is this image from?

Loyal route - don't send the pictures and fail in standing up in mila after bondage scene. Paul will princess carry her to bed

 

[D.D.]

goddamn, not usually a huge AI art fan but this is changing my mind

 

[Priappus]

excellent game.

 

[vrtrtr]

The art is really cool but I don't want to read godfcuk whatsapp, why is this the medium of choice.
Fuck.
I'm already enough on my phone as is.

 

[La Dani]

I played this update to the end.
IT'S BURNING FIRE !!!
Tonight I'll make sparks with the wife, thanks aDDont !!

 

[Taboofan]

Okay. Played the game now. Going to give my thoughts here, rather than reviewing as the game isn’t finished and the developer responded to my previous question. I know it isn’t a finished project, but as I have no idea how hard it is to go back and change stuff in Renpy, I thought I would give some thoughts now before the game continues.

Graphics are great. It is obviously AI cg, but I don’t have a bias there. Mila’s looks don’t change, no six fingers or whatever. Utterly love the amount of clothing Mila wears, how sexy she makes it despite not having as much up top. Mila’s got style. Great work. Backgrounds are good too.

The play… er there it gets a bit more troublesome. First, the lack of choices.

None of the three choices that follow after you stop texting with NTR Black (seen a image recently of NTR Power Rangers) seem to matter. Possibly they are meant for something in the future?

Setting that aside, there are the three paths through the game. As much as I wanted to make certain the game didn’t rely on corruption points and would thus force you to be with more than just one of the male characters, it seems exceedingly abrupt to step from the possible cheating/online flirting path with NTR Black to NTR Fat. The feel of the game also changes dramatically. You are dommed by Paul in the coming clean/loyal route, which is... okay. Understandable given the dialogue. But here, it isn’t. Him being angry, yes, him deciding to Dom Mila, no.

I think there needs to be some more choices before you have the choice to come clean or do what you want, choices that can impact how Mila feels about herself and Paul, how she feels about the lack of excitement in her life. Having another choice there to just cut off NTR Black there rather than do that AND come clean, followed by an introspective moment about what she did and didn’t like about the experience. Coming clean entirely should be up to the player.

Paul suddenly becoming a Dom comes out of left field. Maybe introducing some female dom there? The conversation after the Paul Dom moment could also be better. Some more choices in terms of how it goes after Paul has Dommed Mila would be good. A way to get back on the loyal path, perhaps? Something like that if Dick’s approach is too much would be good too. And Paul’s kink is way too specific.

As for NTR Fat himself… it feels as if Bob’s character could be divided in two which would add more to the story. Make one a young closed-in nerd who is thin and introverted, with no knowledge of women. The other can be older than Mila like the existing character and fat, but more outgoing and perverted, who is into toys and so forth. That way the player could have more interaction points, ways to make Mila the way the player wants to, ways to either choose to play along with Paul or completely betray him at this point rather than just earlier with NTR Black. You don’t have to be like Project Myriam, but there needs to be more choices.
(also, little bear...? no. Just...no. Not for someone that much larger than her and that much older looking.)

Good luck going forward!

 

[Anal-LoveR]

New content in the future can choose to focus on using her butthole?
I want to see the new path buttslut.

 

[Nikko_]

Well, it seem the dev has finally managed to keep Mila model consistent enough. Starting from 1.2.5, at least Mila doesn't look like a total different character from scene to scene. The bf is still all over the place.
This is one of few VN that actually needs remake (for the content before 1.2.5).

 

[angelm1ke]

This game is brutal! Very well made.

 

[Mokufinder]

Best netorase game! I am checking forum every day to check if there are new updates! Great art, and hot story. Thanks for this game! Please continue

 

[mgtoons]

Love the artwork. I wish I could find some good male protags with good AI artwork like this. Good luck, I'll keep looking.

 

[gooberdoober]

maybe im alone here but i feel like the ntr/cheating path is more well rounded... i am saddened that all the focus is on this bob path that feels contrived.

 

[Tanzie]

I was enjoying the initial art style but then it switched to the shitty anime style , screenshots are misleading.

 

[esoom]

There should be none But if you find one - tell me, I'll illiminate her

Noooo, you monster!!! The AI promised me 6 fingered cat girls and you are taking them away.

 

[Belnick]

so just an online porn paper??
as AI is worthless at making animation, which mean all AI games are still still pics

 

[aDDont]

love it. she's great but I am getting a bit tired of the bob storyline

Thank you I am mostly concentrated on this route for now, so in nearest future it will be only continuation of swinging patth, if my patrons won't say that they want me to pay more attention on other branches

New content in the future can choose to focus on using her butthole?
I want to see the new path buttslut.

In sub path (netorase route) she will have anal sex, yes. I guess it will be a lot of anal sex actually Loyal path and NTR path have a lot of anal too (but this paths have old style CGs, more "anime" like).

Well, it seem the dev has finally managed to keep Mila model consistent enough. Starting from 1.2.5, at least Mila doesn't look like a total different character from scene to scene. The bf is still all over the place.
This is one of few VN that actually needs remake (for the content before 1.2.5).

Yeah, I spent a lot of time to stabilize mens faces, especially in kisses scenes, but after that I thought nobody look at men anyway, and for now I don't spent much time on it. I have some ideas how I can try to stabilize that, but I guess I'll try them later.
I already remade a part of old CGs and continue to do so bit by bit (I prioritize new content over quality of already made stuff).

maybe im alone here but i feel like the ntr/cheating path is more well rounded... i am saddened that all the focus is on this bob path that feels contrived.

It's more like a legacy of this project I guess... At first I made only Loyal and NTR paths, the netorase route wasn't ready, and after I received first comments I reworked it and made it deeper and much much bigger. I wanted to make a demo game, but also I wanted to make a cool demo game, not just another 0.0.1 shit, with no content. And I am still here making this demo, ahah
After I finish netorase path I may switch my attention on quality, or make other paths bigger and deeper. Or I'll just start another game. We'll see

I was enjoying the initial art style but then it switched to the shitty anime style , screenshots are misleading.

Loyal and NTR paths will stay with the "old" art style for a while, but netorase path I want to redo in new art style completely. It will be a lot of work though So it won't be fast. New art style starts after 1.2.5 update (it's after first H-scene with Bob).

so just an online porn paper??
as AI is worthless at making animation, which mean all AI games are still still pics

There are some animation in a game, but yeah, it's a bunch of still images
I made a couple animation models, but they are not on the level I can use in the game.

Love the artwork. I wish I could find some good male protags with good AI artwork like this. Good luck, I'll keep looking.

I would suggest you to try Blurring the walls it's pretty good imo.

 

[aDDont]

None of the three choices that follow after you stop texting with NTR Black (seen a image recently of NTR Power Rangers) seem to matter. Possibly they are meant for something in the future?

It's not like it doesn't matter - it affects the CGs and dialog options, even some scenes completely.

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Setting that aside, there are the three paths through the game. As much as I wanted to make certain the game didn’t rely on corruption points and would thus force you to be with more than just one of the male characters, it seems exceedingly abrupt to step from the possible cheating/online flirting path with NTR Black to NTR Fat. The feel of the game also changes dramatically. You are dommed by Paul in the coming clean/loyal route, which is... okay. Understandable given the dialogue. But here, it isn’t. Him being angry, yes, him deciding to Dom Mila, no.

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I think there needs to be some more choices before you have the choice to come clean or do what you want, choices that can impact how Mila feels about herself and Paul, how she feels about the lack of excitement in her life. Having another choice there to just cut off NTR Black there rather than do that AND come clean, followed by an introspective moment about what she did and didn’t like about the experience. Coming clean entirely should be up to the player.

That's a good point, maybe when/if I come back to NTR route I wil revamp this and add a bit there too.

Paul suddenly becoming a Dom comes out of left field. Maybe introducing some female dom there? The conversation after the Paul Dom moment could also be better. Some more choices in terms of how it goes after Paul has Dommed Mila would be good. A way to get back on the loyal path, perhaps? Something like that if Dick’s approach is too much would be good too. And Paul’s kink is way too specific.

That's a good twist too, yeah I tried to make the story simple, but yeah I may revamp the story in that regard and made something similar later.

As for NTR Fat himself… it feels as if Bob’s character could be divided in two which would add more to the story. Make one a young closed-in nerd who is thin and introverted, with no knowledge of women. The other can be older than Mila like the existing character and fat, but more outgoing and perverted, who is into toys and so forth. That way the player could have more interaction points, ways to make Mila the way the player wants to, ways to either choose to play along with Paul or completely betray him at this point rather than just earlier with NTR Black. You don’t have to be like Project Myriam, but there needs to be more choices.
(also, little bear...? no. Just...no. Not for someone that much larger than her and that much older looking.)

I wanted to make an "Ugly bastard" type of character who is not a bastard, and quite a nice guy actually. I may went a bit overboard though, but I don't have plans of redoing him or splitting in two. I had thoughts about adding unexperienced guy, but older dude seemed hotter to me. If the story won't become borring I may add another characters, or start a new game. We'll see - my horizon of planning is about two weeks

Good luck going forward!

Thank you

 

[La Dani]

aDDont only as information, what do you use as AI generator ?

 

[aDDont]

aDDont only as information, what do you use as AI generator ?

Stable diffusion) It is mentioned in the game description) Also I made a post about how I make CGs

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[status10]

The dev gives us five toes and we complain for inconsistencies. On AI. Which is like an infant tech. Cut them some slack, would ya?

I think the result is fantastic. Well done dev and thanks for taking that extra mile for it!