Decent amount of content for an intro
PROS
Models are sexy
Story is interesting
Renders are good
CONS
MC's face is a little blocky
The narration after the majority of dialogue is over kill
Summary
From the intro this feels like it will be an interesting story. There's a good flow to how things transpire so far.
It is only my opinion, but the narration could be removed. It's coming off like an old PI noir style. ( only my opinion)
The MC's face looks blocky.
I recommend this VN. It has a good start, and MILFs as well.
Good luck to the dev, and I'm looking forward to more updates.