V0.18
and it was doing so well....
you are lord of a manor and have an empire of women ready to follow your every whim, as you progressively continue to create mankind's greatest work.
and yet, for all the build up and writing, the art and coding, this whole thing just became a complete farce.
you go to spend the weekend with two women who are not part of your current empire, and a third who is a part of it, turns up and if you choose to have sex, will lead to a game over......correct. your brain cells just imploded.
it did NOT lead to that woman, who stands and watches until you finish, along with her grinning sister to be ejected from content for at least awhile, no, you lose everything. it is game over. the story no longer exists. the empire falls with no leader. the women prune and all because of one woman, regardless of all the others.
yeah i agree, it makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. in fact, it sticks two fingers up at itself. none of those choices should lead to a game over, less women yes, at least for a time as the sister seemed amiable and is written AND portrayed as so, but game over no.
why did she watch and then flip? why did she not intervene straight away if she is so repulsed? the build up does not match to the outcome at all.
this plot hole is gaping with stupidity. why even bother introducing them?
until this point, the art was above average and the writing, though not a great story, was at least readable and was entertaining as a juvenile fantasy.
now it is more forgettable than a DK project.
V0.19 review to changes
well the game no longer has the game overs that made no sense, true to the developers words, which lets face it, were all about that patreon site.
even though they were taken out, the flow is still off.
what started as a male protag VN about one thing has now turned into a multi protag purely sex game. calling it a VN is to also say that the Novel part is not even remotely a prerequisite. it was a plot about a guy given a harem in exchange for his changing the world, but is now all about getting a harem including family, the world changing plot an after thought. why that start to build up a plot you are going to ignore is beyond me.
why even introduce all those girls and then ignore them this early on when your MC has barely gotten a foothold?
no longer an issue as this is my last visit to this nonsense.
and it was doing so well....
you are lord of a manor and have an empire of women ready to follow your every whim, as you progressively continue to create mankind's greatest work.
and yet, for all the build up and writing, the art and coding, this whole thing just became a complete farce.
you go to spend the weekend with two women who are not part of your current empire, and a third who is a part of it, turns up and if you choose to have sex, will lead to a game over......correct. your brain cells just imploded.
it did NOT lead to that woman, who stands and watches until you finish, along with her grinning sister to be ejected from content for at least awhile, no, you lose everything. it is game over. the story no longer exists. the empire falls with no leader. the women prune and all because of one woman, regardless of all the others.
yeah i agree, it makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. in fact, it sticks two fingers up at itself. none of those choices should lead to a game over, less women yes, at least for a time as the sister seemed amiable and is written AND portrayed as so, but game over no.
why did she watch and then flip? why did she not intervene straight away if she is so repulsed? the build up does not match to the outcome at all.
this plot hole is gaping with stupidity. why even bother introducing them?
until this point, the art was above average and the writing, though not a great story, was at least readable and was entertaining as a juvenile fantasy.
now it is more forgettable than a DK project.
V0.19 review to changes
well the game no longer has the game overs that made no sense, true to the developers words, which lets face it, were all about that patreon site.
even though they were taken out, the flow is still off.
what started as a male protag VN about one thing has now turned into a multi protag purely sex game. calling it a VN is to also say that the Novel part is not even remotely a prerequisite. it was a plot about a guy given a harem in exchange for his changing the world, but is now all about getting a harem including family, the world changing plot an after thought. why that start to build up a plot you are going to ignore is beyond me.
why even introduce all those girls and then ignore them this early on when your MC has barely gotten a foothold?
no longer an issue as this is my last visit to this nonsense.