VN Ren'Py MINA! NTR Phone Story [v0.13a] [DramaticDonut]

[DramaticDonut]

Wow rather negative in my opinion.
While it maybe sometimes true, I don't believe the dev's plan to abandon games they invest so much time. As a programmer myself (not in gaming but general) it is rather frustrating if you can't finish projects. I believe most try but underestimate the amount of work it needs, or real life gets in between. Game development can take years, so real life situations change all the time.

But it depends how someone wants to see others. I don't think every person is only after money

Thanks a lot for both of your comments. That's really kind of you to say. Literally made my day

 

[DramaticDonut]

I am using version 0.12b.
My problem is that when I load a game, it completely resets the story.
And sometimes I can't load/save, the menu won't open.

Damn that's really annyoing... I never ran into that during playtesting. Are you by chance using the android version? That's the only one I couldn't test as much. I'll let you know as soon as I've identified the problem... Until then the best option would probably be to use the web version of on itch.io. Really sorry about that!!

 

[EnTeeArrr]

another one nice

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Haha nice, only A Phone Affair and maybe NTRMobile are any good on this list imo.

 

[DudeSTL]

I just wish someone would complete one beyond chapter 1

 

[ChelseaFan8]

This game really could of done wth a route from the beginning where the GF isnt aware of your desires, you set it up perfectly for the best friend to be aware and help guide her down a corruption route. The gf already being aware really forces you down an nts route as even if she starts to 'cheat' you've already outed yourself as a cuck so its not really ntr. Think it really needs a route where your desires are only known to the friend for there to be anythng close to NTR. Other than that i really like the game, good language and no bugs and the renders are clean.

 

[hakunapotata]

Another NTS/NTR thats actually only NTS -_-
Disappointing.

 

[MIkedante]

Hey MIkeDante, fair question! We're still quite early in the story (just the first weekend) and the plan never was to dive into full-on NTR right away. It just doesn't really fit with how I picture Mina's character at this stage. Also, this wouldn't be a game I'd personally enjoy myself. But trust me, the title will make sense once we get further along

Regarding choices: I can see how some choices might seem meaningless. And of course many choices made just add flavor to the experience without having a long term effect on the story. But there are definitely early decisions that will have an impact later on. For example telling Mina to think of Jacob will influence how things play out.

Hopefully things will feel a bit clearer after the next update!

Yeah maybe you'll find some way to steer it back into NTR, but with cuck settings from start it's way hard, not to mention, that peoples who likes true NTR usually don't like NTS stuff, so it's like you already shooted yourself in feet with that.

On the other hand story about starting singer/group career isn't bad idea for NTR/NTS game at all, cause in my country it's well known secret that new, young and inexperienced girls which wanna start their singing (or acting) career, must do something more than only have a demo prepared and be willing to spread their thighs for "right peoples on right places" to shine in that industry. Not to mention how common they go for abortion of unwanted pregnancy! Everyone knows about it, but stays silent, because it's their choice and what they want.

And yes, when they start they usually have BF, but due of those "secret escapades" those pairs breaks sooner or later, in depend of how strong stomach that particular BF have.

 

[asehpe]

I already have half a terabyte of disk full of telephone NTR novels. Need more. I’ll put together a collection for posterity and write a dissertation.

Good luck in development.

If you need an academic advisor, contact me.

 

[asehpe]

Yeah maybe you'll find some way to steer it back into NTR, but with cuck settings from start it's way hard, not to mention, that peoples who likes true NTR usually don't like NTS stuff, so it's like you already shooted yourself in feet with that.

On the other hand story about starting singer/group career isn't bad idea for NTR/NTS game at all, cause in my country it's well known secret that new, young and inexperienced girls which wanna start their singing (or acting) career, must do something more than only have a demo prepared and be willing to spread their thighs for "right peoples on right places" to shine in that industry. Not to mention how common they go for abortion of unwanted pregnancy! Everyone knows about it, but stays silent, because it's their choice and what they want.

And yes, when they start they usually have BF, but due of those "secret escapades" those pairs breaks sooner or later, in depend of how strong stomach that particular BF have.

Let me guess... Eastern Europe? Russia?

 

[MIkedante]

Let me guess... Eastern Europe? Russia?

I live in EU, but not so far from your guess. My mom have some connections in song/radio industry, so I know many of spicy things from that segment.

 

[SarahTheGod]

Looks good, love the story line. Please finish this.

 

[hp_surfer]

I could see a scenario where an NTS situation turns into an NTR situation

And that is some of the best NTR out there.
MC regrets doing trying out cuckolding, requests it stops, GF says "ok lets stop".
But she fell in love with getting dicked down, and cheats on MC behind his back.
Pure cinema <3

 

[Oscar Granja]

Nice

 

[DramaticDonut]

Looks good, love the story line. Please finish this.

Thanks a lot! Will finish this one for sure

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

I could see a scenario where an NTS situation turns into an NTR situation

NTS Honeymoon changed to this. And I LIKE it.

 

[Alice18]

Usually I like NTR and Cuckold stories, but Mina is way too cute to share

 

[theonlyondgreat]

Thanks a lot for both of your comments. That's really kind of you to say. Literally made my day

No problem. I work with AI daily and still have my job, so obviously some human interaction seems necessary
Good luck with the game in any case.
And thank you the tits size in the game are somewhere in the realistic spectrum.

 

[Theadriel]

Let me guess... Eastern Europe? Russia?

You can add Korea too. Kpop business has been proved to be a prostitution and escorting nest. Including politics, producers and else taking advantage of young ambitious girls. To be honest it's probably everywhere, just some countries are more known for this than others.

But I agree with OP. This setting is original at least and set a steady base for developping this kind of scenario. More than just the bored wife turning into a slut at least

 

[DramaticDonut]

Usually I like NTR and Cuckold stories, but Mina is way too cute to share

Hahaha oh noes! Better stick with the current version then D

 

[Agglutinant]

Gave it a try despite the current low rating.

I assume the low rating is because for now it's NTS and not NTR yet (?), because I find the game quite good and with an original setting.

Really enjoy it. Love the characters, even Alexis while I tend to hate this type of characters in the other NTS games.

CG looks pretty good to me, but maybe Alexis and Mina looks too similar (there's some differences but you could almost just swap their haircut and voilà) ? Like the cute side of the latter tho, even if the proportion of her face feels maybe a little too small compared to her entire head ?

Love the relationship and messages between Mina and MC. Didn't mind that not every messages have game changing consequences, and appreciate that "important" choices are emphasized. I like the group setting too. I'd just be careful how to put NTS into this, not a fan of putting at risk the girls career by begining to publicly flirting with everyone and have a bad reputation from the start lol

I was a little scared when I saw that the game was made in RenPy, but it's pretty good on Android ! And I appreciate that it's quite lightweight (at least for now lol). Saves are a little off (when you load you don't arrive at the exact moment you save, sometimes a little before). And I may be blind but didn't find the skip button on Android, so I've yet to try to refuse Alexis help in memory 1.2 (if it changes anything?).

Anyway, great start, I'll keep an eye on update on Patreon, looking forward for what's coming next !