VN Ren'Py MINA! NTR Phone Story [v0.13a] [DramaticDonut]

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I follow that. NTR are way too often coming with humiliation and cocksize/sex performance degradation. That ruins the thing for me. I may like FMC cheating or being free to go elsewhere (embracing her sexuality is hot ngl) but not at the price of treating MC like an inferior human being
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Yeah! For once, I want the wife/GF in one of these games to start fucking multiple dudes - and openly love it - not because the protagonist sucks in some way, but just because multiple sexual partners > one sexual partner.
(Speaking strictly in terms of numbers; I am not trying to preach that monogamy is bad or any bs like that.)

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Over time you'll decide whether your relationship with Mina leans more towards NTS or NTR.
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Like, in-character you can openly encourage her to fall in love with someone else, or maybe even leave you for them (or even help set it up)? Like, the MC's not just being passive or dumb, but actively pursuing an NTR outcome on purpose? Because honestly that would be fresh as hell in a genre that is absolutely fucking stuffed with cliches, and would make me so excited for this project.
 
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DramaticDonut, based on an (admittedly old) interaction on this game's itch.io page, it seems like you may be looking for ideas for this game, provided they somehow break from standard NTR-game tropes.
Is that still the case? Cause I'm sure a lot of the posters on here have strong feelings about how samey NTR (and NTR-adjacent) games can be, and would love to get a conversation about more novel situations going.
 
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Thank you for using Renpy (y), I am not sure why most of the messenger style games use Unity or similar, it just isn't very good for it imo.

This is already one of the better ones in the multitude of phone interface games that keep popping up, good work, looking forward to seeing the story develop. :)
 
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empatheticapathy said:
DramaticDonut, based on an (admittedly old) interaction on this game's itch.io page, it seems like you may be looking for ideas for this game, provided they somehow break from standard NTR-game tropes.
Is that still the case? Cause I'm sure a lot of the posters on here have strong feelings about how samey NTR (and NTR-adjacent) games can be, and would love to get a conversation about more novel situations going.
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empatheticapathy Always up for cool ideas! :) Just shoot me a message on Itch, Patreon, or here!
 
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Woops sorry I was actually going to comment on that, not just like it! Yes, it'll be available in later chapters :)
 
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empatheticapathy said:
Since the dev seems to be actively courting feedback, I did a playthrough and wrote down my thoughts as I went.

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Hey empatheticapathy


Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts and points of improvement :) I really enjoyed reading your detailed view on the game so far!

Some feedback on what you mentioned:
  • I'm planning to rework some of the earlier parts of the game after Version 0.15. I've added the things you mentioned to my list and will review them myself during a separate playthrough. I can already tell I probably won't implement ALL of them - some just don't feel "worth it" time-wise, considering I could be working on new content instead. Still, it’s super valuable to hear new ideas regarding dialogue options, kinks, etc. Thanks for that!
  • Sorry that Alex annoys you sometimes :p But hey - that’s kind of her job in the story! :D
  • Jacob isn’t supposed to come across as a prototype gym bro. I actually tried to describe him as fit without making him sound like a bodybuilder. Could definitely make that clearer though! I think things will become more obvious in v0.13.
  • Option to block Blue: Good point! Blue’s personality and "games" definitely aren’t for everyone, so most of her content will stay optional. That said, there's one chapter where the player will have to interact with her a bit more for story purposes. Any NSFW content, however, will remain optional (starting from v0.15).
  • Love that you love that MC and Mina are in love :D
  • I'll fix those typos and message inconsistencies ASAP - thanks a lot for catching them!
 
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DramaticDonut said:
  • Sorry that Alex annoys you sometimes :p But hey - that’s kind of her job in the story! :D
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It's less 'annoys me', and more 'casually and continually invades my privacy, disrespects my boundaries, makes decisions on my behalf without actually giving a shit how I feel, does all those same things to people I care about, and speaks to me in a way I find deeply insulting, all of which would cause me to openly consider her toxic, get seriously angry at her behavior, and not permit her to be in my life in any way irl'. I kinda hate her guts and think she's a bad person. I really want to be able to express more contempt for her in the game; I'd like it if the user never HAD to find her sexy, for example, which iirc is currently the case in her scene in the bathroom.

Also, seriously, I loved the 'encourage Mina to masturbate to another guy' bit so much, I could go for a whole route of just that (or maybe some girls too? Bi/Lesbian NTR content is so rare). That was so good.
 
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