VN Ren'Py MINA! NTR Phone Story [v0.13a] [DramaticDonut]

[stuffygames]

It's less 'annoys me', and more 'casually and continually invades my privacy, disrespects my boundaries, makes decisions on my behalf without actually giving a shit how I feel, does all those same things to people I care about, and speaks to me in a way I find deeply insulting, all of which would cause me to openly consider her toxic, get seriously angry at her behavior, and not permit her to be in my life in any way irl'. I kinda hate her guts and think she's a bad person.

She is also one of your girlfriends best friends, and they perform together in their band/group in the game. So if you treat her the way you wish you could, probably going to lose your girlfriend too. Then you're just another incel complaining how all women suck. No one wants the game InCeL Mobile, so I think it's better to remember this is a game, not real life.

For fairness sake, I will vote to stick with this version of Alex, who is clearly a device for moving the story along, and not someone sent to torment my poor soul while I read texts from my pixel girlfiriend on a fake phone interface.

 

[DressedToThrill]

InCeL Mobile

You meant to write InCell Phone, clearly.

But otherwise I agree with you with regards to Alex. I didn't find her unbearable, but probably more as intended by the author and the way you describe her role.

Generally I was very impressed with the writing in this game. When it first got uploaded here I downloaded and played through the entire thing in one go. Very engrossing story too, at least compare to many other similar games. Those usually have daily life and work, and some convoluted drama involved, or nothing at all. This game puts us right at the beginning of big life changes, and positive ones too, and that's pretty awesome.

And I love the big 80s style hair on many of the ladies.

 

[stuffygames]

You meant to write InCell Phone, clearly.

But otherwise I agree with you with regards to Alex. I didn't find her unbearable, but probably more as intended by the author and the way you describe her role.

Generally I was very impressed with the writing in this game. When it first got uploaded here I downloaded and played through the entire thing in one go. Very engrossing story too, at least compare to many other similar games. Those usually have daily life and work, and some convoluted drama involved, or nothing at all. This game puts us right at the beginning of big life changes, and positive ones too, and that's pretty awesome.

And I love the big 80s style hair on many of the ladies.

Naming it InCell Phone might make people want it, don't tempt fate!

 

[DramaticDonut]

Can we update version 0.13 today

I just updated the links Enjoy the update!

 

[DramaticDonut]

You meant to write InCell Phone, clearly.

But otherwise I agree with you with regards to Alex. I didn't find her unbearable, but probably more as intended by the author and the way you describe her role.

Generally I was very impressed with the writing in this game. When it first got uploaded here I downloaded and played through the entire thing in one go. Very engrossing story too, at least compare to many other similar games. Those usually have daily life and work, and some convoluted drama involved, or nothing at all. This game puts us right at the beginning of big life changes, and positive ones too, and that's pretty awesome.

And I love the big 80s style hair on many of the ladies.

DressedToThrill
Thanks a lot, mate really appreciate it <3

 

[TapaNaKara]

Just another dev baiting ntr enjoyers into an nts game, at least change the title... And yes, after bait-playing I've read the dev's notes but I think the dev doesn't understand that a good part of people who likes ntr won't come back for later updates since the mc is a cuck who enjoys sharing her, since there are no options to change his inclinations... While there are some who enjoy both ntr and nts, there are also a lot who only enjoy one of them. This is going to my ignore list.

 

[stuffygames]

Jeez, people get really angry if they don't get what they want right away.

 

[JussieSmollett]

Checked this out for the first time. Writing is solid. But... so many games have the gf mess around with some 135 pound twink with a young teen face. There's nothing to be jealous of there... I don't think anyone's worried about the tricks that some 12 year old is going to teach your girl, lol. Perhaps make him or others more masculine, and actually look like a threat or someone who could at least pleasure the gal.

 

[Theadriel]

imagine thinking you have to be muscular, strong and predatory to attract girls.
Newsflash Kpop is popular worldwide because boys bands have effeminate dudes not because of the music.
Also maybe for once the FMC wont fall for the biggest cock and just enjoy another man skills and attention. That would change a bit.

 

[mephistobr]

Unfortunately (or not) I'm not a Kpop loving girl. I don't care about Korean boys, so I have to agree with the previous guy about Jacob's looks. Kinda of immersion breaking not gonna lie.

 

[Theadriel]

Unfortunately (or not) I'm not a Kpop loving girl. I don't care about Korean boys, so I have to agree with the previous guy about Jacob's looks. Kinda of immersion breaking not gonna lie.

You would be surprised about how a larger part of women prefer teddy bear kind of guys to studs or sport freaks that are proven to be potentially players and narcissists. And another part likes what I call 'the artist' stereotype, lean, fragile and sensitive kind of guys. the kind that listen.
What i'm saying is it's not shocking to have this kind of man seducing girls (that are artists by the way) and it's a nice change of pace from the predator, muscular, giant cock (we don't know yet about that actually) trope.

 

[mephistobr]

I'm aware. But I don't think the target audience for this game is women attracted to effeminate boys, is it? That's my point. But I'm glad you liked it. Hard pass for me.

 

[spaceman696]

im all for NTR NTS.. but this phone business... i try stay away from. its seems like a lazy way to dish out content. i dont want to read txt messages back and forth, i do that shat in real life

 

[SoaringClouds]

imagine thinking you have to be muscular, strong and predatory to attract girls.
Newsflash Kpop is popular worldwide because boys bands have effeminate dudes not because of the music.
Also maybe for once the FMC wont fall for the biggest cock and just enjoy another man skills and attention. That would change a bit.

Hate to break it to you, but a lot (if not most) of the guys in male KPop groups are fucking JACKED. The only thing effeminate about them is their clean-shaven face, hair styles, and sometimes their outfits. True, they're not lumberjack "jacked," but they're more jacked than 95% of men on the planet. Personal experience, I've found girls are mostly attracted to well-defined biceps above any other musculature feature, and KPop artists have that (plus abs, lol).

 

[SoaringClouds]

I totally misread the description of the game... I read "aspiring pornstar girlfriend Mina." An entirely different kind of relationship dynamic, lol.

 

[desmosome]

Hey Kristo, good question!

What I mean is that while the game definitely gives you your dose of NTR with Mina (and sometimes the other characters) the core relationship always stays loving and wholesome in between those moments. Especially early on, you shouldn't feel like you’re just being pushed into one-sided NTR without choice or balance.

Just a note. NTS -> NTR is a well know trope for NTR, and if that's the story you want to write for the NTR route, more power to you.

But speaking as a NTR fan that dislikes NTS, I will just say that a lot of players will find a forced NTS start to get into the NTR route a deal breaker. The thing about netorare is that it should be betrayal and corruption focused, and betrayal is most impactful when the male protagonist doesn't deserve it.

For example, gating netorare on Mc being an asshole (cheating first or treating her like crap) is pretty annoying because it gives her a justified reason to stray. In similar vein, the adventurous couple start to netorare is like a self inflicted wound. Like bro, you pushed her to bang other guys and things got out of hand, that's on you mate.

 

[666terror666]

Beginning is great, waiting for updates

 

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[DramaticDonut]

Unfortunately (or not) I'm not a Kpop loving girl. I don't care about Korean boys, so I have to agree with the previous guy about Jacob's looks. Kinda of immersion breaking not gonna lie.

I totally get that. While working on that chapter, I already felt that no matter how Jacob ended up looking, there would probably be people who felt disappointed. Let me quickly explain how I chose his appearance though:

Jacob is meant to fill the role of someone who doesn’t just look like a stereotypical bull. He's around the same age, successful, and a genuinely nice guy - the kind of person who can create tension not only on a physical level but also an emotional one.

Given how Mina is written, she'd never fall for a guy purely because he’s rich or buff. The idea that "she might like him for more than just sex" is an important part of his role in the story.

Of course, there’s more to come - other characters might align more closely with your expectations later on.

Thanks for playing & sharing your opinion though

 

[DramaticDonut]

im all for NTR NTS.. but this phone business... i try stay away from. its seems like a lazy way to dish out content. i dont want to read txt messages back and forth, i do that shat in real life

Totally fair it’s not everyone’s cup of tea! Some games manage to pull it off really well though, creating a surprising amount of immersion though. Especially for NTR/NTS stories. Might be worth giving it a try sometime! Feel free to ask me if you need a good recommendation