kaceylove
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I am surprised this thread only has 7 pages...This is a really great and fun game and deserves more attention and love.
Great writing
Great writing
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poisonbug
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Wasn't trying to accuse or anything. For all i know, thay both could be inspired by some character or something. As for other game, i like plot a lot. It's basically if MC get worst ending, but fate provide him chance to correct mistakes . Great if you into thrill of danger but don't actually wish MC to suffer.I can see the similarity between her and ren
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fair enough, I might have to give it a go then, and try a game outside of my usual genre.
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I love NTR games when they're done right. I hope you keep making this awesome game love you.
Hi Cosmic Poptart I just discovered your game... no, your gem !! What a good work
Do you have plans concerning netorase/sharing ? A path in wich the son will happily watch the mom and Ren being fucked ?
Tank you
Do you have plans concerning netorase/sharing ? A path in wich the son will happily watch the mom and Ren being fucked ?
Tank you
8 / 10
With different visuals, it could be one of the best games on this site.
(v3.5)
Writing is... not what you'd expect looking at these 'low effort' pictures. Certainly not what I was expecting.
It is great.
- Not perfect - there are some problems with the pacing.
...Probably because of non-existent visuals - so everything hot is in the writing. And only writing. Every bit of character building outside of teasing, dirty-talk, and sex-scenes themselves feels like it drags for too long. Precisely because there's nothing to look at during it.
- It's not groundbreaking either - pretty standard NTR tropes for you. Ugly limp-dicked boyfriend, unsatisfied wife.
+ But it is solid. And it is meticulous.
Husband/boyfriend, while ugly and limpdicked - and there won't be any hot sex scenes with them - they are not disgusting. At least they behave like normal, well-balanced, and pleasant people.
Girlfriends/wife, while cheating, they are not disgusting. They are complex, cute, and pleasant to be around. Have interesting past, complicated present, and non-obvious future.
+ Antagonists: not the most intense guys ever, but very meticulous. Don't pull out magic mind-altering machine out of their hat. They have to work for it, plan, and sometimes even fail.
...And I can't remember the last time an ntr antagonist has failed in anything - so yeah, refreshing. Makes the story less predictable.
+ Humor is nice too. Love it.
- Now visuals are... simply horrible.
I don't understand why the author won't just use 3D - Koikatsu or Honey Select if he doesn't have the hardware to render.
It'll literally take less effort, while producing better results.
...Unless he just wants to practice his drawing skills. On us.
Sound:
+ Music's good-ish. At least during sex scenes and intense moments it's great. Normal everyday music could be annoying.
+ There are also some sounds. Blowjob, moaning, and so on. Which is very good. It always adds to the atmosphere and the hotness of the scene.
But.
It's way quieter than the rest of the sounds, for some reason - like the banging of the door that will blow your ears off if you amp your volume for the blowjob.
And it's inconsistent in quality. Which is, I guess, better than nothing at all.
Overall:
Very solid writing that sometimes gives you unexpected curveballs - which is much appreciated in the genre. Feels fresh.
Highly recommend.
And will wait for the author's future works with anticipation. This one included.
//This is my review. Posted here for discussion - cos the review system on this site doesn't allow commenting on it.
With different visuals, it could be one of the best games on this site.
(v3.5)
Writing is... not what you'd expect looking at these 'low effort' pictures. Certainly not what I was expecting.
It is great.
- Not perfect - there are some problems with the pacing.
...Probably because of non-existent visuals - so everything hot is in the writing. And only writing. Every bit of character building outside of teasing, dirty-talk, and sex-scenes themselves feels like it drags for too long. Precisely because there's nothing to look at during it.
- It's not groundbreaking either - pretty standard NTR tropes for you. Ugly limp-dicked boyfriend, unsatisfied wife.
+ But it is solid. And it is meticulous.
Husband/boyfriend, while ugly and limpdicked - and there won't be any hot sex scenes with them - they are not disgusting. At least they behave like normal, well-balanced, and pleasant people.
Girlfriends/wife, while cheating, they are not disgusting. They are complex, cute, and pleasant to be around. Have interesting past, complicated present, and non-obvious future.
+ Antagonists: not the most intense guys ever, but very meticulous. Don't pull out magic mind-altering machine out of their hat. They have to work for it, plan, and sometimes even fail.
...And I can't remember the last time an ntr antagonist has failed in anything - so yeah, refreshing. Makes the story less predictable.
+ Humor is nice too. Love it.
- Now visuals are... simply horrible.
I don't understand why the author won't just use 3D - Koikatsu or Honey Select if he doesn't have the hardware to render.
It'll literally take less effort, while producing better results.
...Unless he just wants to practice his drawing skills. On us.
Sound:
+ Music's good-ish. At least during sex scenes and intense moments it's great. Normal everyday music could be annoying.
+ There are also some sounds. Blowjob, moaning, and so on. Which is very good. It always adds to the atmosphere and the hotness of the scene.
But.
It's way quieter than the rest of the sounds, for some reason - like the banging of the door that will blow your ears off if you amp your volume for the blowjob.
And it's inconsistent in quality. Which is, I guess, better than nothing at all.
Overall:
Very solid writing that sometimes gives you unexpected curveballs - which is much appreciated in the genre. Feels fresh.
Highly recommend.
And will wait for the author's future works with anticipation. This one included.
//This is my review. Posted here for discussion - cos the review system on this site doesn't allow commenting on it.
I disagree totally with abirvg about the visuals. Personally, I love them! The art is unique in it’s own, authentic way and way more appealing to me than another Koikatsu game.
At least we agree that the story is great. I only hope Ren’ storyline will progress as well soon.
At least we agree that the story is great. I only hope Ren’ storyline will progress as well soon.
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Well, there's a third option - he can also use 3D for anatomy references, while preserving what he likes about his style.
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Thanks, honestly in the beginning I did consider making the NV with koikatsu, but there are so many of them now, that they all kinda blend together, stylistically at least, so i wanted mine to have some personality and standout, that and i genuinely enjoy drawing. And although some of the earlier artwork is a little rough admittedly , i do think it's getting better... I hope. And no worries, Ren's story is on the way. promise.
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much appreciated. So I don't wanna say anything specifically in terms of where the plot is going. But I will say something like that is... maybe , possibly, the pipelines.Hi Cosmic Poptart I just discovered your game... no, your gem !! What a good work
Do you have plans concerning netorase/sharing ? A path in wich the son will happily watch the mom and Ren being fucked ?
Tank you
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She had her doubts, and can you blame her?
I guess i was feeling too generous when i designed him
Your art is good enough. Above average among 2D art, because there are some real jank out there. Personally, I think Koikatsu is a poor choice for any corruption based or heavy fetishes. The style is just too cutesy.Thanks, honestly in the beginning I did consider making the NV with koikatsu, but there are so many of them now, that they all kinda blend together, stylistically at least, so i wanted mine to have some personality and standout, that and i genuinely enjoy drawing. And although some of the earlier artwork is a little rough admittedly , i do think it's getting better... I hope. And no worries, Ren's story is on the way. promise.
You are doing a great job with the writting so far. The pacing and development of the plot have all been on that sweet spot where it keeps you wanting for more, while also being interesting enough to not make you want to skip to "get to the good parts". I'll be following this one closely!Thank you, that is very kind of you to say. Honestly, going into this project i knew it was the writing were i wanted to spend the most time and develop it as well as i could. Because in my opinion if the story isn't good, then a lot of the other aspects of the NV suffer too. and you end up just fast forwarding through the boring stuff. That was something i wanted to avoid doing with 'Misanthropy'.
And truth be told, i've always considered myself to be a writer, more than a illustrator or developer. Before a year ago, I had no idea how to use renpy, I had to learn using YouTube videos and forum posts.
What she really think about her bf cock?She had her doubts, and can you blame her?
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I guess i was feeling too generous when i designed him
Hm?She had her doubts, and can you blame her?
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I guess i was feeling too generous when i designed him