I was going to comment, but it looks like it will have to wait for the next update...
When you finish the first day, and Missy tell you that now the free roaming part of the game starts...
You should have it say... the free roaming part of the day.
(Minor note at best)
Characters in a game, or movie, should not know their world is anything but real.
Even if we understand it's not real.
So now, time to update my walkthrough to the new version.
Also, will there be any plans for a relationship with Mary? After you save her from getting beat-up, she seems to have the hots for Missy. (Just a thought.)