Ren'Py Mobile of Desires [Ch.6.46.9] [QuantumBunnyNovels]

[absalon1977]

Spoiler: chat caps

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so for me this texts read like she has a chip implemented in her.

Yeh i noticed this to on my new playthrough on the love path, i have a feeling that saying no to the chip is better for the love path. For me though it was just that segment later the conversation flow as intended discussing not using the chip.

 

[alex870821]

Try starting the game from the beginning, it's a bug left over from the last version

I started over and choose different options. I did not reach again that option where I was stuck

 

[evko]

Author, tell me, who is my girlfriend here? Arnold? Why is he sending me so many photos, almost more than Lucy? In the latest update, there are a bunch of unnecessary photos, but if we follow the NTS path, it would seem that Lucy's important event in the room with the photographer has only one image on her lover's page! Even though she used to take photos of herself regularly before that! Why is the correspondence with Arnold necessary, and the important event is described in a few sentences and without a single photo? How is that possible?

 

[Vampire_Lord]

Author, tell me, who is my girlfriend here? Arnold? Why is he sending me so many photos, almost more than Lucy? In the latest update, there are a bunch of unnecessary photos, but if we follow the NTS path, it would seem that Lucy's important event in the room with the photographer has only one image on her lover's page! Even though she used to take photos of herself regularly before that! Why is the correspondence with Arnold necessary, and the important event is described in a few sentences and without a single photo? How is that possible?

they need to add gay tag now ?

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Author, tell me, who is my girlfriend here? Arnold? Why is he sending me so many photos, almost more than Lucy? In the latest update, there are a bunch of unnecessary photos, but if we follow the NTS path, it would seem that Lucy's important event in the room with the photographer has only one image on her lover's page! Even though she used to take photos of herself regularly before that! Why is the correspondence with Arnold necessary, and the important event is described in a few sentences and without a single photo? How is that possible?

Yes, I have already received several such reviews and will do much less Oscar and Arnold in future versions

This is my first game and I don't know how to do it right, I'm learning blindly. I tried to make the conversation of the characters more lively and visualize it

In the new version (chapter 6), I won't do so many Arnold pics anymore and will make more of a focus on Lucy

 

[java777]

Less chatter with Arnold, more nude photos from Lucy = success
Although, of course, it would be better if the game was only about Netorase. But for now, it's just a waste of time on a bunch of paths that are unclear how to get to. Personally, I poked around randomly and stumbled upon the Netorase path.

 

[stahalle]

Less chatter with Arnold, more nude photos from Lucy = success
Although, of course, it would be better if the game was only about Netorase. But for now, it's just a waste of time on a bunch of paths that are unclear how to get to. Personally, I poked around randomly and stumbled upon the Netorase path.

maybe better for you. i hate netorase so i like that we have path we can choose. and its not so unclear once you know what stat is for what path.

 

[NTR Sommelier]

needs the mobile game tag

 

[evko]

Yes, I have already received several such reviews and will do much less Oscar and Arnold in future versions

This is my first game and I don't know how to do it right, I'm learning blindly. I tried to make the conversation of the characters more lively and visualize it

In the new version (chapter 6), I won't do so many Arnold pics anymore and will make more of a focus on Lucy

But you understand that the scene in the room with her lover on the NTS path is very significant, right? I mean, this is basically Lucy's first time having sex with someone else, which is a very important step for the character, but here it's given no significance at all... It's as if she went to the bathroom, powdered her nose... Here, a few photos are simply necessary, including ones of Lucy and the corresponding dialogue...

Without this, the whole point of such games is simply lost!!!

To be honest, I don't even understand the point of continuing the NTS branch now, because even if such an event is given so little importance here, then all the other events that may happen no longer mean anything to Lucy or the Hero. Such indifference to this scene puts an end to Lucy's relationship with the main character. Since she showed that they simply don't care about each other, it means that all their correspondence is just acting and not real emotions and feelings.

 

[Artist271]

Yes, I have already received several such reviews and will do much less Oscar and Arnold in future versions

This is my first game and I don't know how to do it right, I'm learning blindly. I tried to make the conversation of the characters more lively and visualize it

In the new version (chapter 6), I won't do so many Arnold pics anymore and will make more of a focus on Lucy

it's not just pics, it's pics and even worse so, the abundance of excessive text messages with him.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

it's not just pics, it's pics and even worse so, the abundance of excessive text messages with him.

Yeah, I realized that already, I'll take it into account in the new version. it won't happen again.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

But you understand that the scene in the room with her lover on the NTS path is very significant, right? I mean, this is basically Lucy's first time having sex with someone else, which is a very important step for the character, but here it's given no significance at all... It's as if she went to the bathroom, powdered her nose... Here, a few photos are simply necessary, including ones of Lucy and the corresponding dialogue...

Without this, the whole point of such games is simply lost!!!

To be honest, I don't even understand the point of continuing the NTS branch now, because even if such an event is given so little importance here, then all the other events that may happen no longer mean anything to Lucy or the Hero. Such indifference to this scene puts an end to Lucy's relationship with the main character. Since she showed that they simply don't care about each other, it means that all their correspondence is just acting and not real emotions and feelings.

Thank you for your comment, I will try to take your opinion into consideration

 

[ohhaiguize]

I'd just like to add, although I agree with this point...

But you understand that the scene in the room with her lover on the NTS path is very significant, right?

There is still corruption that can happen after sex in a NTR/S story. I agree more significance should be put on that moment but the depths Lucy can fall too are lower.

 

[evko]

I'd just like to add, although I agree with this point...

There is still corruption that can happen after sex in a NTR/S story. I agree more significance should be put on that moment but the depths Lucy can fall too are lower.

She may fall lower. BUT you understand that after such indifference to the fact that your girlfriend spent her first night with another guy, it doesn't matter anymore, because he doesn't care about her. Just like Lucy, who didn't take a single photo to “report” to the man. Why didn't she? Because she didn't think about him, she didn't care, and all the words about love were nothing more than empty promises. Why didn't the Hero demand more from Lucy? For the same reason, he didn't care anymore. He was busy with useless chatter with Arnold, so he didn't care what Lucy was doing... And in this game, for some reason, the author forgets about the important moments and fills the whole time with chatter that means nothing after such moments. 150 selfies with clothes in places unrelated to the plot, in constantly changing clothes, as if she carries her entire wardrobe with her and absolutely must change clothes every minute. BUT when it comes to the really important moments, that's it. It's good if there are a couple of photos, and even then, not from Lucy, but on her lover's page. In other words, she shows that she doesn't care about the hero, and if the hero doesn't demand it either, then Lucy doesn't care about him either.

If I were the author, I would simply redo the game, focusing on the moments rather than the chatter.

After all, games like this are subtle psychology, where actions mean more than useless phrases like “I love you, you're the best, I'm so lucky to have you...” After such actions, the player stops believing these words, because the actions show the opposite...

 

[Toddy.Berlin]

I like the game concept, but unfortunately, for me, there's too much text with too little content.
And the statistics aren't really helpful, especially since I think the scoring has nothing to do with the answers.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

But you understand that the scene in the room with her lover on the NTS path is very significant, right? I mean, this is basically Lucy's first time having sex with someone else, which is a very important step for the character, but here it's given no significance at all... It's as if she went to the bathroom, powdered her nose... Here, a few photos are simply necessary, including ones of Lucy and the corresponding dialogue...

Without this, the whole point of such games is simply lost!!!

To be honest, I don't even understand the point of continuing the NTS branch now, because even if such an event is given so little importance here, then all the other events that may happen no longer mean anything to Lucy or the Hero. Such indifference to this scene puts an end to Lucy's relationship with the main character. Since she showed that they simply don't care about each other, it means that all their correspondence is just acting and not real emotions and feelings.

Seconded this, on both those nts events there was a severe lack of actual pictures.

Hell, I had to double check the dialogue for a second time just to confirm they did indeed have sex - it was so ambigious from the lack of pics and description.

It's weird that the most revealing pics in some nts setup would come from the silly hornyhub posts - you'd think with a high bond/high corruption relationship Lucy would be sending mc that stuff directly.

 

[Artist271]

Yeah, I realized that already, I'll take it into account in the new version. it won't happen again.

Just don't take our criticisms like saying your dialogue is bad, it's good. It does not fall in the robotic, and/or abridged category.
It's more of a problem with where your priorities lie, so don't be discouraged. Your game isn't bad. You're learning, and are ahead from so many beginners, It tells us that you pick up things faster than average.

 

[stef11]

Yes, that's my mistake, I'll fix it in the new version on September 5th

Didn't fix it in my game unfortunately

 

[terratest]

Try starting the game from the beginning, it's a bug left over from the last version

I just downloaded this and started a new save for the very first time and i ran into this bug

 

[amo658]

is there a way to unlock gallery for android?