Not a bad first start.
Pros: The models are well programmed
The story is decent.
Cons:
There are many strangely worded sentences and the English is all over the place at times.
There are no choices nor options present to choose from... I do not know whether the developer did that intentionally, forgot to add those in, or is waiting until the next version to put them in. IMO, it would be wise for the developer to put in some choices to add alternate paths and possibly endings.
Notes: I am worried that this game will become like so many others I've seen in that the story will just kind of shrivel up and go nowhere.
Pros: The models are well programmed
The story is decent.
Cons:
There are many strangely worded sentences and the English is all over the place at times.
There are no choices nor options present to choose from... I do not know whether the developer did that intentionally, forgot to add those in, or is waiting until the next version to put them in. IMO, it would be wise for the developer to put in some choices to add alternate paths and possibly endings.
Notes: I am worried that this game will become like so many others I've seen in that the story will just kind of shrivel up and go nowhere.