VN Ren'Py Abandoned Molly [Ep. 2] [FoxSmile]

[UncleVT]

Overview:
You are the main hero of Novella. A successful, wealthy person who has everything in his life except one thing - it is a simple happiness and satisfaction. You are tired! Tired of the monotonous world around you, and wallowed in a social daily routine. Your money and influence do not give you a pleasure. Because of the depression that you had on the basis of dissatisfaction with happening, you decided to go to your country house, which you so rarely visit.
This is a great place to clear your brains! To get and understand yourself and your future plans for life.
But it is not so easy, the fate brings you acquaintance with a charming young girl called Molly, who from the beginning of her appearance brings the amazing and bright colors into your life, as well as other guests of your house. And only your decision will affect the outcome of the story. Will you get rid of your monotonous life or even more complicate your role in it!

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Thread Updated: 2019-08-14
Release Date: 2019-08-14
Developer: FoxSmile

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Version: Ep. 2
OS: Windows, Mac
Language: English
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[Tjock]

I hope MC is not the old bald guy

 

[Synthetic DickGirl]

I hope MC is not the old bald guy

From the last pic it doesn't look like it.

 

[Methos23]

I hope MC is not the old bald guy

I hope he is I can relate to his baldness

 

[ltpika]

I hope MC is not the old bald guy

he's the young guy in the last screenshot.

I hope he is I can relate to his baldness

Yeah, the bias against grandpa's is unfair. We live an era where guys pushing 60 can look the way Tom Cruise does. "Girl falls in love with sexy grandpa" could be a whole new genre.

 

[Knox_xx]

So.... Stardew valley

 

[ijako3]

Her face looks like a squirrel in the second pic.

 

[Deleted member 54063]

It's a short one. Renders are average. Engrish isn't great (obviously not their first language). The story is kind of strange and forced.

Nothing special all in all.

 

[Hadley]

Is google translate getting worse?

 

[ArmandoEstebanQuito]

I hope it has NTR >.<

 

[Eerie Entity]

I hope it has NTR >.<

And I hope it doesn't, not every game/story need to have that included in them.

But if this one will, then hopefully it will well and truly be avoidable or optional.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[PoyntFury]

Molly has a big ass forehead, just saying. Also, why is her face bright red in the first screenshot? She looks like she forgot to put sunscreen on her face.

 

[Methos23]

I hope it has NTR >.<

Developer Notes
I want to present my first romantic novel called “Molly”, where you are the main hero.

 

[modo200]

thank you

 

[voyeurkind]

* I already knew it was Engrish from the description. We'll see how bad.

* This exposition dump is way too long.

* The Engrish is almost making this incomprehensible. It's certainly not a fun read.

* As text heavy as this is, it's really important to nail the English.

* MC is sharing a lot with Frank. Seems a little unusual, but whatever.

* This is really verbose. It's okay to allow the pictures to tell part of the story too.

* I don't suppose it's that important, but why does Molly not call Frank "Uncle".

* That's an interesting dress to wear to a business meeting.

* Renders are...okay, I suppose. I'm not an expert.

Finished the content. It's a kinetic novel. and as it's written by a non-Native speaker, it's not exactly fun to read. The renders are okay, but not really particularly impressive--although I do have to give props for Melissa's face. She actually looks late 30's/early 40's.

Anyway, the big problem with this is that it's too wordy and the dev definitely needs to find a translator. It's not a bad idea, but the poor English hurts it a lot. Also, I'm not a big fan of kinetic novels anyway, or at least I don't feel they should be classified as games. If I wanted to read a book, I'd read a book. This isn't lacking in potential, but it's not something I think I'll be following in the future either.

 

[Synthetic DickGirl]

And I hope it doesn't, not every game/story need to have that included in them.

I can agree with that. If anything that fetish is over-represented, if anything netori is needed more. I can't complain too much though because guys wanting to see their wives fucked is /literally/ paying my bills some months.

 

[HorizonD]

Well, the English is hard to read and the textbox could use less transparency because with a light background the text is hardly readable.
I had a tough time to get into the story and the conversations and scenes are feeling so jumpy.
Some reactions are quite weird too.
What's a Nunky? Where does that come from? ^^

 

[Spike81]

and why do this woman always have to Have extra Large Breast ANd Asses?

 

[ILCjr]

This is a good introduction, not great, but good. I would like to suggest that you invest in a program that will make translating the story into english easier, they aren't expensive. I will keep an eye out for the next update, and hope that it will introduce some of the decisions that we can make to begin the paths.