VN Ren'Py Abandoned Molly [Ep. 2] [FoxSmile]

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Mytez

Mytez

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Horrible english aside, I really liked it. It gives me some LwM vibes and now that the game is ending, is good to see a similar one pop up. With a proper proofreader/translator it could be a really good romantic VN.
 
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Horst_Kevin

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Ok.

The Intro isn't the worst i've ever seen, but it needs A LOT of polishing.

Engrish is mostly understandable, but hard to read.

Molly is a Cutie.
Melissa looks good.
Frank seems like a good Guy. I just hope he will NEVER interfere in any Sex-Scenes.

Renders overall are ... hm... ok.
Sadly the best Image in the whole Game is the One at the Main Menu.
There are very much Renders that are grainy, have bad Lighting or the Characters and Inventory look like they are simply put in by Copy+Paste.

The Plot is boring.
 
Baharomont

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Pfff... Short, Ugliest, Not interested Project...
And ofcosue No Sexusual Content for Current Version...
 
Hadley

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I will never understand why some of these weird devs don't get someone to proof-read and fix their broken english. Don't they realize how fucking broken their english is? This is absolute unplayable, if feels like its written by a 3 Year old.

This is the 2nd Episode and its still this complete joke?
 
Trasher2018

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HorizonD said:
Translation from the post above:

Nice game! Looking forward to the update! Molly cool chick. English is really bad if you want me to help you with translation.
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I hope he contacts him ... the game needs every help for its translation it can get ^^
 
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A few problems with this novel. As a few have already mentioned, the grammar itself is really poor, the dev needs to get some proof readers to help with the translation. There is an issue between the text and renders as well. The issue makes it hard to read most of the beach scene. To be honest, I may not keep up with this one, even with the grammatical errors, the story line just does not really draw me in, it is just a poor "Man has big dong, women see big dong, women want big dong" game. There will be those who will disagree with me (You have that right), but, this kind of writing is why so many people laugh at adult games in general.
 
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lionarslan

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Hadley said:
I will never understand why some of these weird devs don't get someone to proof-read and fix their broken english. Don't they realize how fucking broken their english is? This is absolute unplayable, if feels like its written by a 3 Year old.

This is the 2nd Episode and its still this complete joke?
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Judging by the comments in this thread dev is Russian but there's no Russian in this game. Sucks, but understandable.
I have some kind of explanation for "these weird devs", well, at least those who from Russia. They don't know English, they are young, from 14 to 24, they are not poor (or they still feed on their parents) and they are lazy. The latter is kind of national feature, but let's not dwell into that. They played some porn games, heard some dudes whining how much money got people who making such games (in Russian this money x60 due currency exchange course) and decided to do the same. Maybe they seriously don't even suspect what a pain to play games in Engrish or maybe they just don't care about us (i.e. people who can give them money) - the end is the same. Devs think too high for themselves, skip negative reviews ('cause haters gonna hate) and aim for the money.
 
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