Amazing art for the girls, unfortunately the MC is just not appealing at all. You had a chance to make something unique with the art and it being a Human MC, but games with art like this that are NTR, female MC's, or Orc/goblin protags are everywhere. Just look for games with the girls bodies like this that aren't monster/NTR. They don't really exist. Do better pls.
RPGM Monster's Revenge [v.0.1.5] [MrExpiredNoodle]
- Thread starter MrExpiredNoodle
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- Oct 3, 2023
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u do it brother
Sorry for the long comment in advance.
Hi ExpireNoodle, I usually keep my mouth shut but you seem pretty open to feedback and communicative, and I really like this game so I thought I'd share my shitty thoughts/feedback/warning about potential player reaction and some thematic clash I feel is going on.
Let me preface by saying that I'm not Hating and so far(1.4) I love everything that's going on and don't dislike any scenes, and while I do hate NTR I'm fine with it in some games. However I do feel there's some scenes that just don't match the setup/beginning of the game, and are very NTR aligned that could set some players off. I'll go over them from least bad to the most NTR-like scene.
1) The Sailor's girlfriend, nothing wrong with it by itself as it's a classic voyeur scene of a slut getting fucked with potential for the MC to fuck her too, later down the line, the only people that could dislike it are not worth catering to, they don't like any penis other than the MC's going inside any char that appears. However when you look at it with the rest of the scenes there is a pattern that seems to go against what the MC was setup as, I'll go over this at the end.
2) The farmer, obviously I can't be sure what you're planning in the future but so far it seems that her future scene will be a very classic NTR game scene of the player doing everything just so she can fuck someone/something else, with it being made clear that she fucks her horses, although I could be wrong and maybe you plan for us to find a different way to get her horses off and we end up fucking her. Either way I'm looking forward to whatever you have planned, although I know a lot of people, even if they're fine with a slut fucking others before the MC, really dislike when she fucks others after the MC has fucked her, it's seen as light NTR.
3) The Christmas scene, again the same issue as with the potential horse scene of the MC doing everything to setup him fucking a char and her ending up being fucked by others because of reasons, like him sleeping in this case, a fairly classic NTR trope. While I was fine with it and liked how the scene went I know a lot of players could be caught off guard and be big mad about how it goes down. I mean we didn't even end up getting any presents.
4) The Goblin, this is probably the one people are gonna dislike the most as she is on the banner and she was setup super early, but also cause the way her scene has gone so far is straight out of an NTR game. She wrongs the MC and she is setup as having to fuck MC to make amends but he needs her at the store so it doesn't happen, ok maybe later, but then like in NTR games she ends up being fucked by others while MC is off doing other things, chopping wood and fighting monsters, and him coming back just as they finish and being too dense/unaware to put together what just happened while she is covered in cum/pubes/spit. The whole thing is just very NTR coded, again we do the setup to get her to a position to fuck her and in the end don't, but also like those games where a friend gets fucked while the MC is doing something else, it would fit in a game with a wimpy tiny dick Mc who comes home to his bullies crowded around his mom who has pubes all over her face and stinks and he still doesn't get what happened while he wasn't home, doesn't really fit our MC in my opinion. I think most NTR haters are gonna be pissed about it, even I while finding it hot don't think it really matches the games theme/setup which I'll go over now.
So there's 2 things I feel clash with what the first version established, the MC and the tourist slut's husband.
So the husband is clearly established as an uber cuck with him being aware that his wife gets fucked in any town they go to and still being with her, plus his personality just seems like that of a pushover, I just really don't see a character like him then going and cheating on his wife by titfucking a big titty goblin, just seems out of character, maybe in the newer versions it's established that he does it as revenge, but it doesn't seem like it'll go that way.
Now the MC is setup as this giga magic dick that dominates any woman he sees and they want no cock other than his after they've had it, before this update it really didn't seem like he would be someone who would stand on the sidelines while a woman gets fucked, not to mention a woman he knows, but especially he doesn't seem like he would do stuff to help someone(potentially the horse) else fuck a woman he could be fucking himself, that's why I said the sailor girlfriend is fine by itself but combined with other scenes it makes the MC we play as clash with what the beginning set him up as in my opinion. Like I said these scenes I would expect from a game with a wimpy MC, not one with the MC we have. Like with his setup I really thought he would immediately put together what was going on with the goblin and go to town on her, I don't really think he is someone who would have an issue with slight sloppy seconds, he cums enough to cover up anything anyone else had done.
Well there's my shitty and long comment, I wouldn't really change anything as I want to see your vision for this game to the end, just wanted to say my opinion in case it helps, but I think just to save you some headache, while you made it clear in the comment above that there will be some women the MC won't fuck at all, I do think you should somehow make it obvious in game or the top of the thread that there are some NTR like elements in the game, not sure what the best way for that would be, definitely not the netorare tag as there isn't any in this game.
I do hope though that you change your mind and the MC gets scenes with all the women even the ones who get fucked by other men, his dick is too big to not have it dominate everyone/show that no other dick compares to his.
- Feb 18, 2018
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Wow. I'll never be able to write this long. But thank you for taking so much of your time to express your thoughts. But yes, I'm not someone who's comfortable with the idea of whether a game is NTR or not. So don't expect anything that respects its rules.
On the other hand, in my last answer I should have specified that all women will inevitably have a scene with the Hero at some point. Don't worry about that.
Again sorry for that comment being too long, and this one now that I read it over. Hell yeah about MC getting to fuck all women, that honestly "fixes" what I said about him not matching the setup and I can't wait, like I said I really like all scenes so far, even the goblin one which now knowing he will eventually fuck her does make him not going to town on her post tourist bj/titfuck a good domination setup for later.
As for the topic of NTR, like I said none of the scenes came across as NTR to me but I can definitely see others having issues like the comment you originally replied to, and I thought I'd say something cause I've seen far too many promising creators lose all motivation cause of people bitching about scenes being too close to NTR, but you said you're not bothered so I guess it was pointless.
Also I'm sure you have it planned out already, but if you're open to scene suggestions, what could be a good scene is have the dildo slut ride it too hard and break it, opening the opportunity for MC to be of service to her. Or have her be exhausted/ passed out from pleasure and have MC come in and "rejuvenate" her.
And also also thick milfs and gilfs are always an awesome addition to any game.
Welp it sounds like this game is going in a completely different direction than I expected. I expected a monster builds a harem sort of game, even more with the title of revenge. Not a monster cucks himself and watches other people fuck game. When you look at the main character who looks like some sort of horror orc, voyeuristic cuck is not the image what I would expect at all. Good idea, borked execution, misleading title/description. Should went with a different type of protagonist and title if thats the type of game this is.
Edit: RIP goblin girl, that was the character I was most looking forward to. Town cumdumpster isn't an appealing character trait. The farmer girl is already one, why was two needed?
Reading the description and what happens in the game there is basically a disconnect. In my rage at being imprisoned? I'M GOING TO MAKE THIS GOBLIN THE TOWN CUMDUMPSTER AND HELP THIS WOMAN FUCK HORSES! Truly a masterful revenge and rage. What am I even reading. I'm genuinely confused at who this game is supposed to appeal towards at this point.
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honestly I agree man, the only reason I clicked on this was the goblin and the spirt lady at the start.
Main reason I didn't buy this on itch. after I tried the first build I decided to take a wait and see approach. Lets hope the lumberjack isn't gonna be going the same path. still considering dropping this due to the goblin.
Shame, I really loved the art style and wanted to buy it but at least I get to try stuff here before making a purchase, so that's cool
- Dec 1, 2018
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Definitely gets some negative points being in RPGM, it's a shitty engine. However, the game itself is entertaining and pretty funny. The chicks are thicc so that's good, and the whole thing is pretty simple which is welcome for a porn game. Looking forward to more.
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very true, there are thousends of games on here but very few vanilla games that have top notch art. And if the art is ogod its almost always some dealbreaker fetish like ntr or female protag or bestiality.
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would like to support the developer but i'm having error messages with my cards in subscribestar
When I enter the store, the merchant takes me to a group of goblins. At the beginning, he tells me to press OK, but nothing. I play on Android's Joiplay. Does anyone know what button I should configure to be able to evade the blow from the globin girl? Time runs out. Back in the store.
Add an option to hide dialog. It gets in the way and it's annoying.