VN Ren'Py Moonripple Lake [v0.51] [BCG]

[Aqua Orchid]

Here's one of the shots that I had to cut:

 

[HoM11]

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Judging by his expression, Anon is wondering the same thing.

 

[SinisterPortal]

What strikes me more is that she'll date him ALONE. I would have find some logic in the MC and here both exploring NTS's experiences together before a swinger life. And I'm not convinced in the "we do it so Drago has more confidence in his life" 's trope. This mix between sexual philanthropy and NTS is very akward to me. I hope there will be twists to recreate tension.
Cee from the get go, is only a character meant to allow this setting for sexual philanthropy and swinging moves, as the MC's gf pushes it.

I always think the threesome scene with drago was a great work, but I'm a bit confused the couple would fall for trivial swinger activities with not much tension. So I hope, it was not the apex of this really good NTS couple. Maybe I'm wrong and the better is coming.

I think she'll make calls or text Anon in real time about whether she should proceed with this and that, she's a clever girl you know, she knows how to make it so that Anon got the most excitement. Just remember how she played at the dinner. She's a pro at teasing.

 

[fabulous007]

I think she'll make calls or text Anon in real time about whether she should proceed with this and that,

I may be the only one but honestly I don't like that trope, unless it's just like one or two texts. Sending too much texts asking for stuff in real time makes the situation on the female side look surreal (to me). But yeah that's probably what will happen.
But the photos she'll make will be fun.

 

[b4b4r76]

I think she'll make calls or text Anon in real time about whether she should proceed with this and that, she's a clever girl you know, she knows how to make it so that Anon got the most excitement. Just remember how she played at the dinner. She's a pro at teasing.

Clever is good to get a good job in your life. But it won't never replace experience. And in this complex field precisely. You don't get a pro from the get go at doing things with multi-layered contradictory needs, because your clever and you get a plan. I don't want the MC's gf acts like a reskined nerd. It needs something more to create realistic characters.
One exception is if the clever character has to pay his mistakes, which is realistic. But not the elder super clever characters doing perfect and not facing complexity of relationships the harsh way.

 

[SinisterPortal]

Sending too much texts asking for stuff in real time makes the situation on the female side look surreal (to me). But yeah that's probably what will happen.

Come on, Banana's writing and set-ups have been great so far, gotta have some trust in our dude! The only part I would call a bit off was when Drago's mom suddenly jumps on the MC's dick - felt more like fan service than something that fits naturally into the story, but who knows maybe that'll get explained later. Aside from that, the characters' actions, dialogue and motivations have been really well done and I don't think Suzie's date will be any less immersive or erotic

 

[VoyeurRed]

Can we talk about side characters?!

I wanna see more action with some of them in the game, like how Anon tells Suzie something like "thought we'd visit again" if you go back to the bum after you let Suzie get her snatch eaten. I'd like to see them invite him over or something ya know? And will we ever see that cake having librarian hottie again?? Then there's red and her bullshiz, damn I love that hot demon! But I wanna see what happens story wise with her as well as hoping she gets some capital D!!!! And can we not forget the clerk girl from the store....gotta let Anon hit that too!!! And my final 2cents on this thought process tonight is..... Suzie with the black neighbor.....that's gotta happen!!!! Idc if people don't want the stereotype BBC trope in this game, based on what Anon said in the shower about "wanting to see Suzie get stuffed" I'd say Anon would be quite ok with seeing Suzie take the bbc challenge....hell maybe it could be Suzie and Cee slurping chocolate pole together!!!

Anyway love everything so far BananaCreamGames and can't wait to get the update 2weeks after everyone else lol

 

[b4b4r76]

gotta have some trust in our dude!

We are just discussing how the story works for each others. So Trust with the dev is not a topic here, they'll do what they want anyway.

 

[HoM11]

Clever is good to get a good job in your life. But it won't never replace experience. And in this complex field precisely. You don't get a pro from the get go at doing things with multi-layered contradictory needs, because your clever and you get a plan. I don't want the MC's gf acts like a reskined nerd. It needs something more to create realistic characters.
One exception is if the clever character has to pay his mistakes, which is realistic. But not the elder super clever characters doing perfect and not discovering complexity of relationships.

I apologize beforehand if I misrepresent your position, but, from your posts here and other threads, it seems like you want this story heavily focused on MCs emotional turmoil, doubts and insecurities at every step of sharing his gf. How it is a monumental shift in their relationship, how both of them have contradictory needs (both within themselves and compared to each other), how it presents new potential obstacles and pitfalls, etc. Sometimes I get the vibe that you want Anon to feel like a cuckold without necessarily calling him that way. And that every deviation from this "essence of pure NTS" formula, be it adding other partners for Anon or more lighthearted tone, free from negative consequences of opening up a relationship, lessens the experience for you (which is a perfectly valid feeling).

And I would ask: don't you think you're expecting a bit too much from a porn game, albeit a really-really good one? At the end of the day I think most of us (can I get a show of hands? non-dominant ones, please, if you're busy) came here to fap to Suzie getting fucked by Anon and others. It doesn't have to be so realistic and full of conflicting emotions, that would be common irl. It just has to avoid things like bad dialogue and wooden characters (my example would be games by MiZtyl and Captain Kitty), what you call "trivial swinging activities" (Suzie fucking random strangers, like a pizza delivery boy, taxi driver, gym instructor, etc. every other day, like in The Adventurous Couple). If we take it seriously, then the very first sharing scene of Anon asking Suzie to show her tits to 4 mover guys would end up on r/AmIOverreacting and reddit would - justifiably - tell Suzie to dump him.

I am on the opposite side of the fence in that I don't feel like there needs to be more "tension" in the sharing part (we already have the whole plot with Merryn trying to seduce Anon) and that letting Anon have fun with Cee somehow "dilutes" the sharing Suzie experience. Even if Suzie gets full freedom to act from Anon, there are opportunities for BananaCreamGames to get Anon and us excited because we still won't know what she does in each case and, more importantly, how she does it. Judging by the Drago massage scene, that woman enjoys embracing the role and doing a full-on performance for Anon. Which a lot of sharing games are lacking.

 

[b4b4r76]

I am on the opposite side of the fence in that I don't feel like we need more "tension" in the sharing part (we already have the whole plot with Merryn trying to seduce Anon)

I'm totally ok you are at the opposite side of the fence. Different individuals equals different tastes and needs.
Maybe less agree with the WE. We are sharing here you and me only our own individual tastes, we can't speak as an army of us.

 

[HoM11]

I'm totally ok you are at the opposite side of the fence. Different individuals equals different tastes and needs.
Maybe less agree with the WE. We are sharing here you and me only our own individual tastes, we can't speak as an army of us.

Oh, that was just a poor choice of words. I will change it to "there needs to be".

 

[HoM11]

Then there's red and her bullshiz, damn I love that hot demon! But I wanna see what happens story wise with her as well as hoping she gets some capital D!!!!

In my playthrough, given the option, she will be denied at every opportunity and isn't getting any.

 

[el diablo rojo]

Come on, Banana's writing and set-ups have been great so far, gotta have some trust in our dude! The only part I would call a bit off was when Drago's mom suddenly jumps on the MC's dick - felt more like fan service than something that fits naturally into the story, but who knows maybe that'll get explained later. Aside from that, the characters' actions, dialogue and motivations have been really well done and I don't think Suzie's date will be any less immersive or erotic

I agree. Everything has been great but that scene with Drago's Mom seemed a little forced. What would happen if Drago found out about his Mom and Anon? How would he react? Maybe he feels less concerned about how Anon will react about his love for Suzie and really gives it to her. Right now Anon feels like Drago is pretty harmless but wouldn't it be great if he had a dark side and started on a mission to take Suzie away from him?

 

[SinisterPortal]

In my playthrough, given the option, she will be denied at every opportunity and isn't getting any.

A fellow teasing enjoyer! I'm also doing only-teasing playthrough. Seeing how people demand hardcore cucking stuff I hope that the dev will keep the only-teasing path avail

 

[Justaphase]

I agree. Everything has been great but that scene with Drago's Mom seemed a little forced. What would happen if Drago found out about his Mom and Anon? How would he react? Maybe he feels less concerned about how Anon will react about his love for Suzie and really gives it to her. Right now Anon feels like Drago is pretty harmless but wouldn't it be great if he had a dark side and started on a mission to take Suzie away from him?

How can the Esme blowjob be forced if you're given the option to refuse? You can easily "Excuse yourself" and the MC will walk away and go back to Suzie.

 

[el diablo rojo]

Can we talk about side characters?!

I wanna see more action with some of them in the game, like how Anon tells Suzie something like "thought we'd visit again" if you go back to the bum after you let Suzie get her snatch eaten. I'd like to see them invite him over or something ya know? And will we ever see that cake having librarian hottie again?? Then there's red and her bullshiz, damn I love that hot demon! But I wanna see what happens story wise with her as well as hoping she gets some capital D!!!! And can we not forget the clerk girl from the store....gotta let Anon hit that too!!! And my final 2cents on this thought process tonight is..... Suzie with the black neighbor.....that's gotta happen!!!! Idc if people don't want the stereotype BBC trope in this game, based on what Anon said in the shower about "wanting to see Suzie get stuffed" I'd say Anon would be quite ok with seeing Suzie take the bbc challenge....hell maybe it could be Suzie and Cee slurping chocolate pole together!!!

Anyway love everything so far BananaCreamGames and can't wait to get the update 2weeks after everyone else lol

Great stuff! When I was free roaming earlier in the game I met a really cute girl with a really FAT ASS on the pier near the ferris wheel. Anyone else encounter her and her big lug of a boyfriend? When she teased Anon with that booty she immediately went to the top of my list. Shop girl and librarian are a close second for me.

 

[HoM11]

Great stuff! When I was free roaming earlier in the game I met a really cute girl with a really FAT ASS on the pier near the ferris wheel. Anyone else encounter her and her big lug of a boyfriend? When she teased Anon with that booty she immediately went to the top of my list. Shop girl and librarian are a close second for me.

Yeah, her poor bf just can't see the benefits of having such a "slutty" tease of a gf. Too bad for him.

 

[HoM11]

A fellow teasing enjoyer! I'm also doing only-teasing playthrough. Seeing how people demand hardcore cucking stuff I hope that the dev will keep the only-teasing path avail

Well, it's more of a particular case of "don't stick your dick in crazy". In this case "crazy" being an evil demon bitch. But more importantly, she was a bitch to Suzie who, being a kind girl that she is, tried to be nice to her. Even told Merryn how she liked her tits after her shit talk. So nope, no one who is mean to Suzie gets anything from my Anon.

 

[el diablo rojo]

How can the Esme blowjob be forced if you're given the option to refuse? You can easily "Excuse yourself" and the MC will walk away and go back to Suzie.

When I mean "forced" I mean out of place in such a great story. The first time Suzie and he go out somewhere that happens? Of course I let Esme "relieve the pressure" but the guy walks into a store and in a few seconds he's getting blown by the shopkeeper seems like a plot line from a bad porno movie.

 

[Justaphase]

Well, it's more of a particular case of "don't stick your dick in crazy". In this case "crazy" being an evil demon bitch. But more importantly, she was a bitch to Suzie who, being a kind girl that she is, tried to be nice to her, even told Merryn how she liked her tits after her shit talk. So nope, no one who is mean to Suzie gets anything from my Anon.

Oh I'm definitely having a save where I stick my dick in crazy Merynn. Damn the consequences. She's smoking hot!

When I mean "forced" I mean out of place in such a great story. The first time Suzie and he go out somewhere that happens? Of course I let Esme "relieve the pressure" but the guy walks into a store and in a few seconds he's getting blown by the shopkeeper seems like a plot line from a bad porno movie.

If you feel like it's out of place then don't allow it to happen and it won't happen.