slightchance
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- Mar 25, 2018
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This update was kinda all over the place. The near death experience in the dungeon destroyed the flow IMO and gave the trio ample reason to get the fuck out of there for good. But instead of going to the police they just had fun afterwards like nothing ever happened.
The dungeon was handled poorly. They should have just pretended to have their way with her after MC/Silas laughed at them for threatening his life, only to find out MC is also getting a boner since he's into sharing (or Suzie being too compliant to make it a real threat). Thus making the red devil the only viable option to squeeze the truth out of him without actually hurting him themselves. Why? So it's not clear what their agenda is and how far they would actually go. There is no reason for Suzie do go willingly spread her legs now to find out more about the cult after that horrible experience.
Also, too bad Silas is not available to perform as Tom anymore. This was an idea I really liked. Could have lead to some exciting scenes, e.g. have Suzie toy with him once she feels him switching in to enjoy a doubled stamina and/or different pace.
The dungeon was handled poorly. They should have just pretended to have their way with her after MC/Silas laughed at them for threatening his life, only to find out MC is also getting a boner since he's into sharing (or Suzie being too compliant to make it a real threat). Thus making the red devil the only viable option to squeeze the truth out of him without actually hurting him themselves. Why? So it's not clear what their agenda is and how far they would actually go. There is no reason for Suzie do go willingly spread her legs now to find out more about the cult after that horrible experience.
Also, too bad Silas is not available to perform as Tom anymore. This was an idea I really liked. Could have lead to some exciting scenes, e.g. have Suzie toy with him once she feels him switching in to enjoy a doubled stamina and/or different pace.