Technically speaking, this was a very fun and ambitious update. Animations, transitions, so much polish, it doesn't even feel like a Ren'Py game! But... and of course there's always a but, I agree with the other poster who said it feels like the game is being stretched a bit too thin.
At the end of the day, I'm here to see how Suzie's relationship with MC gets bent out of the traditional monogamy shape (i.e. I'm a firm NTR/NTS enjoyer). I get that means having to have long winded introductions for other characters and backstories that allow them to naturally get a piece of Suzie's pie... but I don't really enjoy the time spent with them.
Silas and the vampire(?) stuff is kinda... I don't really care much about, to be honest. The bar stuff? I'm only interested because Trevor can be another dude for Suzie to mess around with.
Even the rich asshole on the beach from a couple updates back... I'm a little interested because he seems to be the only one who can switch up the power dynamic of MC being king of the castle, because, well, he's the MC, and that kinda feeling of despair, stealing your gf kinda thing is pretty hot in an NTR/NTS game.
Regardless of my own personal qualms with it, this is still a fantastic work in progress, and it's clear to see how much effort and love the dev is putting into it. I just hope that subsequent updates focus a little more on the meat and cheese, instead of the condiments and garnish.