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Have you read what the patch do... It correct grammar, punctuation and typos !View attachment 2880457 View attachment 2880457 Applayed new patch , fix but nothing new for me ... after this is The End
It does not add a new scene. The End is The End for now.
There is a work in progress for other's new scenes in the internal description of the game.
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If you start from a save at the end of the 2.7.0, you clearly not seeing the modifications.
There is at least 2 new animations when they come back to the car after the Sophia dream.
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Motel i-Patch finally updated
To have the full translations, you need my fix from here
Save to [game folder] \game
Feel free to report any miss or error
To have the full translations, you need my fix from here
Save to [game folder] \game
Feel free to report any miss or error
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Totaly useless... It's not a classical game and much more a kinetic novel.
And if you want to see the new content in next update, you probably have to start at the act 5
With the 2.8.2, you have to start at the act 3 scene 1 to see the first new scene
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Ok ? why is it that at the top right corner over the screen it keeps showing the Game/script.rpy:8 and so on why playing? it changes as u play showing the acts screen number but its always there. How do i get it to go away
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Under the new tagging its
| 179 | netorare | ✏ | A love interest has sexual contact with someone else without the approval of the protagonist, either voluntarily or from some form of coercion (eg, drugs, mind control, blackmail, rape). If the later, add the relevant coercion tag too | Renamed from ntr |
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a good and exciting beginning and development of the mother-son family, which then for some reason took a wrong turn. into some fantasies, dreams and other incomprehensible mysticism.
I will give a well-deserved like to the author for an exciting start.
I will give a well-deserved like to the author for an exciting start.
Okay I did see those I didn't realize those were new. I was expecting more (continuation of the story line). I unlike a lot of other people happen to like the story and will keep up with it as long as the developer keeps updating it.
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2.8.2 isn't so much an update to the story but adding a little animation to a storyline that already existed in the last version. I started fresh clean start and pretty much ended up were I left off in 2.7 except for those animations that if you blinked you would have missed it is not imo much of an update but I seen worse where an update was grammatical fixes with nothing added and called a new update.
Anyone Can create a link for version 2.8.2 apk other mixdrop please
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I enjoyed the premise of the story. FINALLY, I said to myself, Dylan was going to hit that (meaning Sophia). Most of the story was good, near Great UNTIL, the dream sequences. Then I'm like.....Wtf???? If it hadn't been for that, I was willing to overlook the minor flaws of the story but now I have to point them out.
Where was the set-up for the salesman and motel owner's rape scene? That part came out of left field for me. I kind of got the hint that something with the salesman would happen when Dylan paused with Sophia when he thought that he heard/saw something. There should have been a bit of descriptive sinister dialogue where the salesman and the motel owner were talking between each other in the lobby with Dylan and Sophia present. Maybe something like, "The owner and the salesman both took quick glances at the couple then exchanged knowing glances and barely perceptible smiles, hinting of a possible interesting evening for the pair." I feel that a simple line like that would not have detracted from the story. In fact, it could have solidified the anticipation of the story without necessarily giving away the rape scene that came up later.
Another point was, during the rape scene, there was dialogue that hinted that Dylan would be raped as well but there were no illustrations to that end. I kind of get Sophia's dream sequence because it showed what was happening to her as she was dreaming. It was her subconscious trying to wake her. Also, that scene should have been a bit more extensive where we got to see all of what the men were doing to her. There was a line of conversation between the two men of what they had planned for Sophia. We should have seen that. I felt that we were robbed of that. As far as Dylan was concerned, without the Dylan rape scene and subsequent hint at the end where Dylan and Sophia are trying to figure out what happened to them, the whole dream sequences fell flat. I'm hoping that when this story is remastered, that those things are corrected. Plus, don't let the story end with a suggested sex scene. Give us an extended scene where the pair are going at it furiously along the roadside, maybe even add a couple of frames where a couple of cars are passing by as they do so. The scene should end with them riding in the car talking about their futures together as a couple. Like I said, this is a good story but hopefully, these suggestions could make it great.
Where was the set-up for the salesman and motel owner's rape scene? That part came out of left field for me. I kind of got the hint that something with the salesman would happen when Dylan paused with Sophia when he thought that he heard/saw something. There should have been a bit of descriptive sinister dialogue where the salesman and the motel owner were talking between each other in the lobby with Dylan and Sophia present. Maybe something like, "The owner and the salesman both took quick glances at the couple then exchanged knowing glances and barely perceptible smiles, hinting of a possible interesting evening for the pair." I feel that a simple line like that would not have detracted from the story. In fact, it could have solidified the anticipation of the story without necessarily giving away the rape scene that came up later.
Another point was, during the rape scene, there was dialogue that hinted that Dylan would be raped as well but there were no illustrations to that end. I kind of get Sophia's dream sequence because it showed what was happening to her as she was dreaming. It was her subconscious trying to wake her. Also, that scene should have been a bit more extensive where we got to see all of what the men were doing to her. There was a line of conversation between the two men of what they had planned for Sophia. We should have seen that. I felt that we were robbed of that. As far as Dylan was concerned, without the Dylan rape scene and subsequent hint at the end where Dylan and Sophia are trying to figure out what happened to them, the whole dream sequences fell flat. I'm hoping that when this story is remastered, that those things are corrected. Plus, don't let the story end with a suggested sex scene. Give us an extended scene where the pair are going at it furiously along the roadside, maybe even add a couple of frames where a couple of cars are passing by as they do so. The scene should end with them riding in the car talking about their futures together as a couple. Like I said, this is a good story but hopefully, these suggestions could make it great.
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Bro, unless your game is designed for NTR from the get go to attract the people that like it, don't even bother thinking about inserting it in. It will just be a waste of time.
What's NTR got to do with it? I neither mentioned it nor suggested it. My suggestions were for the Players to see as part of the story. If you recall, if you played the game, both Dylan and Sophia were drugged when that event happened. There could be no NTR in that scene the way it was written and portrayed.
What's up with the code being displayed in the upper left corner? Talk about a script kiddie mistake. Does no one ever check what they code BEFORE they publish it?
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You have to replace the "True" by "False" line 20 in the [game folder]\game\options.rpy
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I'm asking your advice.
Do you think it's a good idea if I ad music and sounds in this gem ?
Do you think it's a good idea if I ad music and sounds in this gem ?