You are now my favorite NTR artist. Also, you are correct about the writing it's all about invoking those feelings.
I Unlocked everything, even the secrets with your tips. (They were too hidden imo).
For my feedback as a cultured NTR enjoyer, I think some of the scenes didn't blend too well, as the player I felt that some times the actions of the mother were too unreasonable, however, they were overall pretty well constructed. For you as the writer, having the personality and reasoning of the characters before hand some times may cause you to not see a lack of hints some scenes needed before hand. You stated on a post that the reason to why the mother corrupts so fast are the happenings before the game, but for the players unknown to this fact before hand, seems like a break of character. Maybe it was wrong of us to assume the mother was pure to begin with? Regardless, I think it's pretty hot watching a pure mother get corrupt while the main character is unaware.
Making the choices a little bit more obvious can help players understand the impact of their actions better. Some were really good, like the gym one. Others not so much, specifically, not believing Ron's child.
I give this game 10/10. It is simply beyond expectations even as a unfinished product.
I really believe you have talent for this, and the game will undoubtedly blow up.
Thank you very much for having the vision and trying to teach how netorare should be made. NTRman and other artists sometimes have the approach of showing the mother scenes, this increases the "smoothness" between the scenes but decreases the immersion as the main character. Rannero does this really well by making the heroine the main character instead.
Considering the art, I think it's good enough, you knew that the characters emotions were important and did it correctly. You have great artistic view.
Considering the meta jokes, I think they didn't break immersion too much, but removing them would be better. I think the writing is good enough to not need out of character or 4th wall segments.
Here are some routes I would like to see added in the future:
Motherly love route, where they get a good relation ship. It should branch into incest or denial. Pizza, games and going out together should be the main events, just a lot wholesome stuff to build to her likeness and good mother feelings. He should get cucked regardless.
Evil route, where her personality changes to hate James. It should branch into masochism towards the son or hate for getting in the way of her pleasure. Main events should include; slaps, starvation, deterioration of James' physical condition, locking her son outside regardless of the raging storm to have sex, disregard for his bullying. Also, reinforcing the bully behaviour of James' perpetrators by fulfilling their desires is *Chefs Kiss*.
Jealously route, where James comes to love her and tries to get her for himself and start getting in the way. Doesn't need to be related to the evil route, but does blend well.
Pure route, where James win and she doesn't have sex with other man. I wonder what happens when nature calls.
Incest route, should be self explanatory, I don't care too much for this one, but could be good for replayability.
Dark cult route? Is it already implemented? Evil moms are just too cool.
Blacked route.
Scat route? It's hated, but I think it's nice.
Other considerations:
Good passage of time can be key, maybe her jobs don't need to be on a daily basis?
The English mistakes are a bit confusing, easily fixed with fan slaves working for you and fixing grammar.
Controlling the mother's personality thru the choices is very nice.
I understand most of the issue
TL;DR
10/10
Man!, I liked this game.
It's clear you like the genre and know your stuff.
Best regards,
Taiga#9712.