That was pretty good as a short story, but the corruption progression is too fast if it's part of a long story arc. Not really sure what the direction will be. It looks like there will be a lot of different routes with different jobs the mom can take. It seems like the updates will concentrate on pushing one of the routes at a time. It's a good plan, but I just wonder how long each individual route will be. The current slave route for Mr. Ron is basically 50-70% of the way into a typical corruption arc. She's under the long lasting drug effects, but we could consider that she is basically fallen already. With this projection, I guess this route could be completed in the next update or 2.