I don't mind the story and dialogue too much, even though most of it is ridiculous & repetitive. What really annoys me about all this developer's games is the son character that always seems to be present. The kid is just plain annoying, and doesn't ever seem to follow a consistent frame of logic. If i had my wish, i would get rid of the stupid kid, and allow these beautiful ladies to enjoy their journeys. Ok, if there were one or two situations involving a protective son, that's fine I guess. But every time things are heating up in this VN, there is an irritating interruption featuring the rambling misguided thoughts, actions, or speech of this dumb kid that just ruins the mood. Maybe it's just me, and everyone else is ok. But sheesh...