Janiclybi

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Jan 4, 2019
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Hey everyone, can you guys please tell me what I'm doing wrong? It's Chapter 3, the premium version (as stated). The file size is supposed to be 4.48 GB, but it only downloads 4.2 GB. Can someone explain to a non-techy guy why the final part is missing? I just want to see the final scene, but it always cuts off right where they start to close the boy's eyes. Maybe someone can share a proper link?"
 
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FutaQuimera

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Sep 8, 2023
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Does this game have sex scenes, or is it just another waste of time like the first one, which didn't have sex scenes for those who weren't on Patreon?
 

Saint Blackmoor

It's Symbolic Of Course
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Oct 26, 2017
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It could have been a good story, but there are many issues. Incorrect pronouns abound. The worst (for me) is the repeating inner thoughts; a good amount of the dialogue is basically the same. 1/3 of the dialogue could be removed without changing the story. The Foal's inner dialogue is past ludicrous. Many spelling and grammar issues.
 
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DSM010

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I don't mind the story and dialogue too much, even though most of it is ridiculous & repetitive. What really annoys me about all this developer's games is the son character that always seems to be present. The kid is just plain annoying, and doesn't ever seem to follow a consistent frame of logic. If i had my wish, i would get rid of the stupid kid, and allow these beautiful ladies to enjoy their journeys. Ok, if there were one or two situations involving a protective son, that's fine I guess. But every time things are heating up in this VN, there is an irritating interruption featuring the rambling misguided thoughts, actions, or speech of this dumb kid that just ruins the mood. Maybe it's just me, and everyone else is ok. But sheesh...
 

xxxshadowmaster

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Jul 25, 2023
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Hello everyone,

I'm shadowmaster.

Thank you to all the fans who show interest in my game.

I’ve noticed that some content meant to be exclusive to supporters is being shared on this forum.
I am a developer who continues making games entirely thanks to fan support. This support is essential for me to keep developing my projects and releasing new content.


When supporter-only content is publicly shared, it seriously harms that support system. To be honest, if this continues, I will unfortunately not be able to keep developing my games.


I kindly ask you not to share exclusive versions or mods that are intended only for supporters.
Please respect both the supporters who contribute and the effort behind the development.


Thank you for your understanding and support.
 

only MILF

Conversation Conqueror
Dec 30, 2020
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Hello everyone,

I'm shadowmaster.

Thank you to all the fans who show interest in my game.

I’ve noticed that some content meant to be exclusive to supporters is being shared on this forum.
I am a developer who continues making games entirely thanks to fan support. This support is essential for me to keep developing my projects and releasing new content.


When supporter-only content is publicly shared, it seriously harms that support system. To be honest, if this continues, I will unfortunately not be able to keep developing my games.


I kindly ask you not to share exclusive versions or mods that are intended only for supporters.
Please respect both the supporters who contribute and the effort behind the development.


Thank you for your understanding and support.
Sorry. I don't know English well. Your rating is 20 out of 10.... :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: .... fy1J.gif
 
1.80 star(s) 12 Votes