Just an observation...
The number of girls are growing in leaps and bounds. So far I have no complaints as they are introduced into the story well, and in meaningful and interesting ways, and they have stories and backgrounds to them--they are not cardboards with pretty faces.
What I'm trying to say is right now you have quality that is keeping up with quantity. Which is great. But I fear you might not be able to keep up the pace. In which case please remember "quality over quantity" is always best.
The number of girls are growing in leaps and bounds. So far I have no complaints as they are introduced into the story well, and in meaningful and interesting ways, and they have stories and backgrounds to them--they are not cardboards with pretty faces.
What I'm trying to say is right now you have quality that is keeping up with quantity. Which is great. But I fear you might not be able to keep up the pace. In which case please remember "quality over quantity" is always best.