VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Motherless [v0.22.1.0] [Mr.Mister]

Edit: this game should have wrapped up quite some time ago and while i don't have any particluar problems with the dev continuing to add hot chicks to the game, the bloat drags it down a bit, hence the loss of a star.

Do you want to help Sunny rip through an entire town of women with his Godzilla cock? Yes, yes you do. Another crazy bang fest. The story is fine for a porn if a bit convoluted. You can tell English is a second language here but it never gets in the way of comprehension. The story is more soap opera melodrama than straight up bad. But your here for the banging and there is a lot of it and it's pretty good. Models are a bit stylized but look good. Definitely play this game.

Wow, that was pretty bad. From the banner and pictures, I thought that this game would suck ass because the main character and all the female characters looked weird, boring, or unattractive. But I gave the game a try anyway because incest is one of my biggest fetishes and I've played hundreds of adult games and wanted to try something new. I didn't like the MC's looks at all, but i tried to get past that. There were a lot of super hot females in the game but the sex scenes did nothing for me. My arousal level from 1-10 was a 1. In fact, the hottest scenes might have been with the 85 year old grandma, which is sad considering all the young hot women, but even grandma couldn't give me an erection. This is a game that I am happy to uninstall and delete and I wouldn't recommend it to anyone. I would never play this game again, even if it goes from Chapter 6 to Chapter 20 and there is a ton of new content. It just plain sucks.

The premise of the mom forcefully removing her toddler from her best friend and dropping him off with a dude she barely knows so that the mc can attend this random school and "grow up and be a good person" based on ONE conversation over coffee *deep breath* is so utterly ridiculous that I almost wish I could give the game 0 stars. What kind of mother would do that to her son without any research into the school or without at least talking to the best friend to see if what the husband said was true? The dumbest part is that she never followed up with the school. The fact that the husband would rather drop a three-year-old off at a boarding school to get molested instead of simply asking the mom to take back the son is also head-scratching. If Gissell is an attorney, why wouldn't she press charges against the boarding school? Why wouldn't she and Kelly help the mc find his mom since that was the reason he escaped the school in the first place?

If you can swallow that abysmal backstory, the dialogue is serviceable and the girls are decently attractive. But they're oh so stupid. Haruka fucks the mc after minutes of meeting him; there's no choice to turn her down, no inner conflict that mc has of fucking the first girl he meets on a plane after leaving his long-time girlfriend behind and "promising" to call her after he lands. Moon, this chick who was supposed be dating the mc for five years now and has known him for 10, has no problem with the mc leaving for 3 months all of a sudden. Evangeline basically rapes the mc while he's in the bathtub.

On animations: They don't do much for me. They're sharp and the frame rate is okay, but the movements are robotic and clunky.

Nitpicks:
-We don't need to be constantly made aware of the ethnicity of a character
-In-game sounds are cringe
-Why does Haruka use so many Japanese words during her first time talking to the whitest dude (mc) on the plane?
-You'd think that a boy who spent his childhood and early adolescence in a monastery would be either pro or anti religion, but the mc never brings it up.
-Did the dev use Microsoft Paint to write the in-game menu options? I get the interest in personalization, but you can just download fonts that would work much better as a "handwritten" option.
-The mc picks up Valerie and thinks to himself "she's light as a feather" but also says he's "exhausted" carrying her to the bedroom. Either he's not as strong as he thinks or she's not that light.
-The dev went out of his way to give Helga, the maid, massive drooping cleavage. But given her age and sag, it's a turnoff to me personally.
-If Valerie was knocked up once while she was high on sleeping pills, why would she not divorce her husband? Especially after her dad had a heart attack arguing about this issue. How do you let that happen to you twice? And that's legitimately rape, so idk why he wasn't arrested or she didn't report even tho she "hates men" now.
-The way Gaylord is reported to have died cuz of "looking for a lost key and then drowning" is a lazy way to kill him off.
-If Mirella is spying on the mc, why is she talking to herself? Wouldn't she want to be quiet to not get caught?
- I despise "game overs". When Eva comes onto you in the bathtub, why are you punished for giving in? Don't give us a choice if you're going to punish us with a game- over based on that one choice.

I can go on and on with the nitpicks. It's a poorly executed game in its current state. If you can play without associating any logic or common sense to it, then yea it's playable, particularly if the sex scenes are ironed out. I could go lower but certainly not above 2 stars.

This is my first impression for Motherless [Ch.6].

The premise is serviceable. As long as it makes some level of sense, the amount of convenient plot elements is not an issue. It's admittedly fun to see the developer lampshade how convenient the plot is as well. Plot's simple: You got a new job and must now have sex with local women without going Oedipus Rex. Shouldn't be hard right? Considering how you actually have some idea of who the MC's mother is. Acceptable breaks from reality are obviously, acceptable. It's not like we all come here to simultaneously masturbate and overthink. I must however point out the dialogue sounded quite awkward, if not downright cringeworthy.

The girls are attractive for obvious reasons (with exceptions), there isn't much to complain yet. What bothers me is how Haruka and the MC were portrayed: Starting with Haruka. I'm sure porn game players are no stranger to Asian characters in porn games. What bothers me is how Haruka - apart from speaking gratuitous Japanese - sounded like a porn star with a fetish for Americans. It's fine if this is her actual characterization, but some may take this the wrong way, since it's at best a bit cringy and at worst, vaguely racist. MC is fine in general, it just that there's a difference between being an awesome guy and being an on-the-nose Gary Stu.

I've said enough for a first impression, so I'll end my self-righteous rant here.

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The storytelling isn't as tight as it could be and it isn't very ambitious, and I can't say I felt much emotional investment, especially in the last couple of chapters. But it has enough laughs, heart, and a pleasant "story of lust" with the MC's surrounding.

Apart from that, this game certainly did a pretty good job producing it.
Regarding the stories goes, I prefer the older version (early chapter) over the latest one. It's a more simple and more interesting way to tell the stories.
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I think this game is underrated, but that's not the only reason I'm givin 5 stars, it has a nice easy going story, not to complicated but still a bit mysterious with some plot changes, nice renders, nice anims, ok, maybe not the best but still very good, and then the girls : these MILF's, my o my, super fappable !!! Can't get enough of it, looking forward to more updates !

For a porn renpy game , it's solid one.

PROS:

- The story is ok and straight forward.
- No NTR or cucking crap for now (ch.4).
- MC is chad even though not a gigachad but that's all right.
- Main heroines at least not bunch public toilet sluts.

CONS:

- English text is readable but need improvement.
- Engine sometimes wonky and lag.
- Why side female characters got more sex development than main girls.

One of those games that the renders are pretty good, a lot o beutiful girls and has average animations, but that's about it, everything else is bad.

First, the story of this game has a lot of potential, but it's wasted by the bad writting, bad translation and an intentionally non stop mix of italian with english, like, i get it, the dev is italian and is proud of it, but man, stop inserting it in everything, the names of the characters are italian, 60% of the characters has a italian background, italian roots or something like that, the mix of italian with english is annoying ASF, i am from Brazil, but if i was going to develop a game, i certainly wouldn't mix portuguese with english and put a brazilian name in every character, like Luciana, Clara, Carolina, Bruna, João, Pedro, Thiago.

Second are the dialoges, it seems very robotic, doesn't feel like it's humans talking, is really weird, doesn't transmite emotion.

Third, the MC, the MC is good looking, and you actually can understand why all the girls are atracted to him, but idk how the dev managed to make him very smart and very dumb at the same time, it's something that i don't know how to describe, just playing to understand.

And the last but not least is the relationship with the girls, it's VERY rushed. Vanessa has a traumatizing past, absolutely hates man, but in less thant a week is wearing a micro bikini while the MC is massaging her. The 2 daughters throw themselves to the MC and say they love him and whant to be in a relationship even so they didn't knew each other less thant a week ago, and all the other womans just throw themselves to the MC, very, very unrealistic.

it's the longest review that i made in this site, but it's because i saw so much potential in this game, and is just wasted because all the reasons above, i think if this game had a rework, it would be a top notch game.

I have really enjoyed the game so far. Its unique in its own way. This game has good enough animations, good renders, and many different type of girls for all tastes (some you don't see often) with lots of milfs and potential incest. The asses are huge in this game but that is a preference not that distracting. The story is interesting and while the "help" is quick to sex, understandable as no other males in the vicinity.
The only negative i see is that there are way to many characters and story will get very convoluted but that will be an opportunity for the dev to shine

Well done so far and look forward to updates and continued development of the game.

I do really recommend it.

One of the best games out there. The animations are in the top 3 for me. The story is good too. I am actually reading through it, it is pretty intricate and well made. The models are really good looking and diverse.
As for the gameplay, there isn't much time waste on bullshit. Has few minigames that you can skip.
Great content. I love it. If I could, I will rate it 5/7.

This is a quite entertaining game with absolutely beautiful renders and the main character being hung and has his own hareem easily makes me give 5 stars to this game..

The gameplay is quite simple and not too much effort is need to play the game and achieve the milestones of the game

Game looks like garbage, has barely any sound effects that aren't loud, annoying or both, animations are choppy as hell and its translation is shaky at BEST. Not to mention the awful facial movements. The only way this game could be worse is if it stole your passwords.

The game started nicely, the story has potential. But the fact that all the girls just drop at the guys feet effortlessly is a downside.
As far as the graphic goes, the model look good except for the fact that theyr asses are exagerated, looking as if all of them had an ass implant. not to my liking.

Good selection of different characters. Want more updates. Not jus the same young perfect boring looking women as other games. Hope there will be more updates. Now it's not much content but still enough to try the game.

The game story is the best, graphics and animations are improving with every update characters are good & for me this game has no problem in becoming one of the best games i played i really loved every second playing this game & also the dev is very humble and keeps improving the game and it's story with every update.
LOVED THE GAME AND EVERY SECOND OF PLAYING IT.

Love the game a lot.Very hot girls,lot's of content for only 2 episodes.
The renders and animations are very good!
This game has a lot of potential to be huge,already a lot of girls.
From shy to pls fuck me already.

Good plot going on. The women are all attractive. Renders are good as well. I didn't come across any issues. The English could use a brush up, but really it's not a huge turn off like some VNs out there. I'm honestly looking forward to seeing where the dev takes this one. Looks like there will be lots of fun, and a good story as well. Keep up the good work

Good Points
+ Story and storytelling is starts being decent and good enough after our MC became 23. (Still until that part our plot, story and storytelling feels awful.)
+ Render quality looks decent.
+ Girls looks hot.

Bad Points
- Font looks realy bad, espacily menu font is pretty bad.
- Facial expressions looks little bit cringy.
- Animations are very bad. Normal renders have decent quality but animations is not well maked, dont have good physics and they look quite cheap.
- Girls looks fairly same, even some of them have exaclty same body and they look like only their head is diffrent with their body was copy pasted.
- English translation is bad. Heck my mother language is not even English, but even i can see grammer problems of this game.
- We dont have enough save page.
- Night scene animations are creppy... We have some creppty animations like: moving tits without anyone touching them etc... Its like some kind of ghost fondling them and that looks creppy ASF...

For The End
Well... This game had potencial but DEV didn't improve his game for reaching that potencial, now its kind of poor and nothing more...

I don't really agree with the rating of this game and here is why I think so.
This game has good enough animations, good renders, and cute girls.
It has lots of milfs and good incest.
it's true that some of the writing can use a bit of proofreading and edit, but the English is not so bad as some people say, at least to me.
I love the way the game is going, very vanilla and the story centered on the mc and the girls...
for me, this game has a lot of potential to become a pretty good game and it has quite a lot of content for only 2 chapters. I did really enjoy playing it.
I do really recommend it.

Not really interactive, and very engrish. Every girl has the exact same body with a different head, not interesting at all. Would pass unless more interaction in the future and they get a better translator.