VN Ren'Py Move the Chains [v0.2 Bugfix] [MissFortune]

[Me-ta-Xa]

I don't know about you guys, as your more debating the American Football stuff, but I thought this game was a blast.
Hoping it will keep going with updates.
It's even educational....learned a new word:

The hell is that??

Anyhow, thanks MissFortune for your game, looking forward to see how this story all works out

 

[Deleted member 6168082]

A cornerback (CB) is a member of the defensive backfield or secondary in gridiron football. Cornerbacks cover receivers most of the time, but also blitz and defend against such offensive running plays as sweeps and reverses. They create turnovers through hard tackles, interceptions, and deflecting forward passes.

Ah, I really had no idea (I don't watch football) Thank you for explaining. It just sounded weird to me.

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The hell is that??

Someone who loves to edge or just read this

"An edgelord is someone on the Internet who tries to impress or shock by posting edgy opinions such as nihilism or extremist views.
The term is a portmanteau derived from "edgy" and "shitlord" – a person who "basks in the bitterness and misery of others"

Hehehe, shitlord.

 

[MissFortune]

I don't know about you guys, as your more debating the American Football stuff, but I thought this game was a blast.
Hoping it will keep going with updates.
It's even educational....learned a new word:
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The hell is that??

Anyhow, thanks Ms Fortune for your game, looking forward to see how this story all works out

According to Wikipedia: An edgelord is someone on the Internet who tries to impress or shock by posting edgy opinions such as nihilism or extremist views.

In the context of that scene, it's more on the nihilistic side of things.

Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.

edit: Ninja'd.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

According to Wikipedia: An edgelord is someone on the Internet who tries to impress or shock by posting edgy opinions such as nihilism or extremist views.

In the context of that scene, it's more on the nihilistic side of things.

Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.

edit: Ninja'd.

Kind of like some dude awhile ago, posted that he had an actual relation with his mother and sister and that the sister was preggers.

 

[Me-ta-Xa]

Ah, I really had no idea (I don't watch football) Thank you for explaining. It just sounded weird to me.




Someone who loves to edge or just read this

"An edgelord is someone on the Internet who tries to impress or shock by posting edgy opinions such as nihilism or extremist views.
The term is a portmanteau derived from "edgy" and "shitlord" – a person who "basks in the bitterness and misery of others"

Hehehe, shitlord.

Why thank you for the insight on that one
Kinda makes sence too in the way it was used in the game.
Kudo to you
But erm ...the hell is a "portmanteau derived" ????
(I know the "google it" is coming up now )

 

[AlphaBit]

MissFortune straight up did. I asked a question about Ivy and a single girl and he answered it. Saying that we can have a solo with just one it didn't matter. So, why don't you back tf up and read.

You could've have started with that, although a little politely lol
Still seems like you are talking about this post

For the most part, yeah. You do have a 'forced' LI at the beginning, think WVM. But you can break up with her at a certain point and lock into a solo route if you choose.

Again it could mean you can persuit her route separately, doesn't answer if that would be a main route or we just interact with her as a side girl and do shit with her but at the end we will have to say goodbye to her because she is not a LI, just a side girl for the plot. I am asking if it isn't the case and you are referring to a totally different shit.
It's clearly labelled that LIs can be part of the harem but she isn't mentioned in that list in dev notes.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

You could've have started with that, although a little politely lol
Still seems like you are talking about this post

Again it could mean you can persuit her route, doesn't answer if that would be a main route or we just interact with her as a side girl and do shit with her but at the end we will have to say goodbye to her because she is not a LI, just a side girl for the plot. I am asking if it isn't the case and you are referring to a totally different shit.
It's clearly labelled that LIs can be part of the harem but she isn't mentioned in that list in dev notes.

If I had said anything that was wrong in anything I posted, MissFortune would've already corrected me on it. If you're not convinced, tag him yourself and get the info straight.

This argument is just dumb. Time to move on.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

MissFortune straight up did. I asked a question about Ivy and a single girl and he answered it. Saying that we can have a solo with just one it didn't matter. So, why don't you back tf up and read.

pics or it didnt happend

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

pics or it didnt happend

Talk to MissFortune I'm done with this shit.

 

[Deleted member 6168082]

Why thank you for the insight on that one. Kudo to you

But erm ...the hell is a "portmanteau derived" ????

(I know the "google it" is coming up now )

You are welcome and no problem.


Noooo, I would never say thaaaaaaat

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[Boehser Onkel]

Talk to MissFortune I'm done with this shit.

well
you say a lot , but with no proof



date variables for LI´s

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[Old Grumpy Wolf]

well
you say a lot , but with no proof

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Don't give a fuck. Let MissFortune tell me I'm wrong.

 

[Simulacrum29]

Dark Silence be like

 

[SenWasHere]

Enjoying the Story so far, 100% want to see more of Fame.

 

[JenMistress]

OK, part of me wonders if that is a shot at this place.

 

[Renetta]

What an amazing 0.1 release, definitely keeping an eye on this one. Good fucking job MissFortune

 

[xXwankerXx]

But she's not going to be an LI

That's a real weird ass decision, coz the story pretty much hints at something more happening in future updates. At least make her fuckable for the MC to have fun with from time to time, if you only want her to be a maternal figure for him, otherwise it doesn't make sense to have a fine woman like her in the game. Ppl are gonna start complaining and trolling, just read the WVM thread and search "Azel". Don't make the same mistakes BD did coz it's obvious that she needs a good, deep dicking, and when an attractive woman like that needs it, a real gentleman stops being selfish and provides it.

The whole story around what led the MC to jail is strange. A girl accuses a guy of rape, her brothers decide to beat him up. They are 3, and at the first sign of resistance from the alleged rapist, they run away leaving on of them on the ground.

Yeah, that's a whole lotta WTFs in that story and the incident with those wannabe tough guys that got me scratching my head too. I also don't understand why the idiotic MC didn't sue the bitch for slandering and all that 'good' shit so she can enjoy dropping the soap in the pen for false accusations of rape and he can prove he really is innocent. I know I'd lose my shit if I were to go to prison like him cause of a slut's lies, and her dear brother would be too busy counting his teeth to make ridiculous threats after the shit his cunt of a sister did.

 

[Joshy92]

I'm gonna be honest I was thinking of playing this game but then i saw the dev say
The harem path is the canon/true ending
I have tbh I don't like playing visual novels with canon endings
It's why I stopped playing Summer Scent (because it has a canon path)

 

[JenMistress]

Well, got caught up with the Dev. And was a fun 0.1, really left me wondering what is next. Thank you so very much for this!!!

 

[motseer]

I'm gonna be honest I was thinking of playing this game but then i saw the dev say
The harem path is the canon/true ending
I have tbh I don't like playing visual novels with canon endings
It's why I stopped playing Summer Scent (because it has a canon path)

Joshy92, I know you will be all-in if you give this a chance. Yes, it's meant to be harem but, there is a clear cut choice for each girl he meets on whether to pursue them or not - except for one. And, if I know you, she would have been your choice anyway. Don't miss out on this one, dude!

OK, part of me wonders if that is a shot at this place.

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Hahaha, ya think?

Don't give a fuck. Let MissFortune tell me I'm wrong.

I'm not gonna go find it for them but, I remember the post you are talking about. Not sure if "eye witnesses" counts though. Keep fightin' the good fight, Dark Silence.

And.... on that note:

I have noticed some comments about not understanding what the MC was convicted for. It is quite clear (to me) that he was falsely accused and convicted of rape. The "murder" was not a "murder" since it was self defense. MC's comments about losing control because he was protecting his family is "internalized guilt".

There seems to be quite a few comments about the over dramatization of life in Inglewood, CA. Trust me. (hehe... Or not.) If you think it's too much, you've never been there... and I mean just to pass through... if you're not from there and spend a night... well, don't.

Finally, a couple 4 star reviews that seem to take off a point because they don't like the "politics" of the author. I guess that goes to show; never discuss or present an opinion on geopolitical or sociopolitical topics on the internet. It's not allowed!! But, seriously, keep doin' what your doin', MissFortune. Well, as long as you write what I like.