VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Moving to the Wrong Neighborhood [v1.0] [jessica 1222]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    Spinxas

    Just terrible game overall.
    The game uses literotica as the source content, but the renders and CGs do not match most of the text and context. Story and plot is the predictable black man/white man - Bull/Cuck, where the wife fights to be loyal to her husband...
    Feels like the game robbed me of my time as the quality is very low and the game is short by nature, meaning you won't see a lot anyway.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Hung460

    Just pure laziness. No different ending even if you choose not to cheat and cuck. I love NTR games and I get it. The puny white guy get cheated on by the big black guy and all his buddies. But I don't see why creators really need to keep emphasizing on the race part of everything.
  3. 1.00 star(s)

    bill meoff

    The renders don't match the story. When the story describes the clothes the characters are wearing or what sexual position they are in the images will show something completely different, I don't think the artist even read the story. I enjoy ntr but this is so poorly done Iwish I had never wasted my time on it.
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    ronan333

    I played version 1.0 of this game and found the writing frustratingly crude and cliche. The characters were mostly one-dimensional and simplistic. More sophisticated characters would have been easier to find attractive. The graphics are of mediocre quality and along with the sound samples are reused a lot. Also, the scenes described often didn't match the graphics, like characters described as only wearing shorts while clearly wearing shirts and many other errors, including frequent spelling and punctuation errors. The buildup to infidelity was too easy with the wife and practically non-existent with her friend. All this plus using tired stereotypes and predictable story points made it feel hastily thrown together at times and lacking imagination and effort. I have no problem with NTR/cucking games but this one bored me pretty quickly.
  5. 2.00 star(s)

    Noppity13

    It's at 1.0 at the time of my review. That version generally means that it's somewhat complete, so I don't feel the need to reserve judgment for later.

    If you played one game that deals in these fetishes, you played this one. It adds nothing new to the conversation.
    It's also pretty short. While that's not necessarily a negative, since most of us could do without the "half an hour of grind for one nude scene" kind of updates, it's a short game that took a year to reach this point.
    I assume it's due to being a side project of the dev and not something he wants to spend most of his days on.
    That sort of mentality seems to be present in every part of the game too.
    Assets you have likely seen, "story" you have likely heard many times before, tropes you've seen countless times.

    For those who are just here for the porn part and skip the rest... I still can't say a whole lot of good. The scenes all feel inrcedibly low effort with very little to offer.
    My one advice is that this game is one that would greatly benefit from a gallery mode with everything unlocked from the start.

    It's not the worst thing on the site, but it does absolutely nothing to separate itself from similar titles.
    If it wasn't made in the first place, you wouldn't feel like you were missing something.
  6. 1.00 star(s)

    Fortuna ღ

    Too heavy on the racial stereotypes. Ntr can only be considered art if it is written well, plausibly, and sensibly. In my opinion, which shouldn't matter, this was poorly done. I don't mind ntr if it's written well. This VN just did not capture ntr that well, in my opinion.

    Edit: My apologies to the dev, but I have taken notice of the nazi tattoos worn by a secondary reappearing character. While I make it a point to not judge art this way, the stereotypes were a bit too much and almost laughable. Could have had a much more serious impact had it not been for such stereotypes.
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    elucidate1468

    Pretty good character development to show the conflicts and emotions of the mcs but as of now, regardless of choices the story progression was the same like the events and situation in the beach house was the same for bad wife + cuck choices or not.
  8. 1.00 star(s)

    FartingRainbows

    I get the feeling this is the Dev's first VN.
    Super short story at this present time (v0.9).
    Some sex starts almost after starting but then goes quiet until kinda picks up again before progress ends.
    Eric's hair goes from blond to grey so quick.
    BBCs looks like shrivelled prunes - not in size, but in texture.
    Character assets look cheap.
    Another VN that over explains the story - "Eric brings in a heavy brown cardboard box" = Yes we can see it's brown and cardboard, no need to state the obvious.
    Sex is vanilla.
    The super long bushy beard is a major turn off.
    At this stage, I give it 1.5 / 5.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    qazxsw80

    The game is fun and funny.

    When you start playing it, you shouldn't take it too seriously, like some of the reviewers below. The game is a joke. No more. All the characters in the game are stereotypical, racist or sexist. All white men in the game have tiny dicks and cannot satisfy their women. All black men are criminals and abusers with huge dicks. And all the women in the game are stupid whores craving for huge dicks.

    The female characters in the game are quite attractive, especially the main female character – the wife. Her model is unique or at least I have never seen it used in any other game, which is a big plus. She looks like a real beautiful woman – no huge ass, gigantic tits or something. She is fit, slim and sexy.

    The pictures are nice. Nothing special in terms of quality, but they look all right even for 2021. The developers is quite good at making sex scenes so they look interesting.

    The writing style is all right and there are no obvious mistakes.

    Unfortunately, even though the title says that the game’s version is 0.9, which it is supposed to mean that the game is very close to completion, the best stuff – the content with the wife- is almost not present in this version (only a blowjob).

    So, overall it is a nice NTR game. If you are not into that stuff, you should not play. But if you enjoy it and can understand that this game is not serious about anything, I’m quite sure you’ll enjoy it.

    I think it is a four star game. But I’ll give 5 stars to counterbalance all those unfair one or two star reviews. I hope the developer will not take them to heart and will not abandon the game
  10. 2.00 star(s)

    Trasher2018

    Ok - its one of these.
    Just stupid BBC worshiping.

    The first "choice" already does not work. No matter what you pick, everyone acts like you stayed on the balcony. "great" start....

    "Oh yeah i fucked that black dude, and now i change mal whole life and abandon my fiance and become a cockhungry bitch for BBC!"
    "Hey best friend, it changed me, now try it yourself and get addicted to BBC!
    "Ok."

    That is more or less the whole game ...

    Your choices do shit - everything is the same - just that she fantasizes about her man instead of BBC. The game stays the same and everything still happens.
  11. 2.00 star(s)

    juneba

    Fairly poor adaptation of the Literotica story.

    My biggest gripe is just the model choosing. It's all over the place, From the main antagonist (who's black) who's supposed to be shirtless but he's just wearing a brown shirt, from the wife just flat out being a very bland model, and to Steph who is huge to the story line supposed to be a uptight goody two shoes being tatted the fuck up.

    If it wasn't being written from a decent story that I have enjoyed before I would've rated it 1 star but I decided to give it 2.
  12. 1.00 star(s)

    zer0answers

    Lol what person in their right mind would let their wife go away alone with her slut friend and two men, why is it such a big deal for his wife to wait a couple more days to go with him. Even if you chose to play not as a cuck/bad wife it still forces it, he just let the guy grab his wife's ass right in front of him, and both of them said nothing that's stupid as fuck. What's the point if your forced to be a cuck anyways? 1/5
  13. 1.00 star(s)

    kiteares

    NTR/cheating/cuckolding can be done well or it can be done extremely poorly, this is an example of poor.
    Plenty to not like such as the black is big and lasts forever, white is small and cums almost at a touch trope. Wife is never satisfied and of course her first reaction is to fantasise about strangers, but this makes her angrier at her husband. I had to laugh at one point, it's stated that Eric is above average but the dick on the model is tiny.
    The engaged friend falling for what looked more like an Indian than African made me laugh given the supposed averages around the world. But typical, one evening and a few drinks she's willing to spread and the following morning will give up her family, fiancee, friends, home and "white dick" for it. Not happy with that she tries to drag her married friend down with her.
    If you want optional NTR I think you will be disappointed choices seem to only slow the wife's descent.
    The worst thing about this VN and what bugged me most is the continuity. The script and pictures do not match up. One example is the thing about Eric's dick. But just about every scene what you are reading is different to what you are seeing. It's like the author and artist don't talk and a 3rd person just compiles words and pictures in the order they are told.

    If you want a VN where the choice is no choice, where looking at the pictures distracts from the words (or vice versa), with reasonable models (though nothing special) and a whole underlying anti-white man feeling to it, this could be the one for you. Or maybe I just missed the humor tag...
  14. 5.00 star(s)

    Albaduldür

    One of the best games ever!
    I never witnessed such a hot Cheating and NTR!
    Karen is honestly so hot and the Villan has a strong personality. The fragility of Karen adds so much to the game because she still keeps her innocent essence attached to her person even when she's cheating on her Bf.
    The game is still short in content, but the characters already have strong personalities, the plot is very hot and it all gets me thinking we will see very high quality content in the future. In short, This is a very promising game!
  15. 1.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 37915

    This rating is for exactly the reason you think it is. I found the game to be uninteresting, unexciting, and rather boring. After giving it a second shot I have to say....I have not changed my mind. This one isn't worth your time at all, look elsewhere.
  16. 1.00 star(s)

    ProximaLewds

    There are many ways to do a cuckolding story. This game is a perfect example of what not to do. To make it simple, the story is painfully generic and relies heavily on old, exhausted race related tropes and has lots of anger directed toward the "Eric" character from the "Big Brother" game. The renders are meh and the background are either just solid colors, gradients, or generic textures. The length is about maybe 10-15 min tops.

    It is a hard pass. You can find better games with more interesting setup for the cheating.
  17. 3.00 star(s)

    LordCorwin

    Animation: 7/10
    Story: 6/10
    Gameplay: 5/10
    Kinks: 6/10
    Overall: 6/10

    I'm not ashamed to say I do enjoy me some good ol' NTR, so long as it is done right. Adelaide Inn, good. Mother's Lessons, good. Tentacula, funny AF. Class President Yukino, excellent. MtTWN, pandering.

    This is your typical Black is best fantasy trope, you know the sort. White girls being corrupted because white boys got small peepee and don't satisfy in bed, ugh ugh, caveman brain big. It's sad and overused to a trolling degree, lacks any finesse, any pizazz, any imagination.

    Even Fat Bastards are more enticing as a subject, as they have to work damn hard to make the wife theirs.

    So if you're into that white toast sorta of fantasy, have at it! As for me, I'll be looking elsewhere for my cheating scenarios.
  18. 1.00 star(s)

    bathra

    The Game has good renders!
    Sadly it's pandering to the "stupidity of mainstream beliefs".
    Black and White and nothing in between!
    Story is to simple and has no variation of interesting characters.

    I like NTR when its done good!
  19. 4.00 star(s)

    racfalcon46

    This game is looking very promising. I do wish there was less narration but we got a lot of content out of a small file. I think the personalities of the characters are pretty believable although I feel that the friend needed a little more corruption beforehand. All in well its a pretty damn good start.
  20. 1.00 star(s)

    edit99

    I like the NTR genre and I think that a good story of a caring wife slowly falling into temptation and being corrupted by wanton pleasure is one of the hottest things to read about.
    Its sad however that most NTR VNs are ruined by obvious racism baits that are just cheap tropes to pull the strings of some people's emotions, much like how horror movies use jumpscares to scare you instead of telling an interesting yet sinister story.