VN Ren'Py Mr. Sinner [v0.7] [PurpleBlaze]

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[Deleted member 1571716]

I'm getting rapey vibes from this one.
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Guess I'll give Mr. Rapey a shot. I love me some chocolate. Just hope the dev gives us a choice NOT to sleep rape someone in the future.

Edit:
Also future tags would be good to know.

 

[Call of Booty]

Omg,this is just terrible,sigh. You don't know what is worse..Zombie looking dickheads,dialogs or engrish.I will stiill say the dialogs. Shame for those two babes especially Monica,but man...eeew for everything else.

 

[sergesan]

for the time being,better wait for more content

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Hopefully the next version will be in english....

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Hopefully the next version will be in english....

It'll probably be in Engrish 2.0 next update.

 

[Petering]

I don't really understand the setting. MC went to jail at like 17 for selling drugs then snitched and got out early and somehow owns a company now. He has a nice car and goes to work and somehow the building is new to him. Bruh got an android with iMessage on it.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

…and right after writing the overview, the Dev went for a stroll…



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thanks for sharing, X0R.

cheers, all!

 

[Blither]

Me thinks a tag might be missing... although I cant quite put my finger on it.

 

[Old Man Al]

Renders are nice.
Story is a bit banal, like in "been there done that, like a hundred times". Plus it is not well told, MC rushes from scene to scene. Short version: The MC is some kind of power-fantasy (of a 12 year old), former criminal, helps girls all the time and beats people up to help said girls. So he was forged in fire (or better prison) to become that guy. Meaning he should be strong willed to be like that, but jerks off in the bathroom to some girl he met earlier like some middleschool loser. Later he jerks off on his guest that he saved before - like some creep. And no, not avoidable. The girls exist and then you have strange conversations with them. Not only the fumbling over wrong words, but they don't feel realistic at all.
Grammar is pretty bad, some typos too - definately needs a proofreader. Also some russian sentences remain (remember one at least, but I didn't really read every word - it was a bit tiresome to read for me, because of the stated reasons).

I stoped playing not far into Ep 2.

Music is there and on the more unique side at least. I especially liked the music in the starting menu.

In this state I would give 2/5 stars. There is dire need for improvement in all departments (other that the music and the renders), but it is not outright BAD.

 

[Look-see]

the sex scene with the waitress should be extended a bit.

 

[PurpleBlaze]

We would like to remind you that our game is a DEMO version and is free for review. While there is no opportunity to perfectly make a translation, we are now working on a new version of the translation and future episodes. Thank you for your activity! Official Account -PurpleBlaze

 

[fried]

Renders are nice.
Story is a bit banal, like in "been there done that, like a hundred times". Plus it is not well told, MC rushes from scene to scene. Short version: The MC is some kind of power-fantasy (of a 12 year old), former criminal, helps girls all the time and beats people up to help said girls. So he was forged in fire (or better prison) to become that guy. Meaning he should be strong willed to be like that, but jerks off in the bathroom to some girl he met earlier like some middleschool loser. Later he jerks off on his guest that he saved before - like some creep. And no, not avoidable. The girls exist and then you have strange conversations with them. Not only the fumbling over wrong words, but they don't feel realistic at all.
Grammar is pretty bad, some typos too - definately needs a proofreader. Also some russian sentences remain (remember one at least, but I didn't really read every word - it was a bit tiresome to read for me, because of the stated reasons).

I stoped playing not far into Ep 2.

Music is there and on the more unique side at least. I especially liked the music in the starting menu.

In this state I would give 2/5 stars. There is dire need for improvement in all departments (other that the music and the renders), but it is not outright BAD.

Oh, the irony.

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Glass houses, rocks, etc.

 

[Simulacrum29]

Oh, the irony.

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Glass houses, rocks, etc.

you know one of them is trying to sell us a game, the other one is writing on an internet forum for shit and giggles

 

[fried]

you know one of them is trying to sell us a game, the other one is writing on an internet forum for shit and giggles

Everyone here is equal when it comes to game thread comments. All are up for similar scrutiny and consideration.

 

[Simulacrum29]

Everyone here is equal when it comes to game thread comments. All are up for similar scrutiny and consideration.

sure but his comment was not aimed at another comment, but on the game content

 

[fried]

sure but his comment was not aimed at another comment, but on the game content

And my point was to avoid double-standards.

 

[Simulacrum29]

And my point was to avoid double-standards.

We go pretty much off topic here but different media are held to different standards, you wouldn't write your doctoral thesis the same way as an online post.
That's not a double standard, they are different media with different form requirements.
Same with a game I want to make money with opposed to a post i make without monetary incentive.

 

[fried]

We go pretty much off topic here but different media are held to different standards, you wouldn't write your doctoral thesis the same way as an online post.
That's not a double standard, they are different media with different form requirements.
Same with a game I want to make money with opposed to a post i make without monetary incentive.

Yes, it's getting off-topic and no, though making money from a game isn't something that changes the context here.

Everyone is equal in a thread; the post in question was fair critique - albeit a bit over the top, this is a DEMO after all, yeesh - but a Dev represening their game isn't any more a punching bag than anyone else here. Our rules are equal-application.

 

[SecretSal]

The dialog is next-level.

Thug: You think a gun will help you?!
Thug: *gets shot*

Should probably continue rolling with the ridiculousness, otherwise it'd end up being another wannabe young criminal mastermind story which doesn't go anywhere. Just need to put more effort into the actual sex scenes.