For the criticism of the story jumping around leading up to Faye's event, it has merit for sure. Especially the interesting choice of calling the ex. Story-wise, it was an interesting fake-out leading to Ferris funny introduction (maybe I missed him from earlier Im only following les path, but I first assumed he was the father) when delivering the inhaler and also interrupting the make-out scene in the elevator. It was some meta story telling I think, or Dev's humor. And if Wanda chooses not to call the father to intervene...then she also doesn't show up to the photo-shoot which is very interesting? I like to think Pop has plans for all this as they release in parts.
It did feel jarring for Wanda in kitchen pushing Faye away and stating "there is no us" and then later that night being devoured and saying "I'm all yours". But that is why the transition scene was there as Wanda was struggling with her feelings and recalling earlier hot scenes. Let's remember that Wanda from the very beginning in this game was open to allow Faye to continue massaging her and was even disappointed that she stopped. She was basically down to get naughty with her girl with little resistance.
It's clear Wanda lives in a grey moral zone and she likes to turn up the sexy when she's feeling it.
Which leads to Lois. I really enjoyED the love triangle with Faye wanting Wanda, and Wanda wanting Lois. I almost wanted it to go the other way first, where Faye would learn about Wanda's feelings for her little sister and get angry or jealous and retaliate in fun crazy way. But whatever, I'm happy to follow Pop's ideas.