VN Ren'Py My A-rank Witch [v0.5] [Skinny Rat Studio]

[Bob XP]

It should be noted that there are many branches in the game. The NTR and NTS paths are the two main paths, but there are many branches within them. Some endings will be good for the main character and Mia, while others will be cruel, even leading to death and suffering.

I imagined Darren might die because of this; there's no way the poor MC could stay strong after losing everything again in another world. The same thing applies to the other characters, right? Like in that dream with Mia dying from the poison if the hunter dies. All I know is that I'm excited about the consequences and the deaths that could happen—torture, slavery, and whatever else comes next.

Happy endings are good, but the bad endings are what make the game realistic and fun.

 

[monkeyqueen]

i feel like doing some story predictions.

the writing in this game seems to be pretty good, certainly on the level of a rpglit novel

leia has three motivations

1. have a kid
2. make her husband happy
3. destroy all the witches

we know that having a kid is her primary motivation because she and her husband say so when they have no motive to lie. if the mc gets her pregnant she will also make her husband happy so seducing the mc satisfies two motivations simultaneously. mia is in the way so she needs to destroy that relationship to get at mc.

that's all clear and uncontroversial, the rest needs to be inferred

quotes for length

destroy all witches

but she also has larger goal of returning to the witch hunts. leia has been with these witch killing barbarians for a long time, perhaps more than a 100 years, meaning she participated in the witch hunts. also, for some unexplained reason she has influence over the leadership of the former witch killers. my guess: leia was a bad ass witch killer back in the day. we also know leia sees mia as a type of demon that is killing her spirits and destroying her beloved forest. sadly for leia, the kingdom now views witches as decent people, not nature spirit killing demons.

mia's good nature works against leia's interests. if mia acted like her mom - seeking power above all - she would fit into the wicked witch stereotype that leia needs to restart the hunts. but it's hard to convince people to burn glinda the good witch at the stake. the one thing standing in way of glinda transforming into the wicked witch of west is her love for the mc. destroy that love, transform mia into an evil witch and leia has an excuse to restart the hunts

still with me?

leia was working with the maze boss

we know that leia can communicate over a distance and her spirits should have warned the party about the boss coming to attack. why did the boss attack without warning? why was it out it's room? the answer in the name of the boss - this is a fertility demon. leia used her communication powers to make a deal with the fertility demon: she serves up the party to the demon on platter, the boss increases leia's fertility

leia wins either way. we know from the head of the guild that if the boss is killed outside its room the party members get new powers - and one guesses that the boon for killing a fertility demon is a fertility boon. if the party prevails leia walks away with a fertility boon and she can enact the rest of her plan. if the party loses the boss rewards leia with a fertility boon anyway

but neither leia nor the boss expected a portal stone and so leia has to find new ways to destroy the love of the mc and mia

prediction: leia will spy on behalf of stray blades clan and work to get mia enslaved

not sure if she will join mia or she will invade the dreams of mc to get the info she needs to pass along to the clan. probably the latter.

anyway hope someone enjoyed my exercise in tl;dr

 

[Bob XP]

i feel like doing some story predictions.

the writing in this game seems to be pretty good, certainly on the level of a rpglit novel

leia has three motivations

1. have a kid
2. make her husband happy
3. destroy all the witches

we know that having a kid is her primary motivation because she and her husband say so when they have no motive to lie. if the mc gets her pregnant she will also make her husband happy so seducing the mc satisfies two motivations simultaneously. mia is in the way so she needs to destroy that relationship to get at mc.

that's all clear and uncontroversial, the rest needs to be inferred

quotes for length

still with me?


prediction: leia will spy on behalf of stray blades clan and work to get mia enslaved

not sure if she will join mia or she will invade the dreams of mc to get the info she needs to pass along to the clan. probably the latter.

anyway hope someone enjoyed my exercise in tl;dr

It's been a long time since I've read such a good and detailed text. Congratulations! I think she could do it. Leia is very good at hiding her true intentions. Her influence is quite noticeable. I don't doubt it much, especially since that innocent little face hides a great, bloodthirsty warrior, according to my expectations. Now, about Mia's enslavement, I think so, but it's a little early yet. In the meantime, she can use Gordok to get everything she wants. G could stop being just a sex toy in her hands.

I'm sure we'll see Leia invading Darren's dreams whenever possible to extract valuable information and even play a little with his mind. Meanwhile, with so many images of Mia, she could even cause discord between them, like fights and other things. She has the power to do that, and the protagonist doesn't know much about her yet.
Let's say she gets everything she wants, and what if there's a twist where she develops feelings for the protagonist?
And with her pulling the strings, she could have him as her second husband. With her pregnant with the protagonist's child, this would connect them, and somehow Darren would be too busy to remember Mia or anyone else he knew.

That sneaky alpha is doing well in achieving her goals; we know she can easily prevent an attack long before it happens.
It's great that you made it much clearer for me with this excellent analysis, and in the end she would have gotten the fertility bonus anyway. XD

All I know is that, for me, among all the characters, Leia has the best powers to mess with everyone's heads and make them relive things that have already happened or will happen, etc. I confess that even though I like Mia, I'm much more interested in the elf, she's already the ace up her sleeve.
For my goals in the NTR branch with the complete corruption of Mia.

 

[Death Row]

Honestly? I want a harem ending. My stance is why reveal that the cat lady is a virgin if you're not going to offer the chance for the MC to be the one who takes it?

Though obviously there will also be more negative paths where the MC sees her losing it to someone else, but I want the happy ending where he gets both of the girls.

 

[fsdkjfslkef]

It should be noted that there are many branches in the game. The NTR and NTS paths are the two main paths, but there are many branches within them. Some endings will be good for the main character and Mia, while others will be cruel, even leading to death and suffering.

could you remove death part if possible, corruption and suffering seems fine byt if possible no death

 

[Bob XP]

Honestly? I want a harem ending. My stance is why reveal that the cat lady is a virgin if you're not going to offer the chance for the MC to be the one who takes it?

Though obviously there will also be more negative paths where the MC sees her losing it to someone else, but I want the happy ending where he gets both of the girls.

No problem, we'll have that. We can even have happy endings with both of them. That confession she made to Darren in the last update made it pretty clear that it's possible if you say yes to her.

 

[Bob XP]

could you remove death part if possible, corruption and suffering seems fine byt if possible no death

Ah man, that's what makes the game fun, but I can understand if you don't like it.