Is Tigress the furry girl in the previews with the animated screenshot? Looking forward to seeing her in the NTS path (and maybe a few more? Or at least a lizard girl, ha.)
I really liked the VN from up to the point with the NTR/NTS choice. You actually have a story to tell with both compelling
and funny characters, and that's beyond a rarity with the genre. I was wondering why everyone was so argumentive early on and that's definitely one of the reasons. You should feel proud for that, it means you suceeded as a writer.
... That said, if you do add a vanilla path at the end, I'd be extremely curious how that plays out, just from a character/story standpoint alone.
I spied a typo that has slipped through the cracks.
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Not a major one, just an mistype of K and L.
My post-mortem questions are these:
1. Did Lela(I'm as bad with names as Gordok) see all the modern technology/the fact that Darren was from Earth when she was inside of his head? If so, is she going to bring that up at any point in the story at all? It feels like something that should get brought up, but elves might not react the same way a human would, and think someone arriving from another universe is just something that happens all the time.
2. Is Darren going to get a higher ranking later on, or even an additional healing ability? The former seems more likely than the latter, given how much people in the capital seem to like him.