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vignette 3 - mia triumphant

active, aware, sigma-stag, soi-swinger perspective - NTS to NTRS branch
very long - longest yet
adding mild fem dom, mild humiliation, gentle anal, implied / off screen non con, graphic violence
includes my own non canon interpretation of mana
no sex in part 1 and very little in part 2, sorry

mia darren leia gordok
< thoughts > <action > <description >
( telepathy )

d: < as agreed, we walked into the throne room naked and without weapons >
d: <little did the orcs know that our nudity was no guarantee of their safety. at my word tara's claws would come out, gordok's sword would appear and leia would summon vines to entangle our enemies>
d: <i was feeling confident that my plan would work - take out the leader, then the shamans and the rest should flee>
d: <but my confidence was replaced by an entirely new set of feelings when we approached the throne>
d: <mia was at the foot to of the throne>
d: <image - she was on all fours while the orc leader was using her as a human foot rest>
d: <somehow these crude beasts had found a way to fasten an anti magic slave collar around her neck. her body was covered in delicate chains. a sturdier chain ran between the collar and the throne>
orc leader: dis is leader? ha! is puny. weak. tiny dick. he he
d: <my eyes darted from his mouth down to mia. she was covered in bruises and scrapes. the smell of sex permeated the air. these beasts had had their way with her!>
d: <i felt the rage build inside of me, my blood was pumping so fast my skin felt hot>
d: <without thinking i started to gather my mana to close her wounds and heal the scrapes>
leia: (leader! wait. don't!. your aura will also harm the orcs and start a fight)
d: (she's in pain, tell the others that the healing is the new signal)
l: (no! wait. you don't understand)
d: what's to understand, she's suffering
l: ( you can't sense dark mana so you can't understand )
l: (but i can and i'm telling you that the throne room is suffused with it and it's all emating from her. to me she looks like a black hole and her dark umbra is frightening even the darker spirits of the dungeon. she is only acting defeated. she is sitting on the reserves of two s class demons. she must have a plan)
d: (so you want me to scrap all of those hours of planning to do what, wait and see what happens? i've never trusted you and i don't trust this advice)
l: ( you are wrong to distrust me. but in this instance you don't need to trust me - you only need to trust mia)
d: (. . .)
d: < leia's words, as usual, were a bit too perfect, a bit too tailored to the occasion but i had to admit she might be right>
d: < i looked into mia's eyes. i didn't see defeat. i didn't see submission. i saw anger and defiance. she stared me right in the eyes as if willing me to understand>
orc leader: gunna say sump-ting? or did you just come here to admire my new foot rest? <throne room explodes in laugher>
ol: she's ours now. we trained her good and she no longer likes puny men with tiny dicks
ol: so whacu want?
d (you are right, tell the others, new plan: tara takes on leader while gordok removes collar. tell gordok to slice it off if he has to, i'll heal any cuts. you try to entangle the underlings)
d: i want your head, orc!
<battle ensues> <collar falls> <mia floats into air bouyed by two dark orbs >
mia: everyone stop!
<ball of dark matter forms, tendrils reach out and strike the chests of the orcs near throne, orcs fall to ground>
mia: having trouble breathing?
d: <mia's rage was gone from her face and replaced with an unfamiliar cruel smirk >
<image - orc leader unable to breathe >
mia: <stares at crowd of orcs> come any closer and i'll kill all of you
mia: don't worry "master". i'll allow you enough air too keep you alive. just like you provided just enough food to keep me alive. i want you to hear me. to hear what we have to say
mia: you should start to worry when i finish talking
mia: lucky for you i have lots to say
<image - orc redshirt raises axe and charges>
<image - dark matter tendril whips out, effortlessly smashes orc into wall>
mia: you thought you had trained me. broken my will. destroyed my sense of self. made me your pet
mia: instead you invited your worst nightmare in the heart of your shabby kingdom
orc shaman: so much power, how?
mia: <cruel smile> yes, how?
mia: the "puny man" you were just laughing at helped me figure it out
<image - mia hovers over orc leader who is grasping for air>
mia: you beasts think you are so strong. you think your big muscles and big dicks make you better than my "puny lover"
mia: but he is so much smarter than you. he fucks better than you. he is stronger than you in every possible way. so please listen closely "master"
mia: darling, please tell my master why i have the mana reserves to do this all day
d: <the experience was surreal - i was being asked to lecture some monsters while they were choking on dark matter. but i trusted mia and if she was asking me to do this she must have a reason>
d: um . . . i figured it while trying to reconcile the differences between what previous adventurers had written and what we were experiencing
d: other parties reported feeling drained and exhausted by the continual sex
d: but we left feeling energized. our mana replenished. only the sun drained us
m: are you starting to understand? understand why you are weak and he is strong? you have lived in this dungeon your entire life but never tried understand it
d: <part of me wanted to stop mia but i continued>
d: uh . . . then i realized it was a trap. sex restores your lost mana but at a cost to your reserves.
orc shaman: mean what?
d: when you have sex some of the mana stolen by the suns returns but it also sends some of your capacity to the succubi bosses
d: succubi are just vampires. except they drink mana and vitality not blood. except they use sex, not fangs, to get what they want
d: and this a succubus dungeon. this world is a vampire that takes some of your vitality every time you experience sexual pleasure
<mis interupts>
m: a lesser lover or a lackwit like yourself dear "master" could have never had led me to discover my true potential
m: he - the witch tamer - asked me share every detail of my sexual ecapades. he listened to my most intimate thoughts
m: a lesser man would have left me when i told him i was developing a taste for sex he couldn't provide
m: instead he accepted me and encouraged me to explore my darkest desires
m: i told him every dirty detail and responded with love
m: together we tried to understand why was i enjoying sex with idiots like you who think that a big dick and talentless rutting makes one a good lover
m: at first i couldn't understand why was i enjoying sex with arrogant, stupid men who annoyed me
<eyes dart to gordok for half a moment>
m: my brilliant lover led me to the insight. the pleasure wasn't coming from big dicks. it wasn't coming from fast rutting. it was coming from me. i was learning to pleasure myself in any circumstance
m: you, dear master, have no idea how to pleasure a woman but i have learned to pleasure myself with even the most clueless lover. and you certainly qualify as that
d: she began to think like a succubus
m: yes, succubi don't give pleasure they exchange pleasure for vitality

m: you took what you wanted from me never realizing that i took more of what i wanted from you. when you thought you were humiliating me, when you thought you were degrading me i learned to focus on those liminal places between pleasure and pain, between humilitation and arousal

m: i owe my victory to him. in our conversations my perfect lover encouraged me to view degradation as a vehicle to arousal and pain as a path to pleasure
m: then, while rutting with some stupid monster saw it. through a haze of pain and pleasure i literally saw it. the gates of perception opened and i saw my dark mana wafting up towards the sun and transforming itself into succubus mana and i saw his vitality doing the same
m: i felt a great sense of loss. i missed my mana, missed the parts of me that were disappearing into the sun. but then i realized that i was gaining as much as i was losing. then something extraordinary happened: the succubus mana turned course and returned to as dark mana. i had learned to take back what was being taken from me
m: you see, it was the same process - transforming one essence into another. just as my lover taught me to understand that shame can be transformed to arousal so succubus mana can be made into dark mana
m: every time you came to train me i drained you. i took your health and made into the stuff that is stealing your life right now. i did the same with your underlings. if you had been less eager you might have survived but instead you gave me more than enough fuel to burn down your house. because that is all you are to me - fuel.
m: now i'm tired of talking - time for you die

part 2
<image - mia floating above dead orcs>
m: while most of you are as lackwitted as your leader, there is an exception
m: <mia points dramatically> tartuk! tartuk is only the only one of you that saw me for what i was
m: most of you saw a woman, a weakling, a slave and a pet
m: tartuk saw me as abyss, s-level witch. that is why he made me his champion!
d: i happen to know that mia likes that nickname as much as i like "witch tamer" - he saw nothing>
d <indeed judging by the look on his face this is first time tartuk has heard about his brilliant plan>
m: tartuk brought me water when i thirsty, food when i was starving not because he was weak but he had a plan to become chief of the split tusk tribe
<astonished gasps from orcs>
m: and now it is time for tartuk to claim his prize
leia: (leader! steel yourself, control your jelousy)
d: <what is happening?>
l: ( it seems that our dear mia has learned something of orc customs during her captivity )
l: ( she is handing over leadership of the tribe to someone she can control )
l: (that means we can leave here without more death)
d: <tartuk moved towards mia, grabbed her shoulders as if to spin her around>
d: mia stopped that with nothing more than a cold stare
d: <tartuk then laid down and mia mounted him >
m: see how he claims his champion, tartuk is strong!
d: (apparently orc culture involves lots of yelling)
l: (and bombastic statements - it's a fascinating isn't it? )
d: <mia took the orc's massive member and forced herself down on it in one quick move
d: <either she was very aroused or she was trying to show her prowess>
l: ( both i think )
d: ( why are still here it's time for you to leave my mind)
l: ( no )
gordok: go abyss! this is is amazing
d: <then mia crouched over tartuk and moved him around so her back was to me>
d: < i was looking right at her rosebud>
d: < her meaning was clear, she wanted me to join >
d: <i moved closer, not anxious to perform for orcs but eager to join mia>
d: <i was aroused and embarassed, fully erect but hesistant>
d: <she, tara and i had enjoyed threesomes but those were loving experiences>
d: <this was lewd. lascivious. performative. unlike any sex we have ever enjoyed together>
d: <but just as these thought made me falter mia looked over her shoulder and gave me a smile that erased all of my hesitancy>
d: <it's amazing how much she communicated in just that one glance. when i saw her loving gaze she somehow told me that we could be intimate even while acting on this strange, toxic stage>
d: <looking around i spotted a jar of lubricant right behind the throne>
d: <i pushed thoughts about the original owner out my mind and made myself ready>
d: <mia paused her frantic bucking for a moment while got myself into position and slowly pushed myself inside>
d: <then i summoned my mana to soothe any pain she might feel>
d: <sliding in an inch more>
d: < and still another inch>
d: <until mia thrust back against the both of us>
m: do you see! do you see the strength of my men?!
d: < it was unworldy. heady. confusing.>
d: <i enjoyed the praise mia was heaping on me even i as felt embarrassed by the theater of it all>
d: <mia thrust like she was possessed while i did my utmost to avoid hurting her>
d: <in the end i decided to keep still and concentrate on what i could tell her with my kisses. i kissed the nape of neck and then began to run my tongue on the small hairs of her neck>
d: <even though i was only separated from the orc by thin fold of skin i felt an enormous gulf between us. he was being mercilessly ridden by abyss - dark mana succubus while i was confessing my love to mia, the woman who was my everything>
mia whsipering: i feel so loved right now perhaps i can have it all
d: <mia moved, sitting upright and i was forced to sit on the cold stone floor. she leaned back, pulling tartuk into a painful postion while maneuvering me into a position that gave me maximal pleasure. when the orc spectators moved closer she extended her legs giving the crowd a lewd view while allowing me to maintain the illusion that she and i were the only ones in the room
m: see how he claims his champion! all hail tartuk!
d: <she slamed down hard and i lost control spilling myself into her>
d: <that turned out to be the cue she needed, leaving tartuk frustrated, mia stood up and faced the crowd and raised her fist in the air>
m: all hail the chief of the split tusk tribe!
crowd: all hail !
mia whispering: time to reward your champion
tartuk: me leader now! as chief i reward my champion
m: <interrupting> together we will defeat faneya!
crowd: cheers
l: ( your witch did it )
l: ( perhaps she is as impressive as you've always said she was )
l: ( tell me, when she was hovering over those orcs looking powerful and vengeful did you feel sorry for them or did you wish you were in their place? )
d: ( i told you to leave )
l: ( how rude. and to the person who help guide mia toward her triumph. to the person who has only tried to help you)
d: (go)
l: ( you can't force me out so you are going to have ask nicely - just say "please")
d: ( no )
l: ( i'm giving you one more chance. if you don't say "please" right now next time I will ask you to say "please mistress" )

choice

- please
- please, mistress
- fuck you leia. one more word and i'll ask mia to kill you. you and i both know she will do it
 
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vignette 3 - mia triumphant
Wow, you're doing great! That's fantastic!
It even increased my desire to see Mia getting used to walking around naked in the dungeon, following Leia Tara's example. :p

It's still early, but soon she'll be strutting around with that bouncy, bouncy ass and tits, leaving all the monsters drooling.
I got carried away here. Haha, what a great fanfic!
 
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I'm having major problems with electricity right now. It all happened at a very bad time, just when I made a major update, they started turning off the power in the region. But I'm sure I'll get everything done by the end of the month, there's not much left, really:(
I hope things have improved, stay safe.
 

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Я думав, що автор почав гроші з передплатників качати, але перед цим що таке написати і залишити це, я загуглив це, і так, це правда, що в Одесі та решті міст масове відключення світла, і мало де є світло, а де немає, я сам наполовину і був у бабусі там, влітку бігав до цього пиздця, що влітку бігав до цього пиздеца. а так чекаємо
 

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Я думав, що автор почав гроші з передплатників качати, але перед цим що таке написати і залишити це, я загуглив це, і так, це правда, що в Одесі та решті міст масове відключення світла, і мало де є світло, а де немає, я сам наполовину і був у бабусі там, влітку бігав до цього пиздця, що влітку бігав до цього пиздеца. а так чекаємо
У твоєму припущенні насправді не багато сенсу. Мені, як автору, вигідніше фінансово випускати все в строк.
 

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Я думав, що автор почав гроші з передплатників качати, але перед цим що таке написати і залишити це, я загуглив це, і так, це правда, що в Одесі та решті міст масове відключення світла, і мало де є світло, а де немає, я сам наполовину і був у бабусі там, влітку бігав до цього пиздця, що влітку бігав до цього пиздеца. а так чекаємо
"Доїти" підписників та не випускати апдейти лишено будь-якого сенсу, бо стрибки підписників стаються з кожним наступним релізом + на цьому ж форумі ти потрапляєш на Latest Updates.

В підсумку з умовною брехнею "я захворів/в мене вмерла собака" ти тупо сам собі стріляєш в ногу)

Є звичайно легендарні унікуми типу ГамДропа, які доїли піплів роками, але то були такі бородаті часи, шо йой...)
 

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"Доїти" підписників та не випускати апдейти лишено будь-якого сенсу, бо стрибки підписників стаються з кожним наступним релізом + на цьому ж форумі ти потрапляєш на Latest Updates.

В підсумку з умовною брехнею "я захворів/в мене вмерла собака" ти тупо сам собі стріляєш в ногу)

Є звичайно легендарні унікуми типу ГамДропа, які доїли піплів роками, але то були такі бородаті часи, шо йой...)
Я дивлюся, ви також автори своєї гри. Що за гра у вас і про що вона, хто там головний герой і таке інше)
 
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Did anyone else notice the resemblance between Vanessa and that girl who passed out after receiving Gordok's penis?
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The small spot on the left side is what changes.
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It should be noted that there are many branches in the game. The NTR and NTS paths are the two main paths, but there are many branches within them. Some endings will be good for the main character and Mia, while others will be cruel, even leading to death and suffering.
Some of the comments are so heavy that, honestly, I was scared to start the game. I told myself this is probably some dark, unavoidable hard-NTR where the player can't do a damn thing, and the MC is destined to suffer the same fate as Imos, the MC of the darkest NTR game haha
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This dev post caught my eye! I'm going to start playing, but I just wanted to say you should probably write this on the game's main page; quite a few people probably think this game is purely Netorare
 
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Part 1. The Mana of Liberation
The air in the tower was steeped in silence — the peculiar kind that arises when power waits for its moment. Mia stood by the arched window, her fingers lightly touching the cold stone, her gaze sweeping over the valleys where life had bustled just yesterday. Now — only shadows.

She knew: everything had changed.

Not because of wars, not because of traitors. Because of mana.

That very mana whispered about in temples, sought by alchemists, for which mages had perished. Not energy. Not a resource. A feeling. Or rather — the ability to sense boundaries: one’s own, others’, the world’s. And to liberate them.

Mia felt it within — not like a flame, not like a current, but like a quiet breath, ready to reveal what was hidden.

First Contact
Darren entered without knocking. As always.

“You’re alone again,” he said, stopping three paces away. “As if you’re afraid someone will see you liberating.”

His voice — gentle, yet tinged with mockery. Not cruel. Rather… probing.

Mia did not turn around.

“I’m not afraid. I’m preparing.”

“For what?” He took a step closer. “To prove once more that you’re the only one who understands this mana?”

She finally turned. In his eyes — not challenge, but curiosity. And something else. Something she had learned to recognize: the desire to be led.

“No,” Mia said softly. “To show how it works. On you.”

Darren froze. Not from fear — from anticipation.

The Mechanics of Mana
The mana of liberation did not subjugate. It revealed.

It did not break the will — it peeled away layers, exposing what a person hid even from themselves: fears, desires, the boundaries they had set for themselves.

And Mia knew: Darren had long wanted to liberate himself. From the role of the strong one, from the need to always decide, from the burden he carried, thinking no one else could manage.

She raised her hand. Not for a spell. For a touch.

“Will you allow it?” she asked, though she already knew the answer.

He nodded.

When her fingers touched his wrist, the mana flowed — not like a wave, but like a warm wind. Darren shuddered. Not from pain. From recognition.

“You…” He swallowed. “You feel how tired I am?”

“Yes,” Mia whispered. “And I will let you release it.”

Gentle Humiliation, Soft Guidance
He knelt — not by command, but by inner impulse. Mia did not triumph. She led.

“You think you must be a stone,” she said, running her palm over his shoulder. “But a stone does not breathe. And you — you breathe. And you can stop holding everything inside.”

Darren closed his eyes. His hands trembled slightly.

“I… don’t know how else.”

“But I do,” she crouched beside him. “And I will show you. Slowly. Without pain. Only liberation.”

He sighed — deeply, like a man who had finally allowed himself not to be strong.

Mia smiled. This was the beginning.

A Hint of Leia
Somewhere in the distance, beyond the tower, Leia watched. She did not intervene. Not yet.

But her eyes gleamed. She, too, wanted to understand.

What’s Next?
In Part 2, we could:

  • explore Leia’s reaction (her interest, perhaps — jealousy, but without confrontation);
  • show how the mana affects Darren in the long term (he becomes more open, but not weak);
  • add subtle hints of NTR dynamics (Leia begins seeking a way to also access the mana, perhaps — through Mia).
Would you like me to continue with Part 2 or adjust the current text?
 

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Part 1. The Mana of Liberation
The air in the tower was steeped in silence — the peculiar kind that arises when power waits for its moment. Mia stood by the arched window, her fingers lightly touching the cold stone, her gaze sweeping over the valleys where life had bustled just yesterday. Now — only shadows.

She knew: everything had changed.

Not because of wars, not because of traitors. Because of mana.

That very mana whispered about in temples, sought by alchemists, for which mages had perished. Not energy. Not a resource. A feeling. Or rather — the ability to sense boundaries: one’s own, others’, the world’s. And to liberate them.

Mia felt it within — not like a flame, not like a current, but like a quiet breath, ready to reveal what was hidden.

First Contact
Darren entered without knocking. As always.

“You’re alone again,” he said, stopping three paces away. “As if you’re afraid someone will see you liberating.”

His voice — gentle, yet tinged with mockery. Not cruel. Rather… probing.

Mia did not turn around.

“I’m not afraid. I’m preparing.”

“For what?” He took a step closer. “To prove once more that you’re the only one who understands this mana?”

She finally turned. In his eyes — not challenge, but curiosity. And something else. Something she had learned to recognize: the desire to be led.

“No,” Mia said softly. “To show how it works. On you.”

Darren froze. Not from fear — from anticipation.

The Mechanics of Mana
The mana of liberation did not subjugate. It revealed.

It did not break the will — it peeled away layers, exposing what a person hid even from themselves: fears, desires, the boundaries they had set for themselves.

And Mia knew: Darren had long wanted to liberate himself. From the role of the strong one, from the need to always decide, from the burden he carried, thinking no one else could manage.

She raised her hand. Not for a spell. For a touch.

“Will you allow it?” she asked, though she already knew the answer.

He nodded.

When her fingers touched his wrist, the mana flowed — not like a wave, but like a warm wind. Darren shuddered. Not from pain. From recognition.

“You…” He swallowed. “You feel how tired I am?”

“Yes,” Mia whispered. “And I will let you release it.”

Gentle Humiliation, Soft Guidance
He knelt — not by command, but by inner impulse. Mia did not triumph. She led.

“You think you must be a stone,” she said, running her palm over his shoulder. “But a stone does not breathe. And you — you breathe. And you can stop holding everything inside.”

Darren closed his eyes. His hands trembled slightly.

“I… don’t know how else.”

“But I do,” she crouched beside him. “And I will show you. Slowly. Without pain. Only liberation.”

He sighed — deeply, like a man who had finally allowed himself not to be strong.

Mia smiled. This was the beginning.

A Hint of Leia
Somewhere in the distance, beyond the tower, Leia watched. She did not intervene. Not yet.

But her eyes gleamed. She, too, wanted to understand.

What’s Next?
In Part 2, we could:

  • explore Leia’s reaction (her interest, perhaps — jealousy, but without confrontation);
  • show how the mana affects Darren in the long term (he becomes more open, but not weak);
  • add subtle hints of NTR dynamics (Leia begins seeking a way to also access the mana, perhaps — through Mia).
Would you like me to continue with Part 2 or adjust the current text?
Keep going, the Mana parts are fun!
I liked Leia's part: I think it's not too far from becoming a reality. :eek:(y)
 
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