Hence, the bad script writing and plot building comment I made in the second sentence of my reply. It is my hope that the game dev will take this as a helpful critique on this unfinished work. It's not to say all VN games, or stories, are boring, tedious, and just a waste of time and only good for the fapping. There are some very artful and highly respected works such as Being a Dik, Milfcity, City of broken dreamers, to name just a few. Those tend to exhibit a developer who has taken the time to set a tempo and pre plan their thoroughly thought out story ahead of time in segments. They don't rely on tropes or a rehashed narrative on how these games should be created. Like simply for profit to milk the communities they have created with their work and reputations. Their story plots are either more believable, or more unpredictable that they leave their audience wanting more. They don't rely on gimmicks such as delay of sexual encounters of primary rendered female character much later in the development of the story in order to entice a better chance at profiting. Those who do it for the art of storytelling will not fall into common tropes and tedious plot tempos. Of course this is just my opinion on the matter. I just feel that there is a lot of potential in "My best deal" that may be falling into what ails most of these types of game, VN stories. Better pacing and a sense of unpredictability in storyline can make a huge difference in keeping your audience engaged in the work. Unlike many recently who have fallen to the same predictable patterns that appear to be alienating their community.