VN - Ren'Py - My Best Deal [v3.6] [Pirot King]

Just finished version 0.90, which is the first version I played. I'm quite surprised by this one, nice story, good graphics and animations.

Story/Text: Overall good quality of texts and spelling / language. Encountered one line of Polish, but no other major issues.

Graphics: Nicely animated 'stills', and decent short animations for the scenes

Gameplay: There's a decent set of choices, some of which will actually make some minor changes in the game, but nothing very major.

I'd give it a 4/5 overall.

what a buggy mess none of the animations plays on first try A LOT of scenes missing just black screen some dialogs are in misorder some doesnt even makes sense only good thing is sex scenes if you can get them somehow also you cant choose who you wanna have sex

From someone who's lazy and hates walls of texts, I found this game to have a very interesting story, well written, with enough H-scenes to keep you interested.
At the moment the game is mostly a click-through, with few impacting choices (but they're there!), but the story is interesting enough that you don't really worry about this.
Also, the animations are well done. Definitely worth playing and supporting the author.

I'm gonna keep this review short.
This game is really good , the renders are appealing and they aren't the same models which are constantly being used for every other game.
Overall I'd give it 9/10
Also bonus points for Ms Collins femdom scenes they are fucking good. If you are into femdom do check it out just for those scenes I bet you won't get disappointed.

Intriguing storyline unlike many of the other games out there. The renders are very well done, and the animations are smooth and on par with the best games out there. The characters are all quite attractive, and overall this game is heavily underrated.

A decent game, where your sisters are not really your sisters and everything happens because of superpowers ( which is way better than having to actually develop relationships and make things have sense.

Those power he has, work sometimes and sometimes dont, it seems they work at random when they are needed and are discarded when its not convenient, with no explanation.

We dont get to know nanything about the origin of the godesses or the powers cause one of them doesnt want to tell, and the other one doesnt know.

You get some powers that most of the time either get you handjobs, or dont work, or dont change a thing, or dont offer any advantage. For instance powers are not needed wtih Rin and you get far.

So the writing is just there, its just text that doesnt actually matter much.

Its visually interesting though, that can carry you through the "story".

I just started this game but can not get into it. I mean, renders are good but the writing...Ughhh. It's not bad, just flat and doesn't convey any emotions. Also, and as already mentioned in other reviews, it's annoying to have those "Good morning, SON", or whatever the relation is, reminded in so many sentences.

The story itself is a mix of already seen pitches but it is poorly brought. It is said that the mission is to spread love but it is more about lust though.

MC's wakes up after a period in coma (how long ?) and just walks back home....really ? No rehabilitation, nothing ?

I think that with some more explanations and a more immersive writing, this game could get higher ranks.

Great game, probably in the top 5 of Mind Control games out there, but there's just one problem: The pace. It's too slow. It's 0.8 and you barely fucked anyone properly. I'm not sure how far in the game is in terms of story but there's just lots of cocktease with very little real action.

Pros:

- good atmosphere and dialogue, interactions between MC and characters are realistic
- graphics are up there, would say almost comparable to some of the other top games on the site
- plot is not awkward, and believable, but not entirely smooth

Cons:

- few actual choices, and the choices don't create as much an impact as I would've liked given it is already version 0.8
- few sex scenes, you barely fuck anyone and such a pity too, for such a well made game
- wimpy MC, would've preferred him being more ballsy, or at least give us the choice to make him so as a way of character development

Still, overall a great game. Keeping tabs on this and hope it doesn't get abandoned.

Version: v0.8

Review:
I honestly expected more from this game, because it has a great rendering quality but its story I thought quite bad and a little boring to follow, this is because there is no incest or fetish that we can appreciate. But calm down, let me try to make you understand.
History:
The character suffers an accident and goes into a coma and wakes up in a hospital, there you meet a woman, the woman (who may be the MC's mother) she owns an apartment where you rent a room. When she sees you awake, she talks about how worried she was about you, and those usual dialogues, so she says that there are two roommates also living in her house, who are also renting a room, they are twins, asian girls. Therefore, there is no incest or fetish that we can value in the game, in addition, the MC has contact with a goddess who saved him during the coma and he receives some powers in which he can possess a girl and corrupt her by making her own wishes.
Gameplay:
A basic VN with a lot of dialogues to read, the choices will not matter much, most VN's choices are to accept or refuse. The author tries to make the story immersive with a lot of texts and dialogues, but you end up losing a lot of interest to follow, and with that, the game ends up being boring because you wonder if it is an erotic book or just a porn game. The game's script is bad, I honestly didn't like it very much, something that could attract more attention is missing, something that would spark my interest.
Content Sexual:
The renderings are great, especially the Asian ones, and the animations are also great, very good. The sex scenes are moderate, not enough, but they are good. But unfortunately the sexual content of that game is low.

Why I did gave 1 star?
I know it can be unfair to give such a low rating, but some reasons for that, first of all the amount of texts and dialogues is absurd, as you don't need to create a story or script where you have to explain everything, even more if it is a porn game . The best way to do this is to summarize the words, moreover, it is a porn game, because I want to enjoy the work, I want to enjoy the renderings, the scenes, as well as the story and how it is made. But the story and the script were not very good. There is no such thing that we can fantasize about, because the game has a slow development, without many fetishes, in short, waste of time if compared to the previous game that is on hold.

Just finished v0.8, so I figured I'll give my feedback.

I like the premise, since it's a literal power fantasy which I actually find enjoyable. There is certainly potential for the story to expand, such as letting the MC confront people from his past life and perhaps, become part of some supernatural power struggle, if he isn't already. It also just dawned on me that if there is a God of Death in the Pantheon, what would that god feel about two goddesses essentially snatching a soul from them?

The characters are nice. So far, my favourites are the goddesses for obvious reasons. I'm hoping that given the powers MC currently possesses, more characters will show up. It would be nice to have more characters to mess with with those powers or find a fellow Champion.

I've said enough for now, so I'll look forward to what comes next.

The game makes really fun and it´s funny that the same time dirty pool and this games are in the same game universum together that you can see mostly all characters from both games. And that you now see what happend´s or they do when you dont see them in the one see thats happening here!
But not like in Dirty Pool where I was the uncle and nearly tolerate David, I can only say in this game he get my on my nerves and I really hate this little shit. And was hoping with an update that maybe I could say no to him and get fuck away from you piece of...
And thats the only thing why I hate David so much he makes really shit and then this fucker means I must help him and then he drown me with him down into shit thats not my problem is.

On the other hand they daily look at my "new" twin sisters Rin & Lin and his/my "new" Mom I´m def. not complaining, the 3 are so nice and beautiful and caring.
I found the story about that game really good why he is in his new body and the 2 goddess, that be can really intresting what does the one and was do the other. All chars looking wondefull and mostly like normal people an not like models, what I dont complain it´s nice to that she was looking really beautiful but like more good looking people from the street.

Review of Pirot King King’s My Best Deal

( as of Version 0.8 11-12-2020 )

This is one of the most promising games I have seen on F95 in a while. The Graphics are stunning for a Renpy Based game, The story and characters are compelling and the H is HOT. I’m not as into the FemDom elements, but generally speaking it’s a great story so far.



Graphics:

This game features really stunning graphics, Well Lit, and solidly animated. There is a wonderful unified tone thought the game, I am not sure at the moment what game engine is used to create the scenes ( likely an Illusion product ) but it’s clear that all of the 3d assets used are from a common vendor, or created specifically for the game. I did not notice any unnatural stretching or pinching of animated or posed characters. Really really well done!.



Story:

The story line is really original, or at least a really original spin on a general trop that is common to a lot of .LIT erotica. The story dose have some compelling plot devices, and leaves me wanting to know more about it’s pantheon. And I cannot wait for the next episode. Choices do not come into play until quite far in the story, and do not seem to change the stories path. ( I kind of like that, give me sand box or give me narrative , its only a rare game that can do both well, this one dose narrative well )

Characters:

MC: so far interesting, we don’t know much about his past before the start of the game. Would have been nice ( IMO if he had been an old man rather than someone of approx. age, so his “world-wisdom” could be leaked into the current incarnation ) but that said, he seems nice and just the right amount of pervy.

Girls:

While I’m not generally into big tits, these models are all done so well I even enjoyed the H with the Mom and Teacher Types. The twins/friends are super-hot.

H & Kinks

Harem: Oh Yea, this is going to be a good harem story.

M-Dom: our MC has powers but so far dose not seem overly dominate, and he is not cruel or mean.

F-Dom: not one of my kinds but its well done here.

incest: ok I did not notice there was an Inc patch for this so I’m stoked to find one, going to have to replay now. I am someone who dose find Incest content to be hot, but I do prefer its all in or all out, I find the whole sudo-incest trend annoying. Ball up and throw in all the kinky if it fits the story, or leave it out and structure the story without it it seems obvious this story was written to contain Inc elements and is better with them than without.

Loli: none so far. Syster types are youthful but not loli

BDSM: there is some F-dom and at least potential for M-dom

Rape: there are some elements so far that indicate a rape would have taken place if the MC did not step in. I personally would have liked to had the option to see the MC doesn’t stop it option, though I would progress the story as intended.

Group: none really so far.

Voyeur: some

Girl Girl: some of the best I’ve seen…

Boy, Girl, Girl: not yet but man I hope.

NTR: not yet, really hope to get Boy+Girl+Boy with BFF and Mom, sister or teacher. MC + BFF would be ok by me as long as it’s skippable

Should I back it?

I did, and I do not generally like to back new games however great they are because too often the dev just vanishes. But.. I’m really hopeful about this one. Will keep an eye on how frequent the releases are and how much content is in them and adjust my support accordingly.

Should you support? If you like Son + Mom + Sisters,,, then YES, if you like Asian teen Girls.. hell yes. If you like harem stories, YES. If you like well animated, seriously the secondary animations such as blinking and breathing in dialog were awesome. This is a solid story, and if it’s kinks push your buttons, it’s one of the best I’ve seen so far.

Hopes:
Please Please Please, I want to see MC tie up the teacher, make her go down on Sis, and drill her back door while she dose, and make her beg for more..

not a bad game at all - could be a 5 star game.
So why did i just 3 stars?
Well, since the renders are decent and the story basicially is nice, i complain about the horrible style of writing.
The developer really overdoes the adressing so that i anger more about the text rather than being able to enjoy the story itself.
In nearly every single short sentence the person speaking mentiones the other by direct adressing.
Example:
- i want to be at your side tonight, brother (or whatever you put in here)
- brother, i want you to kiss me
- oh brother, this feels so nice
- brother, i want you in me now
- yes, like that brother
- i am so happy brother
- brother it feels so good
- i think i am gonna cum now brother
- yes, brother, keep going
- oh brother - this was so nice
......
and so on, and so on - there is barely any sentence where they do NOT direct adresing - this is a complete turn-off (at least for me)

This is quality. It's in my list of "must have" in this genre. Everything fits. The only thing that I can say is that for the moment there is no much characters but when I see the time the dev took to nail the current ones... Beautiful animations even when you're just in a chat and that the chest is moving while they breath. Thanks for this

Nothing groundbreaking here that you can't find done much better somewhere else. The plot is unoriginal and choices don't affect much except for the occasional get femdom'd or don't every once and a while. I expected much more from a 4 1/2 star game.

The story is extremely unrealistic. The MC clearly still suffers from complete amnesia yet he is for some reason allowed to go to school just a few days after release from the hospital and is made to fend for himself without any escort or anything. That would never in a million years, ever happen and it is a very pathetic oversight on the dev's part.

Honestly the plot is awful and cliche. Like I said above, nothing groundbreaking and the MC lands in situations that will leave you rolling your eyes at how nonsensical they are.

I do not usually leave reviews but this VN deserves one. Initially I was skipping this VN due to the very basic Overview but decided to give it a shot and I am very glad that I did.

Story: Currently the story is fairly basic and bare bones with it missing some needed backstory on the MC and certain events that have taken place, hoping this starts happening soon before this starts to feel troupey but otherwise an interesting premise.

Models: This is where the Dev shines, the models are gorgeous and some of the most detailed i have seen to date, add in the animations both lewd and static (blinking during normal scenes, facial expressions, blushing, ect) takes it to the next level.

Gameplay/Choices: There are not many but the ones centering on the powers need a label badly, the slight change in color of the image and the model expression do not give enough detail to know exactly which one you are choosing but it has rollback so its not too bad.

All in all I really like this VN, with some more fleshing out of the story and better choice identification it can easily be a solid 5 stars.

Definitely recommended! 4/5

this is the best game ever, love the design, especially of characters and..private parts. Simply beautiful. Wish there will be actual sex with the asian sisters in the future, the blonde girl is also gorgeous.

The guardian angel tone of the story is very interesting. Renders and animations are really nice. Not only the lewd scenes but casual scenes too. Characters are breathing and blinkin they are not static at all. These kind of things are give muce for the experience.

The game is very good just like his previous one dirty pool but it got on hold or something. Wish it doesnt happen to this one too. And why the fukkk is david in there i just laughed way too hard on seeing him . That poor thing deserves some respect and some sex . Can you add an option to play as david and get him some action cause if it is upto him he is clearly not getting any. 10/10 would recommend

Excelente story,diferent character models (wich is rare),animated sprites looking freaking awesome, game with powers wich im kinda of a fan, not a game wich u go straight in to sex scenes but it's no too grindy either i feel like it's perfect balanced on this sense aswell,no 1k clickable objects and insane/annoying puzzles you HAVE to solve to progress on the game.

At all rates a excelent game!!
( Sorry for the bad english... not my main language)