VN - Ren'Py - My Best Deal [v3.6] [Pirot King]

Another game with some decent renders with a story that sounds mildly interesting, but we get another braindead and spineless MC that sucks any enjoyment out of the game. I made it about two before I just could'nt take the sheer stupidity and utter lack of a backbone.

Summary:
A story about a lost soul that saves a girl from a car gets a deal from a goddess of love and inserted into a body of a young man and granted special powers to make others fall for him. In return you must share the power of love you collect with her, the first people you start to collect that power of love is your new family.

Extraordinary aspects of the game:
Animations in an idle state are something I have never seen before.

What is good:
All the models are good, the animations are beautiful and the story is somewhat interesting.

What is bad:
A lot too sadly, there is a big case of jumping around in the game and feeling gaps with those jumps. A great example is you sitting with your sister in the room and then your other sister enters the room and starting to change while making it obvious that your other sister already left the room even though it wasn't seen or written about, there are many other such examples.

The idle animations I was talking about are too idle, there is only one idle animation every time and it's alright if it's just for a minute of text but sometimes it can be for 5 or more minutes because you don't raise your eyes from the text the animation becomes just an unmoving image if there were sudden changes in animation or something else that would have been fixed.

Monotone sex scenes, the animations are amazing but there are only one or two animations in sex scenes and they all go at the same speed. With means that there is no change as it begins and as it ends as the girls ask to fuck them faster or stronger the same animation rolls.

There is no login in the story, thugs are hunting you and your classmate(girl) so you take her home and you find them there. The first thing that jumps in your head is how to get to the house and not what if they grab my sister's or mom instead.

Or another example you just got from a coma and a hospital you get home and in two days you want to go back to college, your mom insists for you to stay but you change her mind? How? A normal mother would Batista your ass to the bed and won't let you leave until she is sure that you are alright.

And this shit continues you got amnesia so when you go to the college you don't know how to get to it, instead of your sisters taking you there or your mother you take a train there as if nothing wrong don't forget you were in a coma two days ago and you have amnesia as well…

What can be made better:
Fix the bad and the story of the lost soul should be changed I don't see a reason to add it as it just confuses the player.

They could have added that goddess of love saved you as you risked your life to save a girl from the truck and then later reveal that you could have moved from the truck too but chose not to because of the guilt of what you did to your mother with the power of control.

Plus I think they could add small signs that the reason you are attracted to your family is the same power of love you corrupt them with, aka both of the goddesses of love isn’t good as she says and using you.

My opinion:
The game has everything in it to make it an amazing high-quality-tier(10/10) game, but sadly their too many amateur mistakes in it to place it in that tier, so in the end, I will place this game in the good(8/10) tier as it quite good just not good enough.

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Version reviewed: 1.2

A young man is given powers by the goddess of love, and manipulation powers by another goddess. They encourage him to use them.

The models, outfits, and renders are all well done. The story has some depth. I like the domination options. So why only 3 stars?

My big problem with this game is the sheer stupidity of the MC's decisions.
There's a gang of thugs hanging around the front of our home, waiting to attack Annie or me? Yeah, I won't tell mum or my sisters about them.
One of my sisters is jealous of how close I am to her twin? I'll just deny it and tell really stupid lies, even when it's obvious that I'm lying, and I know that she know's I'm lying.
I've talked to one twin, telling her a believable story (a lie, of course) as to why the other's been behaving oddly. Moments later I see the other twin, who asks how it went... and I tell her yet another lie.
There's just never the option to do the smart thing, you've got to choose from a number of dumb choices.

The sex dialogues are also really quite repetitive, which might actually be more realistic, but it's quite painful to read.

[Rev @ v1.2]

Like the art.

Writing is nice, easy to read and the characterization is well done. Scenario's been done but this is a useful take on it.

Porn's fine. Not a fan of the urination but appreciate that it's mostly skippable.

TLDR: Noice. Godspeed~

Renders are good and the main plot is interesting. But the game fails to deliver in many areas that makes a rather promising game just an average one.

Story

The plot idea is good but not well executed. It has a lot of wasted potential. The characters are shallow and don't feel real or relatable at all. They don't have strong motivations. They feel either dumb, pervert or both – just a pawn to move the plot forward.

Lewd content

- Due to how the plot is set, I was expecting a lot more lewd scenes, but there are just a few;
- Renders and Animations are great. Although, they could use more creativity, better framing and angles;
- Models are questionable. A few have beautiful faces. All bodies feels the same with slightly tweaks. Textures used makes the skin looking too porous.

v1.1.6

Excellent build up. Excellent Animations. Excellent Scenes. Excellent Character Models. Excellent Plotline.

5/5

Only criticism would be that a gallery replay option would be great. I made saves at the start of all the parts that interest me but to be honest I'm' only writing this to reach the character count.

Edit: There is a gallery, I had a bit of a stupid moment

This game is above average. I like superhero games and this game has superpowers so its halfway there i suppose. It does not have much choice but has a lot of sex. I have not finished this version but i have played enough to leave a review i feel. I feel that the renders are okay and could be improved further. I will adjust the score if i feel that the game has progressed in a way i like. I also think the the artist should increase the saturation for the outside scenes .

The game is fun... I just wish he had focused some of his amazing skills on showing penetration... If they would have shown that more this game would be 5/5... But great game, good story great animations...

The female domination tag is well earned as all the sex scenes are femdom, simp or rapist and the MC is a sub so if you are not super into that then give this game a pass, honestly i wish it had been clearer this was a total femdom game from the start as i wouldn't have bothered with it.

The opening part of the game is an overly complicated boring explanation which only serves to make the incest content pointless and to add loads of time wasting content(trying to regain memories the MC cant possibly have), really through why would you want to be revived if you don't remember your past life, who you are is shaped by experiences so essentially she wanted a sucker to give up his memories(basicly who he is) because she fucked up and sent that other guy on too soon and the MC is too dumb to realise this so now the game is just a permanent amnesia story with the MC being indebted to a god who wants to use him, seems like it would have been easier to just say that in order for the coma guy to come out of it he has to agree to what she wants him to do.

While the opening is pointless its just the tip of the iceberg on things that don't make any sense in this game, examples: no doctor anywhere would suggest going back to college two days after being in a coma especially with full amnesia, why does the MC who is not the original mental owner of his body "remember" things he was not around for, teachers drugging students, saying/thinking one thing but doing the exact opposite for no reason, why does the MC even do any of this he has no goal, anything involving david(really being a panty thief what is he 12), etc....

As for the women well they are pretty bad with even the goddess betraying the MC by leaving out stuff so she can use the MC, the mom and sisters are incredibly eager to get it on with the MC both with and without using the powers so no challenge there and they have no personality beyond wanting sex.

MC makes it into my top 5 most pathetic MC's ever, he will see a situation analize it to know what would be the worst thing to do even saying this wont end well if i do that and then for some reason do it anyway(every single time), almost always he will just go along with whatever is asked of him making the MC seem like he has no will of his own and on top of that all the characters including the MC are emotionless robots.

Most conversations in the game go like this:
MC: hi i don't remember anything because coma.
Other person: hey do you remember this?.
MC: no.
Other person: how could you forget.

If you don't follow the creators chosen path(selena's side) then the dialogue dosent match the choices the MC makes, its clear the "choices" are an after thought and do nothing but see sex scene or not.

On the plus side the art is some of the best around with some really good animations, it is worth a run through just to see them.

Story 1/5 (very bad)
Sex 4/5 (great quality)
Characters 1/5 (no good ones)
Art 5/5 (top quality)
Choices 1/5 (didn't find any that do anything)
Kinks 2/5 (watered-down incest and urination)

Very hot so far. Linear, but compelling.
Wish the MC would be more proactive, and its weird that he gets hung up on "family" (in the non official patch of course) whenever he's in a new body thats not his, it's not "his" family.

But ah well. Good mind control scenes, hot models. I just hope that they continue to push the kinks to their extremes.

3 stars is an honest review, imo anything beyond that is people being hopeful about where this game COULD go. At v1.1, if dev walked away, this game is average (aka 3 stars per F95 ratings). The mom, sister, and sister characters are... hit or miss, mostly hit though. I like their models. There is quite a bit of H content with one of the sisters, nothing with the other one, and a smidge of H content with the mom. Additionally, the story... exists? It's not horrible, the writing is okay and... yeah, it's okay lol.

So in summary, it's 3 stars because it needs more H content (imo) and the story is meh. I can totally see this being a 4 star game one day. Not today.

beautiful animation and characters ,story was fine ,special sexy sister ,one of the best game in f95 about graphic and animation i ever play , hope to see more scenes of Rin&Lin individually cuz they are gem of asian characters in f95 and deserves to be focus more than others in the game. good job Pirot King

At first it was the Mother...

Rin is iNsane....
She is carrying "My Best Deal" on her little shoulder like a boss!

Anyway the game is really entartaining:

+ Amazing renders...
+ Amazing animations...
+ Rin
+ Corruption Story and some superpowers

Amazing "little" iNcest game with a lot of hot scenes and some drama mixed in!!! <3

Really good character models, renders and animations, terrible writing unfortunately, the base idea is great but the dialogues between characters is just bad, also a lot of inner thinking. Play if tor the quality renders if nothing else.

Very disappointed! The last project was very good, but the developer did not finish it and abandoned it. His new project is much better graphically, but the plot is boring, there is almost no choice, the one that is, does not affect the game. The characters are not interesting, as the developer is focused on graphics, development is very slow. Version 1.0 has already been released, but the game is still boring. It would be better to continue developing Dirty Pool...

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Очень разочарован! Прошлый проект был невероятно хорош, но разработчик не доделал его и забросил. Что уже характеризует его не с лучшей стороны... Его новый проект, значительно лучше в плане графики, но сюжет скучный, практически нет выбора, а там где выбор есть, по факту, он не влияет на игру никак. Персонажи не интересные, вот вообще никто не цепляет, эти две сестрёнки шаблонные куклы, вызывают только отвращение. Так как разработчик вкладывает все свои силы в графику, разработка идёт очень медленно. Вышла уже версия 1.0, но игра всё такая же скучная и вообще ни о чём. Лучше бы дальше разрабатывал Dirty Pool...

The renders of the women are good, but the story is fairly weak, and develops way too slowly. The erotic scenes are tame, and the MC has too much self-doubt for my comfort. Most choices make no difference. This one had potential, but turned out kind of bland and average.

This game is on a high level of quality. Speaking of quality, quality of renders is abnormally good, animations are high above average, background music very suiting, calming, relaxing and perfectly setting the atmosphere of the game. Story part is no exception in terms of quality. Very nice storytelling with good plot so far. I also like the paranormal/mythicism breath of the story. Devs are doing definetely good job and I can surely recommand this game. 9/10. [v1.0].

The premise is interesting, but... The divine powers are introduced apparently because the protagonist has a negative amount of charisma.

• MC is a boring, lame idiot. For instance, he runs away from sexy situations (like when Rin was undressing), and he can't hold off pressure.
• His landlady is nagging and boring too.
• Writing is clumsy and uninspiring, rather long-winded than colorful.
• Girls are not really pretty (except Annie).
• Not many choices, and none of them are meaningful and without submission of some kind.

Conclusion: the game is not bad, but bleak, with boring writing and lame characters.

Plus one star for cutie Annie, otherwise it would be not worth playing at all.

The game looks great with a well written story but it just seems like your everyone's bitch. i try to chose every option to defy these people and i still lose. Maybe just add like one fuck you moment.

The render and animation quality are among the best this site has to offer and even better in some senses. The plot is also more than compelling enough to keep us hooked for a little while

That being said - a few of the characters are a bit bland and sometimes annoying, esp David. So much to the point that it requires an actual physical break to process his stupidity

That being said, it's still an excellent game. The writing and aforementioned renders are enough to pique and maintain my interest. I personally dont mind the lack of choices that people are mentioning as there's already more than enough content to make up for it