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Xill

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Obviously the story told in this VN is fucking extreme. It's fiction after all.
However, in real life there are really crazy similar stories. I've experienced two up close. One when I was a teenager, I was hanging out with a group for a while where there was a loser who was humiliated beyond belief. I remember that one time they put him in a garbage container, and they threw him down a steep street. And the craziest thing is one time they forced him to stay still while they pissed on his leg. And the fucking loser kept hanging out with them and said they were his friends. They humiliate you and you say they're your friends? Sorry man, but you don't deserve anything else.
Sounds like a severe case of mental abuse. It's the reason why so many people allow themselves to be abused and just think it's the natural order of things. Makes my blood boil whenever I hear of things like that. He probably thought this was normal friendship. Probably neglected by his parents too. In cases like these that person needs help ASAP. There's not much you can do about the bullies other than beating them up but that won't solve his issues. I sure hope he got the help he needed because if he didn't then I wouldn't doubt that the worst came to pass.
 

Mistress_Kixen

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Not a game but rather a kinetic novel seeing as there were no choices for you to make in this game. However while this story was indeed brutal it wasn't brutal enough. Part of me was wishing that it wouldn't have been just his mother getting it, but rather also Ryan the supposed girl who said she didn't truly like him. It would have been even more brutal seeing Jake rearrange Ryan's guts in front of him while making her moan and scream the brutal truth right in front of him that she never liked him all the while still using his mother as a cock sleeve until he knocked her up and decided not to deal with her anymore.

And to think this revenge all started because the MC had more balls than most beta's and actually fought back in the form of a punch that caught the bully off guard.

One last thing that could have made the ending more brutal if not for anything else would have been while the Jake was rearranging Daniel's mother's guts Daniel due to how brutal and heavy things were would have taken his final Journey and hang himself.
 
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I loved the game and If there is a similar game, let me know.
حبيت العبه ومرا جوي واذا فيه لعبه مشاهبة علمني:love:
 
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I understand the complaints that the story could have been longer, but the story was really over. Yes, the story could have been made a bit longer at the end. For example, showing the whole gangbang and not just one scene on video. And a final scene of extreme degradation and humiliation could have been added. I don't know, for example Jake forcing Daniel to enter the room, and having to watch his mother being fucked and moaning like a bitch. Even forcing him to masturbate in front of his mother, or even something even more depraved. But, again, the story was already over and there is a risk of making it too long unnecessarily.

However, you know what I think? I think that in the end the developer didn't want to spend more money on art. It's as simple as that. The story could have been perfectly finished there and adding more scenes was spending more money by really adding little to a story that was already told.
See, having something like: the MC sees what a depraved slut his Mom has become, getting off while being roughly (ruthlessly) fucked by his bullies, he ends up demanding they let him fuck her while they watch. He reams her with his reasonably-sized (or greater) dick and gives her a good-ole creampie, maybe followed by some group sex or something even more perverted.

*That* would be hot, IMO. But they always turn the MC into some submissive/weak loser with a small dick who only cries or, at most, jerks off while hidden away from the object of his lust (his Mom). Or, even worse, remains oblivious to what his Mom has been doing with his bullies (or strangers).

I don't want to point the finger at the Dev for how this story ends, it's just that seeing some of these posts made me want to bring this up: I'm just broaching something that's been on my mind for a while now.
 
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soldano

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See, having something like: the MC sees what a depraved slut his Mom has become, getting off while being roughly (ruthlessly) fucked by his bullies, he ends up demanding they let him fuck her while they watch. He reams her with his reasonably-sized (or greater) dick and gives her a good-ole creampie, maybe followed by some group sex or something even more perverted.

*That* would be hot, IMO. But they always turn the MC into some submissive/weak loser with a small dick who only cries or, at most, jerks off while hidden away from the object of his lust (his Mom). Or, even worse, remains oblivious to what his Mom has been doing with his bullies (or strangers).

I don't want to point the finger at the Dev for how this story ends, it's just that seeing some of these posts made me want to bring this up: I'm just broaching something that's been on my mind for a while now.
But that would completely change the meaning of the character. Both the MC and his mother are cowards, losers, and weak people with no self-respect. Making the MC suddenly a pervert who wants to fuck his mother, and then grow two balls to do it, makes no sense in this story. It might be hot if you're into incest. But narratively, it doesn't work.

And I want to emphasize that both, mother and son, are two easily abused puppets. Two shrimp that run into a motherfucking shark who decides to turn them into his toys. That's the driving force of this story.
 
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I realize that. I was talking on a more general level than just this story. Sorry. I shouldn't have used this thread to post something so general, but it just spilled out after reading an earlier post. My bad.
 
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