Finished chapters one and two, going to save the third for when there's more content. For those wondering they're short and sweet, each chapter takes ~20-30 minutes in a single sitting. It's really jarring when Cynthia refers to MC as they though, guess he's got moobs and she's not sure what he is.
- Thread starter UncleArtie
- Start date
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
The plan for the final game is you'll be able to choose male or female depending if you wanted to play it straight or as a yuri. Male will be the default for now for budget reasons, but the "theys" are there so I don't have to change everything when I put the second gender in at the end of the game.
The ket can open fridges and tins herself anyway (yay for opposable thumbs) so the servant has even less significance than usual; indifference to minor details is to be expected. /ᐠ｡ꞈ｡ᐟ\
It may be easier for you for when you add the second gender, but it really reads bad when "she rested a hand on their shoulder".
Are the They's, Their, and other gender bender crap going to stay after you add the other gender?
If i were to buy a book and the author used "they" instead of him/her/his/hers etc, i would take it back and get my money back with the book unread. Its poor writing meant to appease a few vocal idiots that want to ruin everything for everyone else.
Are the They's, Their, and other gender bender crap going to stay after you add the other gender?
If i were to buy a book and the author used "they" instead of him/her/his/hers etc, i would take it back and get my money back with the book unread. Its poor writing meant to appease a few vocal idiots that want to ruin everything for everyone else.
- Jan 17, 2020
- 40
- 18
Not sure your inspiration for the game, it reminds me a bit of Miss Kobayoshi's Dragon Made and Helpful Fox Senko-san with a little My Roommate is a cat thrown in. I agree with the wholesomeness, looking forward to how their relationship grows.
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
Yes.
Miss Kobayoshi's Dragon Maid and Helpful Fox Senko-San were the inspirations. I'll have to check out My Roommate is a Cat. Sounds like it could be fun.
Noticed a minor typo (mainly because it took me out of the story), otherwise still enjoying!
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
- Nov 27, 2018
- 749
- 341
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
I uploaded a small hotfix for Chapter 3 to fix the reported spelling mistakes and to try and smooth out the klunkiness of the "they" pronouns for the player character. It should be a lot smoother to read through now.
Serves a real purpose when translating from languages with gender-neutral pronouns (Japanese being a notable example), particularly in contexts where the ambiguity is a plot point, tho.
- Aug 6, 2017
- 1,366
- 2,076
I always knew I was going to like this whenever i sat down to try it, but it's almost annoying how adorable this is and how easily it hits my good feels buttons.
Keep up the great work UncleArtie.
Keep up the great work UncleArtie.
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
Small update: The UI has been upgraded and I went through Ch1-3 and cleaned up a lot of the spelling and grammar errors.
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
Depends on the chapter. Ch1 has two, Ch2 has four and Ch3 has none. When the story is complete, I'm going to put all the chapters into a single game and create a gallery to manage all the cgs better.
- Feb 17, 2020
- 147
- 422
Chapter 4 is up.
A quick message to anyone that was playing a female MC up to this point, it's going to be a bit of a wait before we can get the art together for the yuri h-scenes. We needed to focus on one while we put out the chapters and just based on popular comments, it made more sense to start with the male MC's route. I'm sorry it will take a little bit, but please bear with us.
A quick message to anyone that was playing a female MC up to this point, it's going to be a bit of a wait before we can get the art together for the yuri h-scenes. We needed to focus on one while we put out the chapters and just based on popular comments, it made more sense to start with the male MC's route. I'm sorry it will take a little bit, but please bear with us.
Whoa, looks like Generic Anime Male may start to have some.... character growth!?
The plot is developing and I'm all sorts of ready for Chapter 5!
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
The plot is developing and I'm all sorts of ready for Chapter 5!
Last edited: