VN Ren'Py My FemBoyFriend Phone [Ch.2.21.86] [RoboPenguinGames]

[RoboPenguinGames]

Good morning friend. I would like to know if there will be a translation into Portuguese, because I really liked your game. Congratulations on that.

Hello! In the distant future - perhaps yes, I will be able to automate translation into different languages.But now it will take a lot of time

 

[Silwith]

On another note...

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Clearly of those green messages attributed to "me" there, most should actually be coming from him... and thats not the only time it happens

I generally really like the game and want more (even tho we only get love and ntr so far, no nts, but I guess that comes later on love? It does feel kinda ntr-rail, even with love, so, thats a thing to look out for), but it feels very chaotic with the messages being just thrown in, seemingly often not attributed to the right person, then stuff like "Here a picture of me and billy" and you get a picture with just him ect, it is making everything kinda convoluted...
And thats not even accounting for that the "mesh top without anything else" looks like some latex top, nothing mesh there or that the picture the psychologist sends at the end he has different clothes then the ones he was actually wearing... it's just a looot of little mistakes that kinda add up.

 

[RoboPenguinGames]

On another note...

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Clearly of those green messages attributed to "me" there, most should actually be coming from him... and thats not the only time it happens

I generally really like the game and want more (even tho we only get love and ntr so far, no nts, but I guess that comes later on love? It does feel kinda ntr-rail, even with love, so, thats a thing to look out for), but it feels very chaotic with the messages being just thrown in, seemingly often not attributed to the right person, then stuff like "Here a picture of me and billy" and you get a picture with just him ect, it is making everything kinda convoluted...
And thats not even accounting for that the "mesh top without anything else" looks like some latex top, nothing mesh there or that the picture the psychologist sends at the end he has different clothes then the ones he was actually wearing... it's just a looot of little mistakes that kinda add up.

Thank you very much for your detailed comment! This is constructive and correct criticism! Many thanks to you for this Do you know of any other errors in the game? I will definitely study everything you wrote and try to fix it! This really shouldn't be in the game! If you know of any other errors, please write them as a list here, I will fix everything!

 

[Silwith]

Thank you very much for your detailed comment! This is constructive and correct criticism! Many thanks to you for this Do you know of any other errors in the game? I will definitely study everything you wrote and try to fix it! This really shouldn't be in the game! If you know of any other errors, please write them as a list here, I will fix everything!

Well, to give it in a more easy to read list instead of wall of text

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I do hope this goes on tho, I kinda like these kinda phone games and we aren't exactly swamped with gay versions , which makes this really cool And the writing and story set-up isn't bad either, it's really mostly little mistakes that take me out of the flow of the game.
And hey, it's a new game, so making mistakes happens, you learn as you go Honestly, if you fix that stuff and we get to a point where we start to see some nts (or general "action" at least, I do like ntr too, so I will play that route too, but still, main route I wanna see willing nts xP) I may very well throw a few bucks to you patreon too, I certainly like the concept enough for that.

 

[RoboPenguinGames]

Well, to give it in a more easy to read list instead of wall of text

Spoiler: Things :D

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I do hope this goes on tho, I kinda like these kinda phone games and we aren't exactly swamped with gay versions , which makes this really cool And the writing and story set-up isn't bad either, it's really mostly little mistakes that take me out of the flow of the game.
And hey, it's a new game, so making mistakes happens, you learn as you go Honestly, if you fix that stuff and we get to a point where we start to see some nts (or general "action" at least, I do like ntr too, so I will play that route too, but still, main route I wanna see willing nts xP) I may very well throw a few bucks to you patreon too, I certainly like the concept enough for that.

Thank you very much for the feedback!
Submissiveness and dominance will play a role later in the lines and available choices. In each branch these choices will be expressed in their own way

 

[muitoloco]

Good evening friend. I have no criticisms about the game, in fact only praise. But I would like to add an opinion. A more relevant tip, like one in the messages, maybe an emblem, love or ntr, cuck. I don't know. I hope this is not out of context, because I am not very knowledgeable about the subject. Even so, thanks for the great game. And good luck.

 

[RoboPenguinGames]

Good evening friend. I have no criticisms about the game, in fact only praise. But I would like to add an opinion. A more relevant tip, like one in the messages, maybe an emblem, love or ntr, cuck. I don't know. I hope this is not out of context, because I am not very knowledgeable about the subject. Even so, thanks for the great game. And good luck.

Hello! Thank you, I will think about how to implement this

 

[Nimbus Commando]

make him disapear, or make him into a pet would be nice or just get with eric and ditch alex

Or just smash Erics teeth out with a crowbar.