Others My Girlfriend's Streaming Career [v0.1.1] [viviny]

[orruk]

This is how the personalized video route ends.
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didn't show us the video just cucked us with a cliffhanger..

Yeah, the fact that there is only really 1 ero scene in that path, and it ends abruptly is annoying.

If one of the only 2 paths of the game are not done, I don't think it can really be labeled a "1.0" release. :v

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

I want to create an NTR/NTS focused game.

Boom stop right there. Even as someone who isn't a particular fan of the genre. Make the game built on what your original idea is. Especially if it's your 1st game. I'm not someone who believes you can't please both crowds. But doing so would require time, effort, with a dash of does it make sense. If at some point you get the inkling in your balls to do something wholesome. Come back to it sometime later. I imagine it would make vanilla easier, since you'd have the pitfalls mapped out.

Don't stretch yourself thin trying to please both sides. Before you're sure you can please your primary audience.

 

[Viviny]

Yeah, the fact that there is only really 1 ero scene in that path, and it ends abruptly is annoying.

If one of the only 2 paths of the game are not done, I don't think it can really be labeled a "1.0" release. :v

My bad, should have called it 0.1, not really familiar with the "how to release a project", was my first time doing it

 

[thevampirate]

I wanted to publish the game on Zone once the story was more developed, And once the features were more polished.
It's a bit sad that I didn't have control over this, but it's fine.

I also wanted to know if you guys are here for the NTR/NTS or the Vanilla.
I want to create an NTR/NTS focused game. But if you really want more Vanilla, please tell me.

English is not my first language—sorry about that (っ- ‸ - ς)

The fact that it got found and posted here so quickly shows people like it and its good. I'll start by saying personally I like Vanilla mostly but I do like lighter NTR games like with trainer games and Corruption games with female MCs. I think this game fits a 'Trainer/corruption' game story/theme like Space Channel 69 (by Akabur) even if you go down a more Visual novel type path (its much easier to code and write that way).

TLDR: Below is specifically my opinions and input for the author, if you want to read go ahead.

You can still have a branching story and still easily use all or most of the CGs for all paths and progress down more and more NTR/NTS themes. If you want to do a multi path game that follows a single narrative like that I would have Yamato return early on and the game can branch out in from there. For players who want only the Vanilla path, the dialogue would have Yamato is the one who is helping Mio create content and help/push her streaming career but skip multi-partner scenes. If you never show the male heads/faces in any path the Solo and Boy/Girl content could be both Vanilla and NTR/NTS with only minor dialogue changes. That would simplify things a bit by using the same narrative and art with only a slightly different script and dialogue. You could continue it as a NTR story while opening it to a much bigger audience like AKABUR and trainer game fans who might not like Pure NTR.

An example of how this would work in action would go something like this. Yamato always is involved with filming and sharing vids of Mio for all the world to see. That would start with all scenes like the video in the demo with Yamato filming and any Solo Mio content, but would eventually ask the player if they want to do to any scene with 2 or more men like bukakke and gangbangs. If the player says yes that would open up Sharing Route scenes or go on without them if you don't and never mention them for as long as you want to continue the Vanilla stuff. You can decide how early or late that is depending on how dominant you want Yamato to be and what story you want to tell.
If you want to go a Cuck Route or make a Mio decide to go behind Yamato's back, you could replace Yamato in some or all sex scene with viewers. Logically, the Viewers or Mio would be the one filming everything but you could still have Yamato filming if you really want to tell a story about Yamato getting cucked and being a really submissive person. The only problem with that is there's really no going back to vanilla at that point. If that's the story you want to tell that's fine and I'd still support you.
There's a good compromise if you want to sometimes tell those kinds of stories but make it appeal to more people like me. Make BAD ENDING options pop up every now and then similar to the happy end in v1.0 (label them, if you don't people will get mad). That way you can write different kinds of NTR/NTS stories while still keeping the lighter feel and audience of the main story that I think your game will appeal to. I don't know NTS/NTR/NTE well enough to tell the difference but i think you can have your cake and eat it too.

 

[Viviny]

Thanks for your comment! There is a lot of things ahah, I will spend more time tomorrow and see what I could/would use in the game. ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

 

[Axel34]

The only time vanilla is welcome in a NTR game is if it is both avoidable and skippable.

Not necessary. In many netorase (and some light netorare) scenarios both vanila/romance and NTR can be well represented and unavoidable at the same time. This does not make the games worse, but it may scare off some players (and, on the contrary, attract some).

 

[Viviny]

Okay guys, I updated the game on itch.io changed the version of the game from 1.0 to 0.1 (0.1.1 because I added a small feature) to make it clear that this is early in development. I added the fast forward button.
I don't know how to publish the new version of the game on Zone tho...
If someone can tell me, or if someone could publish it, I would be grateful

 

[artstory1999]

Did shy get pregnant though a stream?

 

[greenlittleman]

Boom stop right there. Even as someone who isn't a particular fan of the genre. Make the game built on what your original idea is. Especially if it's your 1st game. I'm not someone who believes you can't please both crowds. But doing so would require time, effort, with a dash of does it make sense. If at some point you get the inkling in your balls to do something wholesome. Come back to it sometime later. I imagine it would make vanilla easier, since you'd have the pitfalls mapped out.

Don't stretch yourself thin trying to please both sides. Before you're sure you can please your primary audience.

You realize that to actually please the NTR bunch, a developer should start with vanilla, anyway? Also, there's really not much audience for vanilla with AI art, and vanilla lovers won't be very enthusiastic about a game with an e-thot heroine. The game's premise would work well with NTR and NTS, but for a good vanilla you'd need a rather different premise. I'm pretty much sure that the game would be way more marketable as NTR, and as a developer he has all the right to focus on a more profitable path.

 

[REFZ1150]

I like game concept. keep improve UI and function. i hope game keep update don't keep me waiting too long

 

[Blead96]

Could somebody upload a hotfix for the the chat speed? It's kinda too slow~

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on itch.

 

[Karcosa]

I enjoyed this demo, art is nice and i really like the idea, best of luck for the dev, waiting for next update

 

[TofuCircle]

My bad, should have called it 0.1, not really familiar with the "how to release a project", was my first time doing it

I'm not sure myself, but there seems to be 3? Major, medium, minor. Like version 1.0.0 means it's a complete game. You could add more stuff, but even if you don't, the game is complete and doesn't feel like anything's missing. The middle number is for updates that add a good chunk of content, while the third number is for small content updates or updates that fix some bugs.

 

[Eldiran]

If you allow me my 2 cents, i'm not a fan of these on/off about NTR in the option. I mean don't get me wrong, i want to get the love route but with the trill of the NTR. Meaning i've to do something to save the girl, having the chill of no knowing if she is doing something in the background (like in hidden NTR), having the feeling that i must do something before it's too late, things like that. I don't mind a bit of corruption if that lead to that as long as she is genuinly in love with the MC (and generaly i prefer if she won't have sex with someone else); all in all i don't want a fake love between the MC and the FMC.
Like for exemple she kinda want to explore more sexy stuff and because the MC don't get that, she is going somewhere else but you can prevent that by getting more into what she want, or you arrive just before her being raped, stuff like that. A lot is possible in this departement : )

Not necessary. In many netorase (and some light netorare) scenarios both vanila/romance and NTR can be well represented and unavoidable at the same time. This does not make the games worse, but it may scare off some players (and, on the contrary, attract some).

I agree 100%, the NTR genre is quite diverse after all.
Also i think Netorare work better if the vanilla was strong before the NTR happen. If you understand how strong the love was, the feel are stronger when the love fade away. I'm not the main audience so i could be wrong but that's how i feel : )

 

[LumosLio]

Need the full game rn ;(

 

[Kekekerkek]

the game seems to have potential, how many updates per months? and it would be nice to have a save or to at least know which path we are going

 

[Raxwell]

Cough... cough..! "Genre: cheating, netorare, netorase, ntr"

The tags weren't there. But based on the Dev's comments, they should have released it with the tags included to avoid things. It will be another NTR phone game for cucks.

 

[Viviny]

the game seems to have potential, how many updates per months? and it would be nice to have a save or to at least know which path we are going

Hey, thanks for your comment! I plan to add the save slot for the next update, and I plan to update the game twice a month (I would like to make at least each update 15-20 minutes long, if you don't use the fast forward button of course) c:

 

[Agglutinant]

Hello everyone, Creator of the game here c:
I'm here to have a dialogue with you about the game.

I planned to create a save slot for the version 1.2, I wanted to have some feedback first.

For the gaming experience, I initially chose not to add a forward button.
I did this because I thought it was unnecessary...
I was wrong here... (◞‸ ◟)
I'll release a patch to add this feature in the coming days.

About the NTR part of the game (and the tag situation):
As of version 1.0, there is no NTR/NTS content, Even though you can tell which direction the game is heading.
I initially wanted to release the first versions of the game only on Itch.io to get feedback.
I wanted to publish the game on Zone once the story was more developed, And once the features were more polished.
It's a bit sad that I didn't have control over this, but it's fine.

I also wanted to know if you guys are here for the NTR/NTS or the Vanilla.
I want to create an NTR/NTS focused game. But if you really want more Vanilla, please tell me.

I'll read all the comments and reply when needed.
I will try my best to create a better game.
English is not my first language—sorry about that (っ- ‸ - ς)

Have a nice day!

I'm personally only interested on the NTR/NTS content. And hopefully no annoying female friend that is a slut that constantly teases the MC like in many NTS games.

 

[Kekekerkek]

Hey, thanks for your comment! I plan to add the save slot for the next update, and I plan to update the game twice a month (I would like to make at least each update 15-20 minutes long, if you don't use the fast forward button of course) c:

your welcome, if it's your first game you are doing great! as of right now is there a path for netorase or netorare or will we choose it in later updates?