VN Ren'Py My Goddess [v0.03] [Blackthunder_vn]

[QaliberDK]

I'm a bit into the story now and it's a mixed experience. Renders are decent, i like the premise but it suffers from the same issue as Troubled Legacy. The writing, especially for the characters, is very hit or miss. The first one-on-one meeting with Vera really annoyed me. I'm not even sure what her deal is, she felt like a retarded conspiracy Karen on a power trip. I'd tell her to go suck a fat one, if i could, but i'm afraid she's get confused and shove a spoon up her ass, as her remaining 14 braincells struggle with my request

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

QaliberDK I'm not an studied author nor writer... so maybe the writing isn't 100% onpoint yeah.

I also like to do weird chars... Vera is thought as a spoiled little brat, who wants to happen what she thinks is the right thing...
Like saving Bianca from MC and her ex, but she also is a woman who want's him and got rejected by him.

Now she acts like a little spoiled brat stomping her feet to the ground... oh the next update will be great...

 

[Danv]

my two cents
didn't expect much from this one, i'm usually trying to stay away from KNs due to heavy reliance on good writing to pass, but it ended up being surprisingly good
writing overall is quite decent, with normal story for a slice of life, without any unnecessary bullshit shoved in to make it "original" which usually only ruins whole thing
characters are mostly fine, yeah Vera is a fucking cunt and that popo piece of shit on a powertrip (as all fucking cops), but rest of them are good so far... well, Jenny could use better hair, this fucking "wet rat after washing machine" asset is ugly as fuck, but eh...
looking forward for next updates

 

[Steinchen]

ummmm somehow the father looks younger than the son in the flashback whats with that???
if he has a further role later in the game that would look so weird....

 

[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.03

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Updated my android port.

 

[Hammerhiem]

I've tried and tried to get through Ep 3 but OMFG it's like reading the worst YA romance fiction of all time, the two girls, who i fucking hate so much now, that i don't even remember who they are, lets call them Insecure and her Friend melodramatic.

Well Insecure and melodramatic appear to have the mind and emotional intellegance of 11 year olds, then their mindless fucking drivel lasts for scene after scene after boring scene.

Dude seriously you can't write emotion for shit, and no one is coming to F95 to download YA, you can get away with one scene of this stuff before everyone gets bored, and you wrote 4 back to back.

Try and write Insecure and melodramatic like actual human beings or at least give me a way to skipthe dialogue.

 

[OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney]

Try and write Insecure and melodramatic like actual human beings or at least give me a way to skipthe dialogue.

You can skip by pressing CTRL.

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

Hammerhiem If you don't like it you don't have to play my games, there are a lot of games on the World Wide Web also called Internet which eventually fit your likings.

My tip for you to skip the hated dialogue of my game is pressing ALT + F4.

Sorry if it may sound harsh or so, I really don't want to offend you with my answer.

Have a nice day.
Blackthunder

 

[divingmedic]

my two cents
didn't expect much from this one, i'm usually trying to stay away from KNs due to heavy reliance on good writing to pass, but it ended up being surprisingly good
writing overall is quite decent, with normal story for a slice of life, without any unnecessary bullshit shoved in to make it "original" which usually only ruins whole thing
characters are mostly fine, yeah Vera is a fucking cunt and that popo piece of shit on a powertrip (as all fucking cops), but rest of them are good so far... well, Jenny could use better hair, this fucking "wet rat after washing machine" asset is ugly as fuck, but eh...
looking forward for next updates

Spoiled brats need bent over and given a good and proper spanking... just saying.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Love this stuff its fun. Not looking for Shakespeare just some fun on my downtime. I have a few DEVs who can do it Black is one of them. Keep me entertained.

 

[Punto]

Wait for the next update