VN Ren'Py My Goddess [v0.03] [Blackthunder_vn]

[QaliberDK]

I'm a bit into the story now and it's a mixed experience. Renders are decent, i like the premise but it suffers from the same issue as Troubled Legacy. The writing, especially for the characters, is very hit or miss. The first one-on-one meeting with Vera really annoyed me. I'm not even sure what her deal is, she felt like a retarded conspiracy Karen on a power trip. I'd tell her to go suck a fat one, if i could, but i'm afraid she's get confused and shove a spoon up her ass, as her remaining 14 braincells struggle with my request

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

QaliberDK I'm not an studied author nor writer... so maybe the writing isn't 100% onpoint yeah.

I also like to do weird chars... Vera is thought as a spoiled little brat, who wants to happen what she thinks is the right thing...
Like saving Bianca from MC and her ex, but she also is a woman who want's him and got rejected by him.

Now she acts like a little spoiled brat stomping her feet to the ground... oh the next update will be great...

 

[Danv]

my two cents
didn't expect much from this one, i'm usually trying to stay away from KNs due to heavy reliance on good writing to pass, but it ended up being surprisingly good
writing overall is quite decent, with normal story for a slice of life, without any unnecessary bullshit shoved in to make it "original" which usually only ruins whole thing
characters are mostly fine, yeah Vera is a fucking cunt and that popo piece of shit on a powertrip (as all fucking cops), but rest of them are good so far... well, Jenny could use better hair, this fucking "wet rat after washing machine" asset is ugly as fuck, but eh...
looking forward for next updates