Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Happy Family [Ch. 2 Intro Part 1] [SayWhatProdutions]

An interesting take that's a bit different than some of these other stores. Excited to see where this goes. Some spelling mistakes, but you understand what's going on. You do have to be thoughtful of your choices.

Just played Chapter 1.

Like:

• The ladies are all good to look at and the range of personalities is predictable but good as well.
• The MC - nice guy, but definitely not a saint.
• The use of variable font sizes to help denote emotion in the dialogue.
• Characters with freckles!
• The gradual build-up and the likelihood of a wide range of stuff happening in the future.
• The fact that at the moment it isn’t even true NTR at all. It might be in future and we’ll see how everyone deals with it. Who knows, everyone may be cool with multiple dicks as well as multiple pussies; wouldn’t that piss off the NTR haters!
• And I’ll give it an extra star too, to counteract the people on this forum with such a hatred of sharing the girls they shit on everything even remotely associated with it.

Dislike:

• The wordy dialogue. For me it could be a lot briefer. I found myself skipping large slabs and still getting the overall feel of the story and the characters. Better spell checking would be good too, but the main negative is the verbosity and the way it slows things down.
• Little sister – gray hair?!

Good game, love the situations, and the art is great as well. Only thing I'd comment is that this needs more slow burn to truly become amazing. Looking forward to seeing more updates and how the "plot" progresses.

NTR game with actual decent storytelling, look at that. Not that i can't appreciate some straightforward cucking, but its nice to see someone actually try to make stuff a bit more interesting.
Besides that the game also does some other interesting things; the phone scenes with the MC's girlfriend are hot as hell and these kinds of scenarios are severely underutilized in western NTR games.
The kind of "reverse-corruption" of the mothers new boyfriend is also gonna be fun to see. I'm looking forwards to the point where he starts going all out, however that may shape up.
There's not a lot of porn content as of now (chapter 1 release), but what IS there is already good and the setup is done very well and makes me think the stuff that's yet to come will be even better.

Normally I'd give 4/5 stars for the game is obviously not finished yet and I suppose the renders while good could be a bit better in terms of lighting and contrast. But as per usual people with an irrational hate for NTR throw around 1 and 2 star ratings and making retarded strawman arguments instead of just ignoring what they don't like. So I suppose I'd level the scales a bit.

Of the advantages - worthy character models and the fact that the "antagonist" has a personality (this is quite rare in NTR games).

But unfortunately it doesn't matter as this game has a dumb MC.
VERY dumb MC.

Dont like NTR but it's a quality game, I also really can't feel bad for the MC since he's so unlikable. He's basically a brat who is like half the size of the other guys. I'll probably just use a gallery mod when/ if one is made since NTR stories aren't my thing.

The updates getting worse, character writing getting worse, and the worst of all is, that the MC is a stupid cunt, that doesn't even had the chance of avoiding this NTR shit. When I first saw and played this game, I liked the female models but the MC is just a fking dumb prick. But still, hate even more that he's getting cucked by some old fat black guy.

I was a bit skeptical of this games direction at first (I played the first versions) but after playing version 0.0.8 im convinced this game had a great direction and could be amazing if you like NTR, corruption and BBC.

*GOOD*
- The look: This games look is pretty great (even before the dev got an upgraded GPU). It had a shiny vibrant look about it that feels fresh and maybe even innocent, perfect for corruption.
- Characters: An amazing cast of characters to watch fall to corruption and BBC interest. You have a hot vulnerable mom, a tomboy (tsundre) sister, a cute innocent sister and the girlfriend who we know the least about but is abroad in Greece.
- Setup Before v0.0.8: The first couple versions of this game focused heavily on the home life of the MC (who can be pretty dumb and annoying but not over the line). These showed why the older sister has problems with the MC and the family dynamic. To be honest it was getting kind of boring with lots of little nudity like nip slips and whatnot but no NTR, but the preview images helped show that the dev was going to absolutely corrupt these girls in the future and so that was a good sign and kept me coming back.
- Setup V0.08: With this new version the dev really showed some skill with the phone and computer chat conversations, I am a sucker for mystery NTR so these phone calls with the GF on the plane and between the older sis and GF really were perfect for me, you get a little glimpse into the GF's trip abroad and what she is being exposed too, it lets your mind try to fill in the details of what is actually going on and its amazing. I hope and pray that mystery NTR style continues and we get so much more of the story that way (this can even continue when he gets back home!).
- Mystery NTR: I just had t make this a bullet point to applaud the Dev with the phone video calls between the GF and the MC and let him know I want more haha. The mix of seeing a little bit of whats happening without actually seeing everything is perfect so far. I don't know if we will ever see the full story of what the GF gets into but I hope for now we just see bits and pieces so it lets us see a little bit behind the curtain and lets our imagination run wild!

*BAD?*
- Nipples: The nipples on the sisters kinda looked a bit strange to me and im not sure exactly how to describe it, although the color looked nice I feel like the actual nipple part of the girls didn't look quite right, it was like they only had areola and no actual nipple. small complaint but still something I noticed.
- Girlfriends personality: Now I loved the phone video calls and computer chat between the GF and the MC and his sis, and I loved the peeks into her trip and some of the craziness that is already happening, BUT I was a bit confused about the GF's personality because at first she seems a bit like a tsundre (sassy and brash but actually shy and inexperienced) but then she describes to her friend (the sister) her club visit where she said something like "if the tour guide hadn't come to get me to leave I would have been fucking some random black dude" after having masturbated watching this random black dude plow a lady, and that just seemed a bit too explicit to be coming out of her mouth at this point. Not that I had a huge problem with it, and I know she was drunk, but it just made me question her character which is probably not a good thing, again its a small complaint.
- Slow updates?: I'm sorry im going to be a little bit of a dick here and have to say it but I do feel like the updates have been slow and not consistent which worries me, but I know the dev got a new GPU or something and wanted to re do the intro renders but from the outside I just get worried. That being said the most recent update was very meaty and amazing.

That's all I can think of for now so I really hope this amazing game continues because it had great promise after this new version. Just remember dev, you don't have to rush it, because a part of me loses interest when the girls are fully corrupted into BBC sluts (but of course we want to see that too) this last version had a great balance of kinky stuff being revealed but not showing or doing TOO much to rush the excitement. Love the mystery NTR! The last thing ill say is please don't make the MC a willing cuck, because that will ruin it a bit for me lol, at least make the MC unaware if possible or not enjoying the BBC thrashing the girls will get (I know its your game and I'm just a random dude so it is what it is, but I'm just giving my opinion here). Thanks Dev!

P.S. hook it up as an early tester I would do it hehehe.

So far so good, there’s a few things I’d like see (smaller tits on the girls) but enjoying the “teasing” so far and when Mandingo (mums boyfriend) arrives I’m sure they’ll be more corruption cheers @SayWhatProductions

This is clearly game made for NTR fans out there and it does that quite well. Besides that we don't have much of a choice as of yet. Its still a kinetic novel we don't have any power over direction of the story which is surely lacking in choices to make. Do it or not or do something else and bam, the end. Its surely refreshing to combine NTR and Lolis but besides that its like many others. I will wait out to see how dev will continue the story and if he will give any choices to players.

Played 0.0.8 so only the start but it's already looking like it'll be a great game. There's a few scenes where the MC pervs on his sisters which are fun and all the girls look great. There's a video chat scene with his cheating girlfriend on holiday which is excellent, I've always enjoyed those kinda very obviously cheating but just out of camera shot or unnoticed by MC long distance scenarios. Really looking forward to the next update.

The first thing that came to my head as I ended that latest version of the game is "this one is fucking weird".

First of all we have to realize that this "game" is in a very early stage of development as of not even pre-production in my eyes.
Also this game seems to tailor to a very specific taste, hardcore racist BBC NTR with big focus on humiliating the MC.

Than if you dont like BIG focus on humiliation of you as the MC, stay far away from this one, even though it has the incest tag as of now its purely bait and probably will always stay like that.

Anyway my initial point is that the humiliation and NTR aspects are not used as plot devices, or a mechanisms to drive the plot or drive any kind of character progression, they are the plot.

And because of that, im almost convinced that the "plot" will quickly hit a roadblock in the near future, cause theres no conflict or any kind of opposing sides to drive the plot into building a more meaningful conclusion.

Ill give it 2 stars because english is readable and renders are pretty good although they lack some of the "polish" that games with better renders have like animations, lighting, contrast, angles and little details.

But as I see it right now, this game will very quickly hit a wall where updates or just there to add more sexual content to humiliation kink, there will be no underlying plot, no meaningful choices and no agency from the player.

Overall I think the comics format is far more suitable for this one, again because of the kinetic style and you as a player are just there to observe of what is happening, youre not playing.

As of now the only people that will give this game anymore than 2-3 stars are users that really cater to the humiliation aspect of it.
Other than that and some pretty and sexy renders this one has nothing to offer.

Pass.

Okay, one of the best demos i have played.
Beatiful renders, good writing and it looks like the NTR will be excellent!
And loli with NTR is always nice.

I'm really looking forward for the next updates!
And i will support the dev for sure.

Personally dislike ones that say twins but its a male Female twin and not twin girls honestly. But otherwise this is just a demo, no choices yes just introducing you to the characters and their general personalities prior to what I assume is more of a choice based game loop like DMD is. BTW, this is one hella open family, like who just changes in front of their family, I know this is porn but zero corruption before just getting nude, and then they get upset that the dude saw them nude.

Great game with huge NTR potential!
Hope to see romantic relationship between this BBC, daughters, and mom, keeping it slowly and teasy, corrupting them in front of MC eyes

Very nice models too by the way!

Just downloaded just played.

I love NTR with mixture of Incest genre, and models makes it even better especially young kids girls with big boobs.

I hope developer will not abandon this game (like billion others who - either prolonged or milking their games and lie to us fans for updates , or just abandon games switch to another burner and start new projects)

Game is demo still it deserves 4 STARS OVERALL RATING but I gave 5 just to hope next updates will be proper fast , not too much delay but with beautiful content like it is - like it's started in this DEMO.
VERY NICE BEGINNING IT IS INSTA 4 STARS.

Keep it up.