- Aug 23, 2016
- 34
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Not bad honestly. The art is rather wikihow/rotoscope looking which i don't really like but the tits are nice and focusing most effort on the women is fine. The english is also poor but understandable and can easily be touched up later. Story wise i think it was a bit quick how fast they started having sex and im less interested in the secondary females than the main one but they have potential. Rather than trying to work on everything though i think working on a solid storyline with the mom first then others one at a time is best.