VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[DarkArchon]

Not going to lie, I was looking forward to seeing how the first bedroom scene with Vivian and Christian played out, but I respect the developer's decision. Maybe we will get a quick flashback, or a picture or two, but that is up to the author. I am sure there will be lots of good drama even without a long sexy flashback. Still very much looking forward to the next update.

 

[lolo540]

Happy 300 everyone!

And just a start ! Happy 300 !

 

[lolo540]

It is true that I had decided to leave the forum for good because of the all sorts of toxic private messages. However, I decided to come back after reading so many positive comments. Thank you all for the support.

And for those who judge me, okay... if that is gonna make you happy and we will be okay, I accept that I'm a slut and a cheating whore...

Very happy to have you back on the team.

I imagine that posting can't be that easy every day on this forum! We can understand you!

Glad to have a view from the other side again.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Not going to lie, I was looking forward to seeing how the first bedroom scene with Vivian and Christian played out, but I respect the developer's decision. Maybe we will get a quick flashback, or a picture or two, but that is up to the author. I am sure there will be lots of good drama even without a long sexy flashback. Still very much looking forward to the next update.

Honestly I'm slightly torn in regards to what I want to see scene wise for two reasons - 1, everyone loves seeing scenes but on the other side I like the fact it's not over loaded with scenes and some scenes are partial scenes for me it adds to the mystique of the game and I actually think it adds to it

 

[sslovoe]

any teaser of game
how many teaser we see
lot pic i see from same game last preview from next update
and other make from

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mostly not from game just create modling
the only teas i remember new is in restaurant with some women
can someone post all peak teas pic of game from next update if anyone collect them
and am hoop

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have his own page
we cant fallow his news or post here after 300 page everything will lost
SC Stories have make his own page not for support only also for know real news from fan talk post

 

[Luc77]

Honestly I'm slightly torn in regards to what I want to see scene wise for two reasons - 1, everyone loves seeing scenes but on the other side I like the fact it's not over loaded with scenes and some scenes are partial scenes for me it adds to the mystique of the game and I actually think it adds to it

there is no need to explain everything. Did Tarantino show us what is in the suitcase?
Did Lynch explain to anyone what Lost Highway is about?

"
I like to remember things my own way. How I remembered them, not necessarily the way they happened"

 

[Dealbreaker]

(I agree with your point, but in fact Lynch said more about Lost Highway than about other movies. Interestingly, he once pointed out that he got the idea for the movie from the trial of O J Simpson)

 

[omarsayed]

No, the original backyard/bedroom scene will not be extensively shown. Again, early on I was trying to appease people but showing it was not part of the original plan. It is addressed in a couple way in the next two releases but it won't be a fully rendered, retelling from Vivian's or Chris' POV. It needed to happen to establish the rest of the story. It happened quickly in order to get to the rest of the story.

I'll do a progress update at the first of the month. Thanks.

SC Stories

This is surly a very hard news to hear and let me explain why .

While I agree this is your story to tell and most of others do too,that doesn't take away wanting to see your masterpiece a perfect 10/10 in everyway.

Imagine drawing the Mona Lisa but with a blurred face,that's exactly what it feels like,seeing a not complete painting.

Imagine the sex bathroom with Vivien but without dialogue it's still hot but not complete.

At no point here me or anyone wanted to see you change story or your visions, what we are asking for is let us see your vision clearly.

It's like making the ending scene of the game a confront scene between all three characters and then show us the meeting from the roof of the house .

A lot of developer or director add or remove things like dialogue or scenes that doesn't change the story they trying to tell,but they get ideas a long the way which enhance their story better and it's not bad thing.

The bedroom and the backyard scene are the main point of the story many people liked so much(am sure you can see from the different answers) why take away from people seeing your vision clearly,lets be real here no one imagined Chris saying the magic words and suddenly Vivien is sucking him, but we wanted to see him try and her refusing just to take it at the end same as the bedroom,those are a hot moments you put in your beautiful story why waste them ??

Why making a thing this hot rich of details goes to waste after you build a whole world around it.

AM urging you to rethink this, its really painful to watch a full beautiful painting with a big scratch in the middle of it, help us see what you have done in better way the way it deserves to be seen.

 

[lolo540]

SC Stories

This is surly a very hard news to hear and let me explain why .

While I agree this is your story to tell and most of others do too,that doesn't take away wanting to see your masterpiece a perfect 10/10 in everyway.

Imagine drawing the Mona Lisa but with a blurred face,that's exactly what it feels like,seeing a not complete painting.

Imagine the sex bathroom with Vivien but without dialogue it's still hot but not complete.

At no point here me or anyone wanted to see you change story or your visions, what we are asking for is let us see your vision clearly.

It's like making the ending scene of the game a confront scene between all three characters and then show us the meeting from the roof of the house .

A lot of developer or director add or remove things like dialogue or scenes that doesn't change the story they trying to tell,but they get ideas a long the way which enhance their story better and it's not bad thing.

The bedroom and the backyard scene are the main point of the story many people liked so much(am sure you can see from the different answers) why take away from people seeing your vision clearly,lets be real here no one imagined Chris saying the magic words and suddenly Vivien is sucking him, but we wanted to see him try and her refusing just to take it at the end same as the bedroom,those are a hot moments you put in your beautiful story why waste them ??

Why making a thing this hot rich of details goes to waste after you build a whole world around it.

AM urging you to rethink this, its really painful to watch a full beautiful painting with a big scratch in the middle of it, help us see what you have done in better way the way it deserves to be seen.

You're very demanding!
As I've already said, it's part of the storytelling process not to give you all the facts.
Of course I'd like to have more details too, but if everything had been said in 0.2, would we still be here, 3 months later, turning the story on its head?
Trust DEV to bring you the elements you need in future updates.
why is the bedroom scene hot? Because Dev only suggests it.
There will be more hot scenes to come.

 

[packard1928]

I agree that it is to early to reviel what happened in the backyard. According to the Dev.,, THe whole story is base on it. I Think it will happen but much further down the road. THen will all say... oh well that explains why he or she did that ! Well done !

 

[soldano]

SC story, I wonder how many lies he lied about here. And how many more lies he will tell about the game, why does everyone have to be reassured, this is a bit disgusting.

Indeed. I've been criticized several times for saying this, but it's best not to judge a story by what an author says. You have to judge it by what it shows you.

I had a professor in college who used to say that writers always lie. That's their job: Lie. And I think that extends to any storyteller.

 

[omarsayed]

I agree that it is to early to reviel what happened in the backyard. According to the Dev.,, THe whole story is base on it. I Think it will happen but much further down the road. THen will all say... oh well that explains why he or she did that ! Well done !

My friend, you didn't read his post well enough.

He clearly said he won't ever show it, and it happened too fast to move the story.

So, no, we will not ever see it now or ever, sadly we will not experience the seduction part in it, especially that bedroom scene I was dying to see how things started there.

 

[packard1928]

OK... but I thought a while ago he said what happened there was the base of the story and it would be explained.... if not I am ok. Seems the story is strong enough to stand without this.. VERY excited to see what comes next !

 

[omarsayed]

You're very demanding!
As I've already said, it's part of the storytelling process not to give you all the facts.
Of course I'd like to have more details too, but if everything had been said in 0.2, would we still be here, 3 months later, turning the story on its head?
Trust DEV to bring you the elements you need in future updates.
why is the bedroom scene hot? Because Dev only suggests it.
There will be more hot scenes to come.

Omg you guys read the guy words or not ??

My problem is not ((when)) but he clerely said he wont show it ever maybe just a render or two only.

My problem is this is one of the best part of the story and am sad he just skipping it all to not see it even in a flashback.

 

[psychedevil]

My friend, you didn't read his post well enough.

He clearly said he won't ever show it, and it happened too fast to move the story.

So, no, we will not ever see it now or ever, sadly we will not experience the seduction part in it, especially that bedroom scene I was dying to see how things started there.

I realize that I may be an outlier here, but I really don't care about seeing exactly what happened between the boss and Vivian in the backyard and in the bedroom. What was shown was enough for me, and I understand that it mostly was used to move the story forward. As long as what happened in the backyard encounter between the boss and Vivian is explained, I will be satisfied in knowing how it went (e.g., what was said between them, as in, was it a more direct manipulation on the boss' part or was Vivian primed to go and jumped into doing it based more on her assumptions or expectations).

 

[omarsayed]

OK... but I thought a while ago he said what happened there was the base of the story and it would be explained.... if not I am ok. Seems the story is strong enough to stand without this.. VERY excited to see what comes next !

If this was any other game, I wont be even commenting, I may even be checking the game from year to year.

But when a story and a whole production of a game this close to greatness, it just leaves a bad taste in the mouth, you get me??

Its like you have this amazing book you like but the middle pages is torn from it,it makes you feel sad from what it could have been rather then being angry you just want this book to be perfect and hang it on a special shelf in glass case so you can remember it as one of the greatest book ever.

 

[Hattyrulz]

I realize that I may be an outlier here, but I really don't care about seeing exactly what happened between the boss and Vivian in the backyard and in the bedroom. What was shown was enough for me, and I understand that it mostly was used to move the story forward. As long as what happened in the backyard encounter between the boss and Vivian is explained, I will be satisfied in knowing how it went (e.g., what was said between them, as in, was it a more direct manipulation on the boss' part or was Vivian primed to go and jumped into doing it based more on her assumptions or expectations).

you are not the only one psychedevil . the dev did say it will be brought up/ explained in the future.... we just dont know how it will be done. can be a flashback or through conversation. just a sentence.... like how vivian explains her actions while crying in the bathroom to herself.
since the last post from SC Stories im a bit confused as to why he wrote it in such a manner. we will be getting a progress update at the start of may so maybe we will get to know more in that.

SC Stories if you are feeling the pressure just delay the update.... take your time and recover. lot of people will be against this view but i want this kn to be finished even if its slow on the updates.

 

[Bigsmoothy]

So far, this is a great intriguing story, I hope the dev simply sticks to his game plan, its by far more interesting than anything suggested, whined or requested by the forums here.

 

[Brown-eagle]

I honestly don't know why Developers do this to themselves?... Especially NTR Developers. Their story starts off very good but along the way they start listening to other opinions on how THEIR story should go or end!! Who the hell expects a good ending on a Ntr unavoidable KN?? Give us YOUR story you said will make half of the viewers pissed and the other half happy with a bad taste in their mouth. Give Hutch, Vivian and all your Fans a Dark ending or perhaps an inconclusive ending left to the interpretation of each viewer...That will cement your story as a work of art that will be talked about and discussed for years to come.

 

[xert13]

I'm not trolling, I just hate lying people, it's that simple. I'll cool down once I get used to it, until then I'll forget about this thread

I honestly don't know why Developers do this to themselves?... Especially NTR Developers. Their story starts off very good but along the way they start listening to other opinions on how THEIR story should go or end!! Who the hell expects a good ending on a Ntr unavoidable KN?? Give us YOUR story you said will make half of the viewers pissed and the other half happy with a bad taste in their mouth. Give Hutch, Vivian and all your Fans a Dark ending or perhaps an inconclusive ending left to the interpretation of each viewer...That will cement your story as a work of art that will be talked about and discussed for years to come.

Since this Dev posted this KN for free, not sure why he felt pressured to potentially change anything. Yet, it is natural to want people to like something you created. Suggestions come rolling in and you start to second guess yourself. When I reviewed this KN I gave the Dev props for simply stating this is what it is, take it or leave it. Sure I wanted to see the seduction scene on the patio, but I get why he choose to leave it ambiguous. See all the discussion that resulted. It’s like the movie Blade Runner. Certain things left you guessing. Consequently, the movie was interpreted and discussed decades after. Now, I am even more interested to see where this story ends up. I expect after the next update some may become disillusioned and make assumptions that may turn out not to be true. I, for one, will let it unfold. I hope everyone else does the same.