VN - Ren'Py - My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

One of the best starts I have experienced. I am looking forward to future updates . The story leaves out just the right amount of information for us to fill in the blanks until hopefully future updates.

I have not seen anything Ntr themed like this ever. Truly a masterpiece in the making. I'll be keeping my eye if you ever decide to open a patreon or subscribestar. I love it when a Developer gets right to the point and no better and quicker way to do it then a boss and subordinate wife.

What an incredible start! This has all the makings of a future NTR hit! The story is not only powerful and well-written but also deeply captivating. Wishing you all the best, Dev! Keep up the amazing work!

Great art style, lot of content If you like style, I recommend it ! I will look forward for more of this, It is promising start... Of course you can't please everyone as we all know... So decide it for yourself.

The starting point is pretty much standard. Characters' personalities are somewhat exaggerated to enable the setups but come to life thanks to the visual approach. Character development of the couple is consistent with the corruption progress. Let's see how it continues past v0.2 (20%).

The story works, so it's the best game on this site. Keep it up, soldier.

Version: 0.2

This is a graphically very well done linear NTR story. The story is very hard hitting and brutal. The quality of the narration is very high. It makes you slow down and actually read; it is that good. This is some very harsh NTR content so this may not be everyone's cup of tea. It was a bit too much for me, but I could not stop reading because of the quality of the story telling.

The story tags were accurate, and the summary is informative. Story and dialogue are well written. There were a few minor typos (e.g. the proper anti-German slur is "Kraut" not krout).

Personally, I am not a fan of how the wife looks, she is just not that pretty in my eyes (not a nine at all as the boss claimed, she is barely at the husband's level IMO). However, I give the developer HUGE kudos for designing not only a unique model but also a realistic looking woman, no extreme porn-star style exaggerations like exaggerated breasts etc.

I would like to share a few thoughts on what I personally would like to see in the future. I think the story would be more enjoyable if there were choices to make, even if the option of choices only comes in at a later timepoint (I am not sure if that is planned at the moment). Personally, I would find it interesting if there was a husband-bounces-back path where he can escape this depressing situation and not only bang the niece of the boss (revenge against boss) but also start a relationship with the niece and/or knock her up (revenge against wife). That said, a developer who produces a story at this high level of quality will likely have made up their mind about future options, still I wanted to give this feedback.

In summary, this is a very high quality AVN in the making. For those not liking NTR content this should be avoided because it is pretty hardcore stuff. For fans of the genre, it is a must read. Presentation quality is top notch. I will be keeping an eye on this one.

This game came as quite a surprise, one of the best first release of a game i have seen in a long time, maybe ever. First game for the dev and yet he is crafting things like a seasoned veteran.

This game also doesnt bother with the slow build up, it jumps right into it and yet it keeps your attention, you just cant stop reading everything the characters are say.

On top of that all that its a very big first update with lots of content, putting to shame many other games/devs out there, not to mention the dev is seemingly doing it for free as a hobby or to test his skills? Either way its commendable and IMO he should make a patreon, quality like this deserves a reward.

Great game, 10/10 for me, there are minor nitpicks but the overall experience was so great i dont even care to list them tbh. Cant wait for the next update, judging by the previews at the end of this episode, we are in for a treat.

I write what i think in the post on the forum * Technically no complaints at all, graphic, plot, introspection character, are excellent .I think it means a lot of work but in my opinion it was worth it, congratulations
*....... One of the rare, very rare cases in which the definition NTR and porn are truly reductive. Game for now rather coherent, well-groomed in the plot, in the psychological aspects, .....

What can I say? This really is one of the best beginnings of an NTR game I've ever played. Starting with the fact that here in a long time we have an NTR that really has good writing, the whole feeling of the tragedy of marriage, the emotional tension of the characters, especially the wife, is perfect and I hope this continues for a while. Don't turn her into a slut now, her mind is too full and that makes the story very good.

A very hot milf wife with a very well-written personality. I thought it was great that you're working her emotional side so well. Seeing how much she regrets her mistakes humanizes the character a lot and you can easily buy the idea that her marriage is the most important part of the story and she doesn't want to lose it because of her mistakes.

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The animations are excellent, with interesting hidden NTR scenes (even if the MC isn't oblivious), that scene at night in the bedroom was excellent.

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The antagonist is really a key piece in the story and not just the dick that stole the wife, he is a well-written antagonist and you can really end up hating this guy. While the MC husband is the typical weak man of NTR, but he is also well-built and we really hope to understand the MC better and why he doesn't have the emotional strength to act, speaking of which, please don't turn this game into a cuckold, don't make the MC a cuckold, playing this I wouldn't be able to buy the idea of the MC liking what is happening, that would ruin everything in my opinion, it is visibly noticeable that the MC feels like he is in a hellish nightmare, there is no way I believe that this guy could eventually like this. Knowing that we still need to understand why MC just let this continue at the end of version 0.2, I want to believe that he knows he can't stop what has already happened because he was weak and also saw how his wife was given to the man, I like to think that the developer is planning a script that makes sense for the husband from the end of this version, as I said, please don't turn this into cuckold, the tension of betrayal and the loss of marriage is the best part of this game.

This is simply a masterclass of NTR writing. The author even knows how to strike the balance between giving an early payoff while still keeping the emotional slow-burn going. Sure, some choices would be nice in deepening the connection between the MC (not actually sure who that is with no choices) and the player, something that is particularly effective in the NTR genre, but I wouldn't want to sacrifice any of the writing and story quality for it.

tl;dr So far we are only 2 chapters into what will surely be an NTR classic

Great start. Outstanding visuals, and the story is engaging. I hope this doesn't follow the usual formula, and I'm crossing my fingers that there's a twist by the end that has the MC's boss put in his place, with the MC and his wife behind his downfall....Either way, a very well done KN.

I like various sorts of adult VNs/Kinetic/Games but have a particular fondness for netorare (there is a spectrum - the MC not knowing, the MC aware but powerless to halt it and the MC actively enjoys as a fetish i.e. Cuckold.) I much prefer the first two as I find the full on cuck fetish not to my taste. This masterful Kinetic Novel falls squarely into the "MC aware but powerless to stop it"...well, short of shooting someone or losing his job. Now that I got the parameters in place - on to the review.

First off, this Dev is talented, really talented. The renders, animation and story are top notch. Starting with his intro where he clearly spells out that it is a kinetic novel, with movie like animations, about a subject matter some might dislike (you know the crowd that loses their shit over NTR) - I knew I was about to view something special.

It is a classic NTR story. If anyone is familiar with Jav NTR you have seen this story played out. Yet, the devil is in the details and this KN is all about the details. The buildup, the characters, the inevitability. You see what is going to happen, but it somehow does not lessen the impact. How? Because the Dev has done a superb job of setting up the relationship of the husband and wife. They love each other. There is a bond. It shows in the writing and their interactions. That is the key to great Netorare - it is what makes the betrayal (through blackmail, coercion or whatever) that much more titillating.

On the technical level, the renders are excellent. The animation is fluid and of high quality. Most of the animations are actually like mini movies or quick frames. You are alerted when this is happening, so you don't skip. There is sound and it is used strategically and well. Apart from a few typos the writing is very good. A story is woven, and it is plausible. There is no real stretch of porn logic. Yes, you may have acted differently than the husband, but that is not the point. It could happen. The antagonist is an asshole. You will most likely hate him. Having worked in and around the C suite and within sales organizations I've met many like him. Again, plausible character. Most likely you will also dislike the husband and view him as a "beta male" or whatever. I simply viewed him as a man with no options frozen by events. The Dev does throw a few things around suggesting he is not a loser or unattractive.

Critiques? Well, apart from the stray typo my only cons would be purely subjective. At first, the wife wasn't my cup of tea. Not fond of tattoos (she has a few) and piercings (nose, many in ears). She is not a young bimbo masquerading as a mother with a son in college. Yet, as the story unfolded, I found her more appealing. The sex scenes are good. I just wish there were more of them. For artistic reasons and to build the anticipation and shock you, at first, see glimpses of action. It is initially frustrating - I wanted to see the full-on seduction and more than the glimpse, but then later I realized what the Dev was doing. You were seeing what the distraught husband was seeing - well done Dev, well done.

Ok this has gone on long enough - if you enjoy Netorare and do not mind a Kinetic Novel, this is your Jam. It elevates the genre to a height few Devs can achieve. Try it out and don't use the skip function.

Well Done Sir,

As a fan of NTR I must say that this (0.2) version had one of the most promising starts.

I don't care if it's just a Kinetic Novel without any choices. It is immersive, fun, sexy as hell and kinky.

From the"Don't bring your wife to dinner" to the "middle finger selfie" these small details make it a perfect narration.

I really liked the work you did with animations also, It feels like a movie.

Thank you and all the best with your project.

NTR fans : GIVE it a TRY

5/5 (0.2) Version

An excellent game with an engaging story, solid writing, and very good graphics. I especially liked the slow corruption of the wife and I'd love to see the story continue. Good work dev, can't wait to see how FMC becomes a total slut. Godspeed.