VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] [SC Stories]

[Penumbral Evanescence]

The surprise element is missing

Ah yes, forgot about that one Good call out

 

[AssassinWolf67]

I totally get you and I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't.
I don't think Hutch will end as cuck either, the story ends a lot heavier than that and not only be just Hutch who will suffer.

I can definitely live with that. Hell, I could live with the three of them destroying each other. I just hate VNs that use characters as just an excuse to write sex scenes. I lost too many brain cells trying to get through them.

 

[Robb123456]

A dark heavy end is fine. Having written quite a bit myself, I believe readers, to be truly engaged, there needs to be someone or something to root for. In that scenario, I can absolutely see Hutch gaining the upper hand "eventually." After all, every person has a limit from which they rise or spiral into oblivion.

Obviously, Christian is the "evil" in the story. Vivian, while complicit, is manipulated by Christian. Christian is also manipulating Hutch (duh!), and I hope the author doesn't just leave it at surface level and have Hutch continue to be manipulated to the end. That would be WAY too shallow. I'm hoping (praying even) that we get a more complicated Hutch, one that, over time, begins to twist the circumstances to his benefit.

Christian's niece, the one who's nice to him (I believe it's his niece, I'm not sure typing this, so forgive me if I'm wrong), is a good way to start. Hutch mentioned that he's "open" to a different relationship. The word "open" is weighted in the way he brought it up out of nowhere. Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable. A dark heavy end, like I mentioned, is fine, but if it's Hutch that goes down, it will be a failed attempt at writing. If I wanted that, I would rewatch Uncut Jems. What a waste of time that movie was.

IDK about Christian, but i think for both spouses, the end will be bitter. Even if Hutch gets some consolation, realistically, what he has been through will take a big toll on him. For Vivian, like i said before, it wouldn't make sense if she goes scott free from the events. I try not to take a moral stance and saying she will have to pay, but it wouldn't make sense if she didn't face consequences for her actions. I imagine something like this :

Ch 2 : After the shock of the last events, she will connect with Christian. He will give her pleasures she hadn't experienced and corrupt her. She will get accustomed to these experiences and maybe think she can keep all elements of her life together. ( Flashback of the first night). Maybe still expressing some form of guilt. Hutch suffers in silence and may need someone to express his feelings. Someone who is some form of light in the shark tank which is his job.

Ch 3 : She's getting way too comfortable with the arrangement. She is progressively more dissmissive of her husband's feelings and doesnt hesitate to fuck Chrisitian during a work related event. After the deed, they are introduced to new people (the mayor ?) who may have understood what was going on. Chrsitian sends her a dress and an address. She's used by someone (still the mayor ?). The guy doesn't care about her husband and uses her all night. She is lifted the morning by someone she knows (Marcel ?). Meanwhile Hutch is fed up by his wife, tries everything to find comfort, confides more and more to Addison and she confesses he attracts her. He doesnt know what do with it. The morning Vivian comes back, she begs him to stop "the project" and to start their old life again. The fool still loves her wife and says yes.

Ch 4 : People talk. Marcel uses what he knows this to his advantage. He brags about it to someone of his family, the mechanic, who blackmails her , he will make sure the whole town knows. Vivian gets insane pleasure even if it destroys her self esteem. The rumour spreads between the youth of her town and here come the twins. Fuck us or we tell Sawyer. Sawyer stumbles upon them and Sawyer says 'You're not my mother anymore. Don't contact me. Sawyer goes to his father (i hope he won't find Addison and his father fucking). That was the last straw for Hutch. She comes back to find in front of her house her things packed and Hutch saying he knows and she will hear from his lawyer. Addison has made sure to transmit to authorities proof that her uncle has coerced many women into having sex and is condemned for this. Will learn to be a bitch, prison is not sweet for sex offenders. Hutch breaks up with Addison saying that from now on he must take care of his son. Moves out. THE END

 

[LUCIANO2020]

The question truly is will the DEV stick with the NTS or again will he switch back to NTR. Shadows of Silence makes me feel they will stay together but there will be a secret. If these titles are staying. Maybe she kills Christian because he won't stop then he becomes possesive and Hutch knows she did it. But classic I love my wife so I will protect her.
#A Husband's Sacrifice
#The Price of Love
#Shadows of Forgiveness
#Shadows of Silence

I think and I imagine an scenario where hutch and Vivian remain together but he would know that she would still cheat on him and she will know that she can't not stop and they would live like nothing would ever happen. As example

 

[Brown-eagle]

Did another go at the backyard and bedroom scene to see if i could spot any clues since Dev said his whole story started 1st at backyard and bedroom scene and then he created the ending. I noticed this little frame although it may seem like it's just him heading back to the living room could it also mean he was starting at the knife on the counter? Perhaps a little premonition to the ending?...

 

[LUCIANO2020]

IDK about Christian, but i think for both spouses, the end will be bitter. Even if Hutch gets some consolation, realistically, what he has been through will take a big toll on him. For Vivian, like i said before, it wouldn't make sense if she goes scott free from the events. I try not to take a moral stance and saying she will have to pay, but it wouldn't make sense if she didn't face consequences for her actions. I imagine something like this :

Ch 2 : After the shock of the last events, she will connect with Christian. He will give her pleasures she hadn't experienced and corrupt her. She will get accustomed to these experiences and maybe think she can keep all elements of her life together. ( Flashback of the first night). Maybe still expressing some form of guilt. Hutch suffers in silence and may need someone to express his feelings. Someone who is some form of light in the shark tank which is his job.

Ch 3 : She's getting way too comfortable with the arrangement. She is progressively more dissmissive of her husband's feelings and doesnt hesitate to fuck Chrisitian during a work related event. After the deed, they are introduced to new people (the mayor ?) who may have understood what was going on. Chrsitian sends her a dress and an address. She's used by someone (still the mayor ?). The guy doesn't care about her husband and uses her all night. She is lifted the morning by someone she knows (Marcel ?). Meanwhile Hutch is fed up by his wife, tries everything to find comfort, confides more and more to Addison and she confesses he attracts her. He doesnt know what do with it. The morning Vivian comes back, she begs him to stop "the project" and to start their old life again. The fool still loves her wife and says yes.

Ch 4 : People talk. Marcel uses what he knows this to his advantage. He brags about it to someone of his family, the mechanic, who blackmails her , he will make sure the whole town knows. Vivian gets insane pleasure even if it destroys her self esteem. The rumour spreads between the youth of her town and here come the twins. Fuck us or we tell Sawyer. Sawyer stumbles upon them and Sawyer says 'You're not my mother anymore. Don't contact me. Sawyer goes to his father (i hope he won't find Addison and his father fucking). That was the last straw for Hutch. She comes back to find in front of her house her things packed and Hutch saying he knows and she will hear from his lawyer. Addison has made sure to transmit to authorities proof that her uncle has coerced many women into having sex and is condemned for this. Will learn to be a bitch, prison is not sweet for sex offenders. Hutch breaks up with Addison saying that from now on he must take care of his son. Moves out. THE END

It seems very logical and could be like that more or less. Will see

 

[Adhdclassic]

I don't think Hutch will end up with Addison. I do believe it's possible Hutch will help Addison take the company.

 

[packard1928]

He was doing it the whole Saturday
Sunday is the time for action.



In my opinion, it's clearly visible that he came there with someone (Vivian? Was she sent there by Chris? ) and in the second image, he's looking for that person

Yes I agree.... he is loking for someone ???

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Did another go at the backyard and bedroom scene to see if i could spot any clues since Dev said his whole story started 1st at backyard and bedroom scene and then he created the ending. I noticed this little frame although it may seem like it's just him heading back to the living room could it also mean he was starting at the knife on the counter? Perhaps a little premonition to the ending?...

That's what I thought, too when I was having a look at all the images inside the folders.
I even imagined Hutch doing the impossible and kniving both of them down and what happens after because of his silence throughout day2 at night and just a flicker of sentences the other days, was that he's just dreaming while sitting at the chair in the backyard the things that we see in the game after he caught them in the backyard.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

That's what I thought, too when I was having a look at all the images inside the folders.
I even imagined Hutch doing the impossible and kniving both of them down and what happens after because of his silence throughout day2 at night and just a flicker of sentences the other days, was that he's just dreaming while sitting at the chair in the backyard the things that we see in the game after he caught them in the backyard.

That would be an absolute deep darkness experience.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

That would be an absolute deep darkness experience.

Absolute pain. And suffering. Wow

 

[JoeBlogs]

I think and I imagine an scenario where hutch and Vivian remain together but he would know that she would still cheat on him and she will know that she can't not stop and they would live like nothing would ever happen. As example

Yeah, my fear is this is what's going to happen. Just a massive rug sweep, with both of them still not talking about events and not admitting to anything that has happened even though they both know. A big don't ask - don't tell living arrangement. This would suck donkey ass as an ending.

Did another go at the backyard and bedroom scene to see if i could spot any clues since Dev said his whole story started 1st at backyard and bedroom scene and then he created the ending. I noticed this little frame although it may seem like it's just him heading back to the living room could it also mean he was starting at the knife on the counter? Perhaps a little premonition to the ending?...

Interesting... kind of links up to my dark ending scenario I posted previously.

 

[Aimless44]

From here

Is this the post you are referring to? It says here that the ending will definitely be surprising, but nothing about it being overly dark. Maybe It's mentioned in another post?

To address the issue of the 'unseen' seduction of the female lead by the antagonist, it was obviously intentional to leave you wondering what happened. Why could just a devote wife succumb so quickly, so easily? Did he really just threaten his job? Is she just a slut who drops panties for any alpha male? Others are just disappointed they didn't get to see a sexy scene. There is lots of story left and these are addressed in time.

Just a little background, the entire story arc is defined and the whole script is complete save for some polish. I do not like epically long stories with a sudden weak, rushed ending that doesn't do the rest of the game justice. The ending is fantastic in my mind, will make half of you happy, will make half of you pissed off, but will surprise everyone. It's just a matter of about 20k more renders to complete so bear with me.

This is also my second game but I've yet to publish the first (called Standing Guard). It is complete except for one scene I just can't seem to make myself finish. It is much shorter(about 1.5-2hrs total if you actually read the dialog). It's also a romance (no NTR). MHB is more polished because of the learning curve on my first game(it's a lot rougher in every measure). I'll publish it some day.

I want to thank all the reviewers and the kind remarks so far.

Thank you.

 

[Munsterman121]

Dark Finale, quiet, Hutch kills himself after being mocked by the city, his colleagues and his wife with Chris, the aim of the game, humiliate him, humiliate him, to make him commit suicide.

My ending is a bit darker, I agree that Hutch will top himself, and Christian will provide support to Viv and get her warmed up by fingering both holes under a dress he has provided. Someone mentioned a gangbang and rape tag and these will both happen on Hutch’s grave after the service after the aforementioned warm up. Incoming critique from all is welcome and I know some of you will be shocked that someone could envision this plot end. Cheers btw it is just a theory because there is a render in the game of a male and female at a cemetery with ladies leg raised as if she is kissing the male. I know I have drawn a disturbing scenario but Christian is about control, humiliation and eventually degradation.

 

[MeilingHz]

If the official v0.4 update is coming in 4 months, it would be great if the developer released a patch for the no sound bug now

 

[biggsexxxy]

20 days on the site.
113 pages, and 5th on the 30 day most viewed list, quite the success if you ask me

 

[Justaphase]

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20 days on the site.
113 pages, and 5th on the 30 day most viewed list, quite the success if you ask me

For an NTR VN which is also kinetic it's especially impressive IMO and a testament to the developer.

 

[tg]

If the official v0.4 update is coming in 4 months, it would be great if the developer released a patch for the no sound bug now

You might be right about the 0.4. The 0.2 version was about 5k images, and then in another post he goes all that's needed is another 20k images. So, in the future, he might aim to do 0.2 jumps, and there'll be four more.

But, if that is the case, it means that we could expect to play through 6 days of content each time the game is updated. That that would be great. I love playing through that amount of content.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

You might be right about the 0.4. The 0.2 version was about 5k images, and then in another post he goes all that's needed is another 20k images. So, in the future, he might aim to do 0.2 jumps, and there'll be four more.

But, if that is the case, it means that we could expect to play through 6 days of content each time the game is updated. That that would be great. I love playing through that amount of content.

But let's say that each update will last 4 month each will finish this game next year or end of the next year of we are lucky.

 

[tg]

But let's say that each update will last 4 month each will finish this game next year or end of the next year of we are lucky.

Yeah, I get what you're saying. But, two years for a project is still great. If the schedule is maintained, and there aren't any long breaks from it, or unforseen holdups, I'd love updates to my favorite game like that.

I wouldn't be opposed to seeing 0.1 updates though. But, in terms of what it takes to finish, I wouldn't think 2 years is that bad.

Edit: Oh, and if you take those headings in the game files someone found, there are four of them, so that would coincide for four theme-based updates. But, that's just how it is now. There' s no telling how things might change.