VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] [SC Stories]

[Sparta158]

i dont think so that others can get it early access.
Purple night will be another meeting (first bussinsss class) with Chris. It's too soon for her to fuck with everyone.
Although of course I agree that it's a different location. It may be that he actually gets a text message about a late business meeting on Monday late-evening (or tuesday), although some unexpected event may occur during it.

If I had to write it out in a script:
late in the evening Viv receives a text message from Chris about an urgent business meeting.
" - get ready, I'm sending a car for you, urgent business meeting"

she quickly puts on a purple dress (or gets it from the driver a moment before the meeting - it has some symbolic meaning) and drives to a new location. The meeting there ends quite quickly, Chris fucks her - so that maybe someone will join (but as a viewer), and then Vivian falls asleep (with CHris). In the morning she wakes up but instead of Chris there is a note - "I had to get up early, I didn't wake you up. Someone will take you home."

That someone is a basketboy, she says to the driver while she's still in front of the house - "please don't tell anyone"

hence we have this hard look in the sports hall

In my opinion, your interpretation focuses too much on vivian sex. Remember, Hutch has always been there. Even if he has given vivian the okay and doesn't want to know any more details, that doesn't mean he has to be there anyway. It wouldn't be fun for Christian otherwise, it gives him the necessary kick. This story is so special so far because the sex is more in the mind, the action itself is almost a side issue or in other words the dot on the i

 

[Luc77]

My next guess - the cigarette smoking man, that's Hutch. The location is the garden/small garden spa in their house.
why I think so - Vivian is without earrings, jewelry, etc. We only see her like this at home before going to bed or in the morning.

I assume it was after a hard meeting of sex, after which she wanted to clean herself up but not wake Hutch.
She just wanted to say, "Sorry hon, the business meeting ran late," but i went straight home.
[maybe it was after a restaurant evening that lasted into the night ]

but Hutch waited and worried....
imagine the dialogue:
V: "Hon, since when do you smoke?"
H: "Since you fuck meet with everyone"
that's in style TheDuke9999

 

[oktabitt]

There is any release date for the next update?

 

[Luc77]

In my opinion, your interpretation focuses too much on vivian sex. Remember, Hutch has always been there. This story is so special so far because the sex is more in the mind, the action itself is almost a side issue or in other words the dot on the i

eee
"to much on Vivian sex" ?
but how?
someone is fucking her in purple night - you think it's Hutch? [it's an interesting interpretation to consider]

at that moment - someone takes her from behind - or she does gymnastics

 

[TheDuke9999]

eee
"to much on Vivian sex" ?
but how?
someone is fucking her in purple night - you think it's Hutch? [it's an interesting interpretation to consider]

at that moment - someone takes her from behind - or she does gymnastics

hutch is cleaning her up oh i meant off from a long hard night of "work"

 

[Luc77]

In my opinion, your interpretation focuses too much on vivian sex. Remember, Hutch has always been there.

Hutch is in Garden Party. he is not in the restaurant (but he is in the pictures when he sees how Viv is dressed and how she gets into Chris's LandRover) not in PUB probably not is purple night.

 

[TheDuke9999]

Hutch is in Garden Party. he is not in the restaurant (but he is in the pictures when he sees how Viv is dressed and how she gets into Chris's LandRover) not in PUB probably not is purple night.

now that everyone knows vivian's a hoe there isnt to much need for hutchy to be there everytime except when the boss stays the night at there house smashing it out all night long.. at least this way he can bring them water and condoms so they can get refreshed and keep going until morning .

 

[Luc77]

SC Stories holy shit, this KN is mind-eating.
If you're looking for a job in the future - I have friends who have a gaming studio. They're definitely looking for good scriptwriters

 

[xert13]

now that everyone knows vivian's a hoe there isnt to much need for hutchy to be there everytime except when the boss stays the night at there house smashing it out all night long.. at least this way he can bring them water and condoms so they can get refreshed and keep going until morning .

You distill this emotionally complex Kinetic Novel into Vivian is a “hoe?” Ugh…

 

[TheDuke9999]

You distill this emotionally complex Kinetic Novel into Vivian is a “hoe?” Ugh…

ummm she has sex with another man in front of husband and loves it then cries to her husband telling him she loves hutchy so much while easily agreeing to keep banging the boss .. did i miss something

 

[xert13]

ummm she has sex with another man in front of husband and loves it then cries to her husband telling him she loves hutchy so much while easily agreeing to keep banging the boss .. did i miss something

Yes, quite a lot, but if that is how you filter complexities then there’s not much I could write to disabuse you of that perception. Hey, everyone processes things differently. In my opinion - and it is an opinion - this situation and the husband and wife’s actions are not so simplistic. The emotional depth the Dev has given to the characters and their relationship - which at first seemed pretty vanilla - is what sets this KN apart for many of us. Again though, opinions may vary.

 

[Sparta158]

eee
"to much on Vivian sex" ?
but how?
someone is fucking her in purple night - you think it's Hutch? [it's an interesting interpretation to consider]

at that moment - someone takes her from behind - or she does gymnastics

Sorry, I expressed it incorrectly. I meant the sex related to other protagonists like twins, mechanics, scooter drivers, basketball players. The focus as in your picture will remain on christian in my opinion.
But it's okay.
Everyone has a different idea of how the story develops, that's what makes the author so special and sets him apart from others.
In my eyes, it won't be an ordinary, mediocre or even boring story that we've seen here 100 times before.
I think things could happen that many people don't expect at all.

 

[TheDuke9999]

Yes, quite a lot, but if that is how you filter complexities then there’s not much I could write to disabuse you of that perception. Hey, everyone processes things differently. In my opinion - and it is an opinion - this situation and the husband and wife’s actions are not so simplistic. The emotional depth the Dev has given to the characters and their relationship - which at first seemed pretty vanilla - is what sets this KN apart for many of us. Again though, opinions may vary.

she was in the boss's house and in less than an hour she was bent over getting banged while hutchy watched.. how complex is that?

 

[sslovoe]

creat this just as sample of idea not good making or make any skin or light

just make posing for idea of vivnan go with husband and boss this not make yet
and another one with son and his friend
this beach will be add grope underwater water play fun
massage from twin when son watch
and shower bath beach
or vivan get fun behind rock hidden when son watch from top

this my sample and i need learn render and skin add just post as fun to show idea

 

[Luc77]

Sorry, I expressed it incorrectly. I meant the sex related to other protagonists like twins, mechanics, scooter drivers, basketball players. The focus as in your picture will remain on christian in my opinion.
But it's okay.
Everyone has a different idea of how the story develops, that's what makes the author so special and sets him apart from others.
In my eyes, it won't be an ordinary, mediocre or even boring story that we've seen here 100 times before.
I think things could happen that many people don't expect at all.

so in your opinion - there can by only Chris !?
then it wouldn't be an NTR story but a story about love and betrayal - yes it is possible, but SC sometimes brings us down to earth, saying that it is in a sense a completely ordinary story ntr

 

[xert13]

she was in the boss's house and in less than an hour she was bent over getting banged while hutchy watched.. how complex is that?

Okie dokie. Not going to argue with you if that was your takeaway. Cannot dissect the emotional Complexities at play in this KN for you. Either you get it or not. No judgements.

 

[TonyMurray]

My next guess - the cigarette smoking man, that's Hutch.

You're going to make Hatty cream with talk like that!

at that moment - someone takes her from behind - or she does gymnastics

I was going to say she was doing a handstand, but you already got there!

so in your opinion - there can by only Chris !?
then it wouldn't be an NTR story but a story about love and betrayal - yes it is possible, but SC sometimes brings us down to earth, saying that it is in a sense a completely ordinary story ntr

NTR doesn't have to be complex. A single antagonist stealing your partner is still NTR, it doesn't matter if it's only one person doing it...

 

[Dealbreaker]

Not going to argue with you if that was your takeaway.

Although that's a bit of a shame - sometimes I would wish for a strong, detailed, forceful and articulate "defense" of Vivian beyond the notion that all is complicated (which I and others are more than willing to concede and have said so!). I would like to know more about her feelings, why she cannot or will not say no to Christian. I think about that myself, but I think the debate would profit from someone who is really convinced (though in a nuanced way) of the jusitifiability of that posiition...

 

[TheDuke9999]

Okie dokie. Not going to argue with you if that was your takeaway. Cannot dissect the emotional Complexities at play in this KN for you. Either you get it or not. No judgements.

its all good brother . i get the inner turmoil stuff but at the end of the day , regardless of your mental state, your actions dictate your future regardless of the reason or emotion. emotions may drive us but again its all a choice.. do the right thing or do the wrong thing .. and thats why i love vivian so much cause she is the dumbest chick around and always does the wrong thing.. god i love that woman.

 

[TheDuke9999]

Although that's a bit of a shame - sometimes I would wish for a strong, detailed, forceful and articulate "defense" of Vivian beyond the notion that all is complicated (which I and others are more than willing to concede and have said so!). I would like to know more about her feelings, why she cannot or will not say no to Christian. I think about that myself, but I think the debate would profit from someone who is really convinced (though in a nuanced way) of the jusitifiability of that posiition...