VN - Ren'Py - My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

A close to perfect game, at least for me. Yes it's simple, the boss fucks the wife, but then it's suddenly not simple.

It's a borderline believable plot. The marriage has gone long enough and all the pieces are in place. The husband is weak enough, the wife vulnerable enough and the boss strong enough.

Plot spoiler: The wife isn't a simple awakening slut, there's real emotion, rage and regret here, likewise the husband isn't an awakening cuck either, he loses and falls hard.

I love the fact it's kinetic, no choices are needed, they would just spoil the flow.

It's one of the only games I play with sound on, it really helps. I love all the future possibilities woven in. some people say it has cliches, but I say it's pretty hard not to.

This is a really fantastic attempt at a serious adult story, I hope others enjoy it as much as me and that it gets the attention it deserves.

incredible story, heartbreaking, intriguing, traumatizing and painful but at the same time interesting and entertaining, first game that upsets and makes me feel bad for the characters but wanting to know more about what really happens

Probably the best made VN/KN on the site. Writing is fantastic for a game that doesn't shy away from the porn, as as others have said, so much gets told in a look or a small animation... can't wait to see where the dev takes it

Version 2.0

TL;DR Amazing kinetic novel, with perfect – or close to perfect – story (so far), graphics and dialogues.

First of all – it’s not a game. It’s a pure KN, without a single choice or decision. Second remark or warning: it’s about NTR, jealousy, complicated feelings. And finally, it’s more erotic story than actual porn. If you accept these three assumptions, then you can enjoy this experience very much. As it was in my case.

For me, it’s one of the best KNs I have ever experienced (‘played’ is apparently not the best word in this context). Probably the best one, so far. The plot is quite standard for this genre but it’s believable, not far from real life. And the story is very well told, using both the husband and wife's perspective. We have to accept the comparatively slow pace of the story, with many auto-advancing events… But it’s worth it. For me it worked, I was really immersed… and excited at times.

This is a real virtual novel – I mean the balance between the text and images is close to perfection. A lot is told using the characters’ facial expressions, glances, gestures. Animations are top class. The dialogues are realistic; they convey true emotions… Minor spelling errors (such as the repeated use of ‘to’ instead of ‘too’) did not affect the reception of the text. Because I was concentrated on the emotions and feelings of the MCs.

The FMC is stunning – I mean not only her appearance but also her character design, dilemmas, feelings and dialogue lines. We do not know much about Vivian’s past – but there are some hints that she hasn’t been always ‘a good girl’ or wifey (tattoos, dominant behaviour, readiness for risk taking). Hopefully, these threads will be developed in the future. Though on the other hand I do not want her to become a total whore soon… if at all*. The male characters are not that well-crafted (so far) but I can live with that.

Experiencing this virtual novel I was deeply engaged and felt like I was interacting with real art. It's rare, actually unique. I hope the developer will confirm this in future updates, which I'm eagerly awaiting.

* My dream is that one day this KN will become a real game... by adding some key choices and letting us choose a path for Vivian (or her husband). But in this case I wouldn't have enough stars for My Husband’s Boss, because it would easily deserve six.

Perhaps the most heart-wrenching NTR game I've played so far. And somehow I get off to it.
I'd say it's a fairly slow-paced game in terms of sexual content, but not to the degree where you forget it's an adult game. Immersive dialogue, nice renders. Facial expressions could be better, but no game to date has ideal 3D facial expression so they all get a pass on that regard.

Sound effects are hit and miss. The moaning sfx can be quite silly in many games, and they actually break immersion. Overall not too offending to the ears though.

Lots of potential mates have been introduced, looking forward to our wife having her way with... well... everyone.

One of the most well-written VNs on this site!

As a fan of the NTR genre, I've got to say that there are far too many bad VNs for every good one. I'm not entirely sure what intrigued me about this, but I decided to give it a try anyway, and it didn't take long to realise this is leagues above the vast majority of work in this space. The dev clearly has experience crafting stories and rendering 3D models.

From the initial release, every moment in the story matters. The relationship dynamics between the husband and wife are quickly established within one scene (if I remember correctly). The things they say, the glances they give - this dev knows how to show and not tell. While the boss is fairly one-dimensional (he's cocky, arrogant, and manipulative, but he's irresistible to women, and he's got it where it counts), I think that works for his position in the story, especially within the NTR genre. Besides, he could gain more depth in future updates.

The actual NTR dynamic in this story is different and adds a lot more intrigue. I won't spoil it, but let's just say the husband isn't naive and oblivious. The initial reason the NTR happens in the first place is established fast, and isn't done in a long-winded way, where we as readers can see where it's going, but the writer wants it to be drawn out for whatever reason. This is to the point, but not stupid. Also, the first scene hits so good, I don't think it could've been done in a better way.

The one flaw for me was the introduction to the mechanic. It felt very VN-y, and not grounded in (some level of) reality like the rest of the story was. It really felt like it was falling into a trope, which immediately put me off wanting that subplot to progress. However, I'm willing to let the dev do his thing because of how good the rest of the story is.

Some of the writing felt cliche, but most of those moments were charming, so I could enjoy it, rather than let it take me out of the story.

Overall, this story is great, and I can't wait for more!

Perhaps this is the first NTR game for such a long time on this site that does not cause disgust, largely due to the well-written plot and characters, a fairly realistic setting with the self-confident and incompetent husband of the main character.

Excellent work, amazing visual novel with a great and elaborated story, amazing characters and a super hottest wife… can’t wait for next update… after the preview I hope to not wait for long… excuse me for the poor English

Detailed, realistic, exciting. Nothing like the naive NTR stories. This is written from an adult person with understanding for the life and with brain. The sex scenes are very complete, with many renders. I just hope the developer will have the time to make regular updates, as it looks there's a lot of work for all these pictures.

Not even a week of being released and this is one of the best NTR games on the site. It already longer than most completed games and it just the first build. The wife tattoos and short hair is *chef's kiss*. As long as the Dev sticks to their original vision and instead of being dismayed by the comments, they should be do just fine.

This visual novel is a breath of fresh air in the NTR genre, thanks to its mature and well-written story. The dialogues feel natural, and the character development is handled with a level of depth rarely seen in similar games. The renders are of outstanding quality, with a great variety of scenes, and the animations are smooth and well-executed, adding a lot to the overall immersion.

However, one thing bothers me: the pacing of the main relationship. The female protagonist gets involved with her boss a bit too quickly, which makes the progression feel somewhat rushed. A bit more buildup would have made the story even more engaging. That aside, this VN is definitely worth checking out for those looking for a high-quality experience in the genre.

the writing is too fking good. everything about this game so fking good.
Best thing about this game is that there are no choices and story doesnt branch.

spoiler:
i didnt like when the wife found out that husband was watching them from the stall. but then i like how the author took it from there. i thought it was gonna be a cuck story from there onwards.
Fking loved it when the wife sent a teasing selfie to the boss pointing the middle finger.

I already played your game (0.2) and....

this game is very good for a certain ntr genre story some points are quite painful like the Vivian trying to help the (I forgot her husband's name hahaha) to keep working and the project by having to ‘use her body?’ to her husband's boss. wow, I really like the character design 9.4/10. After playing this version and seeing a bit of footage in the ending of this game, it looks like there will be more interesting events (maybe painful for the husband in this game) such as the wife starting to change slowly? (I saw Vivian using make up, earrings and maybe tits piercing too hahahaha?) I don't know, but this is one of the good games in the NTR genre with a very solid design characters and good story.


Sorry if my English is not good, I hope you understand what I mean

My husband's Boss [v0.2]

Not a big fan of NTR but tried because it's hight rating, especially because this one got 65+ reviews within four days of release here. You won't get to see that everyday and this one's NTR and KN.

Basically plots thread is classic NTR. Pure wife helping husband when his job is on line and going to convince boss and boss banging her. But what makes it different from other NTR games is it's execution and characters. Boss is an asshole but not complete asshole like in other NTR games. Also wife didn't become a complete slut after first cheating with boss. She still returned to husband and loved him. Tried to fix the marriage. Husband watched their scene but didn't got excited like many cuck characters nor whined like a loser. But he was heart broken. Dev did a good job with the emotional part. Husband's facial expressions was so sad that it makes players sad. It also gives a chance to rename the three characters. Maybe players can rename boss and play from his POV. I'm glad this one's kinetical cause I'm not a fan of female protagonist games and in this game female protagonist got more screen time glad I don't want to make any decisions for her.

This one's also got a teen who's crushing over female protagonist, a bbc guy, a black teen guy, and two friends of son who may take advantage of Female character. In the long run this one's also gonna become like other NTR games where female character getting totally corrupted. But so far this one's kinda different
Gotta feel for Hutch ( husband) hope he get a scene with Addison. Now that their marriage is open

Writing in this game is in next level.
I love this story. Not because of NTR... but because of Corruption! reluctance. and the dirty talk.
Everything looks realistic. everything make some sense.
I just hope to have more scenes than just the boss in the future.

The only thing i would change on this game is to add auto play because is novel you dont have choices so auto would make sense. And maybe so many pictures is good but also slow the game progress. So maybe less pictures would be good. Is not that bad to have some pictures in common talks with multyple texts....

This story made it easy in my top 5 list.
And i recomend the game to all corruption fans.

Very well done. Usually I don't like games without choices but this was extremely well written and really makes you feel for the characters. It has excellent pacing and I am very excited to see where this game goes in the future. I will be excitedly waiting for more updates

My Review of : My Husband´s Boss [0.2V]

I gave a lot of thought to this one because the game shows a lot of heart and love by the dev. The quality of the render and animations is above average, the image motion was a nice touch and the writing is mostly good but I think that the dev missed some very important aspects on a VN and a NTR story. This is a kinetic novel so I was a little more harsh with my rating because without routes the dev has the opportunity to focus on the details of the story and make it make sense.

Pros:

• Aesthetics: The renders have good quality, the posing is good and the animations too. The characters are good looking except for the husband whose face looks a little deformed.
• Christian personality: The best character in my opinion. The boss is a very well written character, he was given a strong personality that goes well with his role and he also knows how to manipulate people around him.

Cons:

• Husband and Wife dynamic: This is a key aspect of any NTR because by its definition "a female character gets taken away by another character" but in this story I didn´t even felt like it was NTR. Before any of the events with the boss occurs, the dev fails to show any sign of affection between husband and wife, there was no shared moment of intimacy or kiss or any other action that couples share, what we see is a women scolding and instructing a man on what to do and say which is more consistent with what a mother and child dynamic is. In fact there is one line that the wife uses after the night with Christian when she is trying to get intimate with Hutch she says "I have to show him that he is my man and I´m his woman" but we were never shown that she was his woman so by failing to previously established any sense of "ownership" between them then there is no sense of "taking her away "thus making this a weak attempt at NTR. We only know they are a couple because it´s mentioned in the script but this being a VISUAL NOVEL it´s not enough to just mention it in the script, you have to show your audience to make them believe what is being said in the script. Remember that "A picture is worth more than a thousand words". Actually, the dev does a good job in showing affection and interest from the receptionist to Hutch even if they interact just for a moment something that is not shown with the wife.

• The Pace: I don´t like stories where the wife jumps and give herself to the first guy she sees, i find them ridiculous. In my opinion a good NTR story should have several phases. First the loving couple, where we see their relationship and get a sense that everything its all right, the you introduce a disturbance ,which in this case is the boss, and he takes interest in the wife and plans to have her for himself. then the phase of slowly corrupting and seducing the wife where she questions her morals and the strength of her marriage and husband until finally we see the wife succumb to the other other guy charms. Well this story jumps straight to action as the wife succumbs to the boss pretty easily in my opinion. There is no seduction, no corruption not even a sense of achievement from the boss to finally get her. One would think that after 20+ years of marriage the wife would try to resists somehow but no only one interaction between them was enough and all those years of marriage crumble, which is laughable. You could make the argument that she was being blackmailed and did what she had to do because of her husband and this would make sense even though is not mention specifically but it can be inferred by the audience but let´s take a look at it, we don´t know what was the agreement but if it was to have sex with her then the garden scene would be enough and spending the night with him makes no sense and if the agreement was to spend the night with him then the garden scene makes no sense, but whatever let continue with the blackmail theory and fast forward to the night when the boss call her, now we don´t know how he got her number and the only possible explanation is that they exchanged numbers because she knew who was calling and I want to know if it sound logical to you that a person who is being blackmailed shares any way of contact her with the person who is blackmailing her after the deal is done? and let´s not discuss sharing a picture of her breast or what happened in the bathroom because there was definitely no blackmail there. For me all these events sound illogical and ridiculous but I think it is done this way because the dev plans to make this a short story so I don´t mind much but still I wanted to share.

• Portraying Guilt and Regret: We are shown a lot of scenes with the wife crying and feeling guilty, telling herself and to her husband that she wants nothing to do with the boss and she will never see him again but all these scenes come as fake and fail to deliver the emotion the dev wanted to show. We see her crying and all but then you look at her actions you don´t see regret, we see her cry and then smelling his shirt, we see more crying and then answer his calls, we see regret and guilt and then cheats again so whenever you try to empathize and fell sorry for her and then she makes the same mistake it´s confusing. Lastly, I just wanted to comment on the absurd idea of spending the night with someone other than your husband and come out next morning wearing his shirt and somehow still think that your husband doesn´t suspect or knows anything, that was pure comedy.

Amazing! Absolutly fantastic...to be continued in any case. The story telling is very smart and realistic, the sound, the atmosphere come into your brain immediatly, need to be support absolutly. The first thing after the play is to go again in the boss mansion to hear again what happen in the night, divine! Success to the creator, amazing!

Probably the best NTR game i've played in this site. It is nearly perfect, the slow burn adds more to the tension and eventual corruption, the character models are amazing and the character themselves convey emotions really well. The animations and cinematography are also hot and amazing.

However, I do have a some gripes and a concern. One of my gripes about this game is the pacing of the first affair. Imo, it would've been better if Christian and Vivian didn't jump straight to sex in the first house visit and just went for gropes, foreplay, 'n stuff. Then their affairs would slowly become more extreme, until they finally cross the line of having sex. Another gripe of mine is Vivian's piercings and tattoos. Makes her look like someone who parties a lot and flirt around with men, instead of a mature traditional wife who is loyal to his husband. And that makes the corruption of her less impactful, for a lack of a better word. Also, I don't know about you but, aren't teachers supposed to not wear piercings as it shows a bad example for the students? At least the tattoos are hidden behind her clothes. My last gripe is that the game is mostly quiet. There are no subtle ambient music to enhance the scenes, and the moans and sex sound effects only play for a small part of the scenes. Nonetheless, these are just minor gripes and doesn't affect the rating.

Now for my concern, and the reason why I rated it 4/5 instead of 5/5. I've seen other men other than Christian look at Vivian with lustful eyes and made moves on her, that's fine, but what I don't get is why Vivian's reactions to them wasn't all negative. Heck, it even looked like she was anticipating them to make a move on her, and even wanted it to happen, which was so out of character and immersion breaking since there's no story reason for her to even go along with it. At least with Christian, she's doing it for her husband's job, which is their family's main source of income. I hate the idea of bringing in other men into the affair, but if it's going to happen, there must be at least a reason significant enough for it to happen. Otherwise, it'll just ruin the narrative.

I've really enjoyed this KN. Is it perfect - no, but its pretty damn close. Especially compared to some of the others in this genre. Artwork is really well done, with wonderful transitions and unique characters and scenes. The build is a bit slow, but I realize that's intended to make the eventual blackmail/corruption more intense.

My only gripe is the auto forwarding. This dev almost gets it perfect with the explanation at the beginning and the use of an indicator in the bottom left corner. But then screws that up by having some additional auto-forward scenes with the indicator causing the user to accidentally move forward manually. Other times (when there is no dialogue) you expect it to be moving on its own, but it doesn't. For me this became an unnecessary distraction - but relatively minor, so for now, no penalty on the rating.