VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[Luc77]

02. ending on 6 day about 8:00PM (taklking code)
we have all late evening - so either Vivian gets a text message (pic up) - get dressed, an Uber will pick you up in 20 minutes (she rides and gets out of the back seat) and purple events are from night 6/7 (which is pretty fucking cool because a moment ago she swore she'd always come back at night) or - this is event from next night 7/8. In both cases - if the pool scene appears in the game - it will most likely be on day 7.
the question is where is she going? the rented house? because it's too soon to resell to a client
the photo where she is lying in bed (in a purple shirt) and reading a text message fits the version "get dressed, the car will be here soon"

0.2 day 1 - wednesday
0.2 day 2 - thrusday
"the night"
0.2 day 3 - friday
0.2 day 4 - saturday
0.2 day 5 - sunday
0.2 day 6 - monday (to 8:00 PM)
Viv 0.4 d06s06 - purple night ??
0.4 day 7 - tuesday
0.4 d07s03 - pool ( if it appears)
0.4 d07 - purple night second option
0.4 day 8 - wednesday - new nails and hair
04. d8 - pic in Audi in blue dress & headscarf
04 d8 - restaurant evening (transparent dress)
0. 4 day 9 - thrusday
0.4 d109 meeting in pub (girl vs. girl)
0.4 day 10 - friday (day)

H 0.6 d10s04 garden party?
0.6 day 11 - saturday - Go-Go club ?
Let's focus on Hutch for a moment
first he sits in the general room, but in second pic - he is in private room on an individual show
06. day 12 - sunday
06. day 13 - monday
08. day 14 - tuesday new realase

0.4 day 7(1) - tuesday (evenig/night - purple)
0.4 day 8(2) - wednesday
0.4 day 9(3) - thrusday (transparent dinner)
0.4 day 10(4) - friday
0.4 day 11(5) - saturday (garden party)
0.4 day 12(6) - sunday

v0.4 is 6(days) and 4 with(content) 3k(probably) images.

main events/days: purple night, transpertent restauratn, garden party, pub (girl vs girl)
one-shot: pool ?

A logical assumption: the purple night must come before the transparent dinner (oriental), and the garden party should take place on Friday or Saturday (and, of course, it is after the transparent dinner).

 

[xcalibar4]

I think her humiliating comment on her husband in the bathroom scene is one indication. She is feeling the empty nest syndrome or something, her husband isn't as passionate as before, even when they are intimate he needs blue pills or she needs to do many things to rile him up (the lingerie she dressed to seduce Hutch scene).

So it may be simple she was horny, felt neglect, felt alone and if wasn't Christian it would've been someone else. If it wasn't to save her husband's job then it would have some other excuse.

 

[Sparta158]

I think her humiliating comment on her husband in the bathroom scene is one indication. She is feeling the empty nest syndrome or something, her husband isn't as passionate as before, even when they are intimate he needs blue pills or she needs to do many things to rile him up (the lingerie she dressed to seduce Hutch scene).

So it may be simple she was horny, felt neglect, felt alone and if wasn't Christian it would've been someone else. If it wasn't to save her husband's job then it would have some other excuse.

right and the nightly phone call with christian only makes it clearer. She only has sex with hutch out of obligation, but she has none of it herself. She has tried everything but hutch will have had little interest in his wife for a long time.

 

[DarkArchon]

Personally, no, it's not my theory. My guess is just that Vivian is not the first woman to turn up looking for Christian, so Addison is used to it and maybe a bit disgusted by it - especially as the hat and sunglasses make it look like Vivian's trying to hide, so it might increase Addison's suspicion that it's a wife who is cheating on her husband with Christian (not Hutch's wife, just any random guy's wife).

I was thinking that to when I read it. That Addison was used to women like Vivian, other men's wives, coming in to see Christian, and that those women disgusted her. Christian may disgust Addison too, but we have to see.

 

[packard1928]

0.4 day 7(1) - tuesday (evenig/night - purple)
0.4 day 8(2) - wednesday
0.4 day 9(3) - thrusday (transparent dinner)
0.4 day 10(4) - friday
0.4 day 11(5) - saturday (garden party)
0.4 day 12(6) - sunday



main events/days: purple night, transpertent restauratn, garden party, pub (girl vs girl)
one-shot: pool ?

A logical assumption: the purple night must come before the transparent dinner (oriental), and the garden party should take place on Friday or Saturday (and, of course, it is after the transparent dinner).

I thought the Dev said ...(some time ago) the the purple dress and garden party would be in the 3rd release ? is that what 0.4 is ?

 

[onetwo92]

"but v0.6 is where the pain begins"

Really makes me wonder if this is the point where the excruciating humiliation begins to happen, only SC Stories can get us hyped not only for the update next month but for the one coming after that as well!

 

[JoeBlogs]

in just over a month, we'll uncover more cards – maybe then we'll be closer to the truth/reason/meaning of life

LOl when i read this I thought you wrote "we'll uncover more carbs" i.e we'll watch Vivian chug down a few more loads on man yogurt.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

LOl when i read this I thought you wrote "we'll uncover more carbs" i.e we'll watch Vivian chug down a few more loads on man yogurt.

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Christian we are going to try something new tonight give me that sweet ass boy as tonight I'm gonna fuck you hahaha

 

[TonyMurray]

Perhaps in the end we discover that Christina is a closet homosexual, who uses woman as a tool to hide his true desires.
In the end, Hutch does the community a service, and fucks Christian in the ass before dumping a full load into his awaiting mouth. Finally now that Christian is out of the closet, he become a model citizen and repents for the way he has behaved towards women in the past. Vivian is pissed off that her boyfriend has no more interest in her, and has more desire for her husband.

Well, you could suggest that the ending has already been foreshadowed. Hutch wins, fucks Vivian in front of the defeated Christian, and then in his final humiliation, Christian has to clean up the cum that's dribbling down Vivian's leg...

I thought the Dev said ...(some time ago) the the purple dress and garden party would be in the 3rd release ? is that what 0.4 is ?

The release pattern is 0.2, 0.4, 0.6, so the third release would be 0.6 (I think that's what you're saying anyway, so this is just to confirm my understanding matches).

 

[Luc77]

I thought the Dev said ...(some time ago) the the purple dress and garden party would be in the 3rd release ? is that what 0.4 is ?

He never said that purple is from version 0.6, he said that the images he's been working on/uploading recently are from 0.6 (e.g., Hutch and gogo). However, I assume that the teasers from version 0.2 (including the purple night) actually come from the 0.4 release. In 0.6, Vivian should already be on the highway to corruption, and the purple outfit is quite modest, more like a costume for a business meeting...
and not for a meeting where the goal is to do business through sex.

we will see
If my predictions turn out to be wrong, I'll be pleasantly surprised. If they turn out to be right, I'll also be pleasantly surprised.


I assume that from 0.6, things will really start to heat up – because up until now, we've had NTR-Vanilla, and this will also be reflected in Vivian's appearance (piercings? tattoos? – Hutch/cig-smo-man) + sharper makeup, more provocative clothing.

ps. I won't hide that in version 0.6, I’m hoping Chris will introduce Vivian at a party similar to the one we know from "Eyes Wide Shout" where Hutch will obviously be there

 

[omarsayed]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.

I want to address some points here.

First, don't ever call yourself a bad writer, if you have been on this site for a while and I think you have then you do know what bad writing is, I don't wanna be calling any names but damn there is some writers here with the mind set of 10 years old kid.

I wouldn't call you the best either but you are surely among the greatest here on this site, what makes your writing also goes a level above the good ones, are your way of connecting the renders with the lines IDK how to say this but your tech. of auto advance thing makes me feel like I'm literally reading a book and turning a page to read on the other one, you put so much effort in showing along with telling which makes a great job making the scene feels like a few gifs plays togther in motion.

Second, about the porn logic I answered a few guys here before I think, and I will respond differently this time, let's just forget that this a porn game and pretend it's a normal movie, even in those you are bound to see some people who hates how the female or male lead are so dumb or asking question like omg how she or he could do that or omg why she did go there, and the simple answer is, it's a story happened to someone and it's merely being told to us by you, it's not my story or anyone else story, people need to get this, if you changed every details based upon every single one experience than we couldn't have a story bec when things are happining some will say I would never do that other will say I would definitely do that.

Third and last, I just wanna thank you because I never did before, and it should have been my first post in this thread, but thanks for sharing such a great visual novel with us, for someone like me it's been a really long while since I enjoyed a hot affair story, IDK if you know a site called Literotica but I almost read there daily (and I have a few stories there shared by myself btw) but even there you rarely find something on this level of hotness, so thanks again for sharing this hot story with us and cant wait to see Hutch finally broken at the end crying in the living room while Vivien is working in the bedroom with Chris, sry but am more into the dark ending stuff lol.

 

[zaqwsxcder]

Gentlemen philosophers, this is a work of fiction.

 

[psychedevil]

It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.

I'm glad to hear that we've contributed to your appreciation of the AVN you created. I think I can speak for everyone in saying that we all look forward to the continuation of the story.

I want to restate what I said in my initial post in this thread: My Husband's Boss was the reason I decided to start posting here. For a while, I even remained exclusive to this thread. You should take this as a compliment because it was the quality and unconventional nature of your story (along with the excellent renders) that motivated me to join the discussion. Bravo!

Of course, we all have our thoughts and desires about how we would like to see the story go, but regardless I will be following this story to the end, as it has already hooked me.

 

[Hattyrulz]

I think her humiliating comment on her husband in the bathroom scene is one indication. She is feeling the empty nest syndrome or something, her husband isn't as passionate as before, even when they are intimate he needs blue pills or she needs to do many things to rile him up (the lingerie she dressed to seduce Hutch scene).

So it may be simple she was horny, felt neglect, felt alone and if wasn't Christian it would've been someone else. If it wasn't to save her husband's job then it would have some other excuse.

in the word of TheDuke9999 the inner hoe in vivian was just waiting to come out(pun intended).

sorry duke since you been silent... couldn't resist the temptation.

He never said that purple is from version 0.6, he said that the images he's been working on/uploading recently are from 0.6 (e.g., Hutch and gogo). However, I assume that the teasers from version 0.2 (including the purple night) actually come from the 0.4 release. In 0.6, Vivian should already be on the highway to corruption, and the purple outfit is quite modest, more like a costume for a business meeting...
and not for a meeting where the goal is to do business through sex.

we will see
If my predictions turn out to be wrong, I'll be pleasantly surprised. If they turn out to be right, I'll also be pleasantly surprised.


I assume that from 0.6, things will really start to heat up – because up until now, we've had NTR-Vanilla, and this will also be reflected in Vivian's appearance (piercings? tattoos? – Hutch/cig-smo-man) + sharper makeup, more provocative clothing.

ps. I won't hide that in version 0.6, I’m hoping Chris will introduce Vivian at a party similar to the one we know from "Eyes Wide Shout" where Hutch will obviously be there

dont remember if it was you or someother poster but we already talk about the previews from the end of update 1(0.2) were all from update 3(0.6). this was talk about when the bar render was post by SC Stories or even before that. after that you and someone else came up with the manicure/nail polish change theory. so far we know very little about update 2(0.4) other than the fresh face in the sneak peeks and a possible sex scene.

 

[gino.pilotino]

I could be wrong, but I don't think he was referring to how this AVN will end necessarily. I believe he was referring to another game that included such an excessive frequency of choices between the "loving" and "corrupt" paths to where it was frustrating. So you might be misunderstanding and reading too much into what was said...unless it's me who didn't read enough into it.

Whatever the case, you're not alone in rooting for Hutch to not end up the typical humiliated husband at the end of this NTR story. I'm even hoping for a redemption arc for Vivian, which may not mean the marriage survives, but perhaps at least her soul (or her better self) could still be saved in the end. Yeah, I'm a dreamer. We'll just have to see what happens.

Are you still convinced that I read more than what was there?

but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

 

[psychedevil]

Are you still convinced that I read more than what was there?

I remain uncertain about it. There being more pain doesn't necessarily mean that Hutch will end up a humiliated shell of a man in the end. So far the focus has been on how this experience has changed Vivian, but perhaps there eventually will be more of a focus on how the experience changes Hutch. I'm still hoping for an ending where Hutch rebounds and shocks Christian, who realizes too late that he underestimated him.

 

[gino.pilotino]

I remain uncertain about it. There being more pain doesn't necessarily mean that Hutch will end up a humiliated shell of a man in the end. So far the focus has been on how this experience has changed Vivian, but perhaps there eventually will be more of a focus on how the experience changes Hutch. I'm still hoping for an ending where Hutch rebounds and shocks Christian, who realizes too late that he underestimated him.

I believe it less and less. Which bothers me because I can already imagine Duke getting a big laugh saying, I told you so! I remain of the opinion that you can't let the reader empathize with a character and then mercilessly slaughter him.

 

[Luc77]

man of little faith

 

[gino.pilotino]

man of little faith

I was hoping for it more before the author's posts. I still have some hope but I really believe very little.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

I remain uncertain about it. There being more pain doesn't necessarily mean that Hutch will end up a humiliated shell of a man in the end. So far the focus has been on how this experience has changed Vivian, but perhaps there eventually will be more of a focus on how the experience changes Hutch. I'm still hoping for an ending where Hutch rebounds and shocks Christian, who realizes too late that he underestimated him.

I find it interesting that just because "pain" is being mentioned most people's default reaction is to assume it's hutch's pain , now I'm not ruling it out it could happen yes , but at this stage of the story there no actual evidence to suggest who that pain will be inflicted upon , and just the word pain it's self on it own could mean anything as there are a multitude of different "painful" situations any of the three characters could experience at any time for example say something traumatic happens to sawyer ( in a non sexual aspect ) and this event acts as a wake up call to Vivian let's say and her and hutch fix and work on there marriage while also support/looking after sawyer, there is a painful event that effects four characters all in one go, now I'm not saying this is going to happen but I made the example more to show that at the moment the pain element of it is far to broad of a spectrum to out and out make a definitive conclusion on what's going to happen

And before any kicks in on this generally neutral comment with a whole big thing about what Christian is going to do to Vivian and how he's ruined hutch

It's just a neutral comment not an attack at the hardcore NTR lovers , now with that being said I could make a neutral comment about hutch saying the sky is blue and some of the hardcore NTR fans would be like WRONG Christian says it's green and that he's going to fuck Vivian and then take her to a 23 man gangbang and she's gonna have a million kids and hutch has to raise them all ....... But my god chill out it's not an attack