VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] [SC Stories]

[Adhdclassic]

ok, and your point is great, but to say that it is a masterpiece, no, because it is the simplest of the porn stories written.

I think what sets it apart is the MC he is not your classic MC in a NTR. He's not into being cucked. He is fighting his inner demon on how to deal with the situation. Also you don't know what he's thinking he's as of this moment unpredictable.

 

[TonyMurray]

ok, and your point is great, but to say that it is a masterpiece, no, because it is the simplest of the porn stories written.

Being the simplest of stories doesn't mean it can't be really well done, with the author bringing his own ideas into it. What he's provided us isn't as simple as you make out, it's a nicely nuanced story.

 

[sslovoe]

this is better because the husband has balls, he did not discover or suspect much in this game, but if he will understand, here the story ends badly. here are the NTR games with balls, you have a MC MAN

but i think game make him have fetish but scare shre his wife
did you see even everyone know he know she have sex with boss and they start talk about cheating
they not use sex or cheat when talk
he still play game he accept project
tell his wife go work his project
even he agree and wife agree
but he still scare
what i hate about him more
the women in work look love him care his fell and he really not give her any attention this part think break for women heart he not care for her and she care lot for him

 

[alex220477]

Being the simplest of stories doesn't mean it can't be really well done, with the author bringing his own ideas into it. What he's provided us isn't as simple as you make out, it's a nicely nuanced story.

what would be nuanced, the husband catches his wife cheating with her boss, what does he do, looks at it and accepts it like an idiot, the fear of his boss, so he is a doormat who in addition to being cuckolded by his wife, is also a man fearful of life, you call it nuances, hahaha, I call it describing a man without the U.

 

[TonyMurray]

what would be nuanced, the husband catches his wife cheating with her boss, what does he do, looks at it and accepts it like an idiot, the fear of his boss, so he is a doormat who in addition to being cuckolded by his wife, is also a man fearful of life, you call it nuances, hahaha, I call it describing a man without the U.

The storytelling is nuanced, with the renders playing into it really well. I don't know if you've played the game, it sounds like you probably haven't, but it's okay for people to like it, you know.

 

[alex220477]

but i think game make him have fetish but scare shre his wife
did you see even everyone know he know she have sex with boss and they start talk about cheating
they not use sex or cheat when talk
he still play game he accept project
tell his wife go work his project
even he agree and wife agree
but he still scare
what i hate about him more
the women in work look love him care his fell and he really not give her any attention this part think break for women heart he not care for her and she care lot for him

you have clarified many points, ok, but when you remain silent in front of the act of betrayal, if the couple did not have this initial fetishism, and he does not complain or rebel, then he is weak, in my point of view, he is afraid, of what, the wife has already betrayed, therefore, he chooses to watch and remain silent, this is the fear, of losing his wife, would you be afraid of losing someone who hurts you? his boss, is a collateral factor, his colleagues, as you say, care, but he is such an idiot, that he worries about who causes him pain, instead of paying his attention to who wants him happy, here is the difference of the man with the U, but this is my concept, I wrote a simple story for a reason, because it is linear, understandable what we are playing, especially, when the husband, is a spectator like us.

 

[Robb123456]

what would be nuanced, the husband catches his wife cheating with her boss, what does he do, looks at it and accepts it like an idiot, the fear of his boss, so he is a doormat who in addition to being cuckolded by his wife, is also a man fearful of life, you call it nuances, hahaha, I call it describing a man without the U.

It's quite clear nuance is not your forte. Nobody said Hutch wasn't weak. They say his character is interesting. Also even if he's weak, that's not a reason not to be compassionate with the guy after what he's gone through.

 

[alex220477]

It's quite clear nuance is not your forte. Nobody said Hutch wasn't weak. They say his character is interesting. Also even if he's weak, that's not a reason not to be compassionate with the guy after what he's gone through.

you know that the perceptions of what we watch or read are different for everyone, I interpret the role of the husband in a way, you rightly, interpret it according to your feelings, for goodness sake, we are talking about something that is out of the real context, it's a game, but I don't see this nuance of yours, for my world, if your partner does that thing with another man, be it, my boss, my brother, a crime boss, if I want to have a minimum of dignity, I'm not saying revenge or massacre, dignity, then, fuck the partner, fuck the fear, these are those null fears, white fears, fears only in our heads, this is what I interpret, other games or stories on Literotica, have similar stories, but also stories of husbands who show character, and I can assure you, that those readings, are the most exciting of those with a weak cuckolded husband.

 

[tg]

you know that the perceptions of what we watch or read are different for everyone, I interpret the role of the husband in a way, you rightly, interpret it according to your feelings, for goodness sake, we are talking about something that is out of the real context, it's a game, but I don't see this nuance of yours, for my world, if your partner does that thing with another man, be it, my boss, my brother, a crime boss, if I want to have a minimum of dignity, I'm not saying revenge or massacre, dignity, then, fuck the partner, fuck the fear, these are those null fears, white fears, fears only in our heads, this is what I interpret, other games or stories on Literotica, have similar stories, but also stories of husbands who show character, and I can assure you, that those readings, are the most exciting of those with a weak cuckolded husband.

Why don't you just play the game, and see what's it like. It feels like you haven't even played it.

 

[alex220477]

Why don't you just play the game, and see what's it like. It feels like you haven't even played it.

so according to you, I am unaware of the game, I write just to write bad things, wowww, you know, you are a genius.

 

[Robb123456]

so according to you, I am unaware of the game, I write just to write bad things, wowww, you know, you are a genius.

Guy honestly if u don't like the game, just skip it. For my part, i'm too old now for getting ur lessons about what a man should be or not be. We're just chilling here, talking about a game who made a number on us and if you don't like it it's fine. But the way you barge in to tell us something we all already know comes a bit as not very productive and, not flaming, a bit idiotic.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

It would be a Karma effect to see Vivian after so much sacrificing for her husband by fucking Christian, if later she wold come to a meeting with Christian and find him fucking another woman in his office or maybe in his house for example . That would make her probably realize how bad she is being used. I hope for such ending.

 

[tg]

It would be a Karma effect to see Vivian after so much sacrificing for her husband by fucking Christian, if later she wold come to a meeting with Christian and find him fucking another woman in his office or maybe in his house for example . That would make her probably realize how bad she is being used. I hope for such ending.

You bring up an interesting point. Christian is a known womanizer. The guys in the office have that impression of him, and we've even seen another girl (Addison, I guess?) in is bed.

But, the reason I bring this up, is maybe that's why the husband is so upset that his wife /falls for the guy/. Like, maybe he's pissed that she can't just see that Christian is no good. Not good in any way, other than being rich, having a handsome look and a good dick. But, other than that, he's no good.

The office knows he's no good, and Hutch being in that environment would hold a similar opinion of Christian. I think, if the next update really is focused on Hutch, then maybe we will get to see what's going on in his mind. And, maybe it is that he just can't understand why his wife of 22 years can't just wake up and see the rotten fucker that has somehow seduced her. It's neat that way, if the story comes out and explains things.

 

[Aplyr_ro]

It's been a while since I wanted to comment on this forum.
The VN is great IMO, it has keeps you hanging with many emotions and expressions like "that's hot", "no way that happened", "damn really!?", "go for it husband, grow a spine" and mostly "Omg"
The only things that I didn't like at all were the pixie haircut and the spineless husband, I think IMO it'd be better for him to be a nice guy and oblivious, as how the game is going and some have written already if the husband knows and allows it, it turns into Netorase, cuckold and probably hot wifing.
Nevertheless the author is doing a great job with it I'm looking forward for more updates from this VN bcs it's really entertaining and well made.
Pd: hope the tattoos were added while the wife is been corrupted and not from the start.
Pd2: author you're doing a great Job keep on.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

You bring up an interesting point. Christian is a known womanizer. The guys in the office have that impression of him, and we've even seen another girl (Addison, I guess?) in is bed.

But, the reason I bring this up, is maybe that's why the husband is so upset that his wife /falls for the guy/. Like, maybe he's pissed that she can't just see that Christian is no good. Not good in any way, other than being rich, having a handsome look and a good dick. But, other than that, he's no good.

The office knows he's no good, and Hutch being in that environment would hold a similar opinion of Christian. I think, if the next update really is focused on Hutch, then maybe we will get to see what's going on in his mind. And, maybe it is that he just can't understand why his wife of 22 years can't just wake up and see the rotten fucker that has somehow seduced her. It's neat that way, if the story comes out and explains things.

well the thing Christian is he is fucking her good and she enjoys so much that she let him do whatever he wants indeed. Such woman needs a very strong wake up call to make her realize that even if she likes the sex christian is very toxical for her life. Then after sex is being done for a while she will miss love again and Christians dick is not going to cover that need. I have experience myself that bevor with a friend of mine whgo was divorced then his wife cheated on him. And she came back after 2 years saying that she feels empty.

 

[Robb123456]

well the thing Christian is he is fucking her good and she enjoys so much that she let him do whatever he wants indeed. Such woman needs a very strong wake up call to make her realize that even if she likes the sex christian is very toxical for her life. Then after sex is being done for a while she will miss love again and Christians dick is not going to cover that need. I have experience myself that bevor with a friend of mine whgo was divorced then his wife cheated on him. And she came back after 2 years saying that she feels empty.

Good sex and emotionnal rollercoaster form a very potent combo in terms of attraction. Intoxicating would be a better word. And right now, Vivian is getting hooked, like an apprentice junkie to heroin. She knows it's bad for her and she keeps wanting more. Until the realization that her real life is in shambles and it's beyond repair.

It would be a Karma effect to see Vivian after so much sacrificing for her husband by fucking Christian, if later she wold come to a meeting with Christian and find him fucking another woman in his office or maybe in his house for example . That would make her probably realize how bad she is being used. I hope for such ending.

That would be the last nail in the coffin. A good idea.

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

It would be a Karma effect to see Vivian after so much sacrificing for her husband by fucking Christian, if later she wold come to a meeting with Christian and find him fucking another woman in his office or maybe in his house for example . That would make her probably realize how bad she is being used. I hope for such ending.

It would be even better if Christian fires Hutch no matter how much Vivan spread her legs for her husbands boss.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

Good sex and emotionnal rollercoaster form a very potent combo in terms of attraction. Intoxicating would be a better word. And right now, Vivian is getting hooked, like an apprentice junkie to heroin. She knows it's bad for her and she keeps wanting more. Until the realization that her real life is in shambles and it's beyond repair.



That would be the last nail in the coffin. A good idea.

i will top your last comment with Christian fires Hutch and keep fucking Vivian then the next argument would be from her that she would be the one who earns money.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

It would be even better if Christian fires Hutch no matter how much Vivan spread her legs for her husbands boss.

i will top your last comment with Christian fires Hutch and keep fucking Vivian then the next argument would be from her that she would be the one who earns money.

 

[wt859]

So time for some more speculation, what ideas do people have for the day that Hutch was MIA running "errands"?

1. Divorce lawyer - clean break, he knows he can not win, why even bother?
2. Meeting with the competition to discuss moving over and bringing clients + maybe option 1.
3. Sitting on a park bench like a little bitch crying about it

I like the first two, because he was in bed the entire day before sulking, why not just continue that rather than change the scenery. Errands sounds like he was actually doing something, rather than just sitting around contemplating what to do, he was probably doing that the day he never left the bed. Also his attitude towards his wife when he got home, he was dismissive.

If it was me I would go with both 1 and 2, but it would not even get to that because the boss would have been curb stomped into that table and the bitch would be told to fuck off because its over, aint got no time for that shit.

I think it was like when Skyler went out without telling Walter in Breaking Bad. She was just "out doing stuff" as a way to get away from Walter because she was upset with him (and also to throw his own shit back at him, but that doesn't back up my point as much lol).