VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[SideshowBobNo.2]

If i have to guess either something about their son or she cheated on her husband before the boss and he told her he can destroy her life.
This is the Real reason why she cheated which makes total sense.

I don't think so, it has nothing to do with it.
It was her decision to meet her husbands boss at his office.

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When he kissed her a second time, she expected it on her lips and was disappointed when he kissed her cheek instead.
The strong sexual tension between the two was through the roof and she broke at that moment.
The extra-marital intercourse was invitable from that point on.

Maybe this sounds plain, but Vivian is just a sex starved wife and probably bored in her twenty-two year long marriage.
Besides the boss uses the art of persuasion and knows how to manipulate people to get what he wants.

But if we are honest no husband would have allowed this:

Spoiler: offer

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Normally the host would offer the bedroom to the invited guests/couple and he would taken the sofa instead.
It's still a game with porn logic involved, so it needs to be play out that way to progress the story.
The dev did something right, when people discuss fictional characters and their motivation in a porn game.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Can't remember did they have kids?

 

[packard1928]

Can't remember did they have kids?

one college son

 

[Justaphase]

Can't remember did they have kids?

Didn't you play through the part where she goes to see their son at college and his roommates are lusting after her?

 

[Adhdclassic]

It would be good if the son becomes his dads allied but something tells me son is lined up to be cucked too.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Didn't you play through the part where she goes to see their son at college and his roommates are lusting after her?

Adhd tends to take responsibility for not remembering

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

Didn't you play through the part where she goes to see their son at college and his roommates are lusting after her?

A never ending story about these sex starved teenagers lusting after a MILF.

It would be good if the son becomes his dads allied but something tells me son is lined up to be cucked too.

This would be fun, the son witness his dad getting cucked and get's cucked himself this way.
Double cucked.

 

[Pi Quantum]

It will not have choices in the future. No way I could put in the same quality towards multiple paths. I, personally, don't particularly enjoy multiple paths and always use a walkthough mod when available to play an optimal path once (with the exception of Chasing Sunsets... that game is the gold standard). Anyway, my brain wouldn't be able to keep track of different paths and variables and dialog. Add in the fact I'm not trying to make money off the game and market to a wide audience, that equals KN. Thank you for the feedback though.

You're definitely taking the right approach here, because too many branching paths creating impossible complexity are probably the #1 reason games get abandoned by the dev, with the #2 reason being the dev's attempts to satisfy everybody's feedback - which ends up satisfying nobody and ruining the game. Starting with a clear vision and sticking to it will see this game completed successfully, with players free to make up their own minds on the content. I live in hope that Hutch's devastated face and brooding silences are hiding the slow development of a psychotic revenge killer, but if the game ends with Vivian (heavily pregnant with someone else's baby) and Addison crying over Hutch's grave after he kills himself in despair, that's OK too. I'm enjoying the journey more than the destination.

Something you might consider after that is adding a series of 'What If?' snippets, to explore interesting possibilities that wouldn't fit into the main game. Its an approach that works well with Kinetic Novels, with a few examples on this site.

 

[Adhdclassic]

A never ending story about these sex starved teenagers lusting after a MILF.
This would be fun, the son witness his dad getting cucked and get's cucked himself this way.
Double cucked.

Double cucked double revenge. Dad takes care of college kids son takes care of boss. Both leave mom.

 

[SC Stories]

I hope that you give us an Ending where you will receive praise from one half and criticism from the other half. That will cement your game as truly UNIQUE.

That's pretty much guaranteed. The ending was the 2nd thing to get outlined. The 1st? It was the backyard scene. As controversial as the whole backyard/bedroom part seems to be, it was/is the foundation I build this world on. I wanted the viewer to live those moments through Hutch, though, hence the teasing.

And I'll just say again, thank you everyone for the praise and support so far. I won't confirm or deny anything story wise. I've got a much bigger response than I anticipated and I'm enjoying reading everyone's theories, critiques, and hopes. I want everyone to have fun with that while we wait for the next update. When will that be? I can't give an answer. This is a hobby, and I do have a day job, so bear with me.



Thanks again.

 

[Adhdclassic]

That's pretty much guaranteed. The ending was the 2nd thing to get outlined. The 1st? It was the backyard scene. As controversial as the whole backyard/bedroom part seems to be, it was/is the foundation I build this world on. I wanted the viewer to live those moments through Hutch, though, hence the teasing.

And I'll just say again, thank you everyone for the praise and support so far. I won't confirm or deny anything story wise. I've got a much bigger response than I anticipated and I'm enjoying reading everyone's theories, critiques, and hopes. I want everyone to have fun with that while we wait for the next update. When will that be? I can't give an answer. This is a hobby, and I do have a day job, so bear with me.



Thanks again.

Just take your time I am not a KN fan I like some semblance of control but your KN has caught my attention even if it doesn't go the way I hope I have enjoyed it. I will say I hope you keep it to the title and don't add the BBC to it. But it's your game. Do you.

 

[CrimsonBlitz213]

I just started playing the game, and so far i'm enjoying it. However, on the preview pics (specifically the last pic) on the thread's front page, we see a black dude eyeing the wife's body. Is the wife going to turn into a village whore? I hope not, cuz that'll just ruin the game for me personally.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

That's pretty much guaranteed. The ending was the 2nd thing to get outlined. The 1st? It was the backyard scene. As controversial as the whole backyard/bedroom part seems to be, it was/is the foundation I build this world on. I wanted the viewer to live those moments through Hutch, though, hence the teasing.

And I'll just say again, thank you everyone for the praise and support so far. I won't confirm or deny anything story wise. I've got a much bigger response than I anticipated and I'm enjoying reading everyone's theories, critiques, and hopes. I want everyone to have fun with that while we wait for the next update. When will that be? I can't give an answer. This is a hobby, and I do have a day job, so bear with me.



Thanks again.

Would be possible to know time did you need to create such good game?

 

[Shar4263]

Bro SC Stories great game man, loved the story, animation, characters, dialogues. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

BTW I know you are not taking any support from us and doing a true god's work but man if there is any possibility of getting the chapters faster with our support than...

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Don't know about your plans but one of the most famous AVN game "Leap of Faith" was also free release for everyone of patreon but people still supported it, but at the end of the day its up to you.
Once again great game!

 

[MrDL]

Similarly to what a bunch of others said, there's a weird thing where she looks like an old lady but at the same time fit with no actual signs of aging. It's probably the hair and make up along with just the face design, I think giving her a tramp stamp (along with the other dumb tattoo) though says all you need to know about the plans for her and her probable history before getting married. Reminds me of someone I use to know who like to use to the quote "you can't make a hoe into a housewife" and she'd know because she ended up being a hoe.

 

[Hmong-sama]

Damn. For Hutch to start Vivian with an open marriage, hope things go well for the both of them. I wonder how far deep and corrupt she'll be in the next update? Maybe not that much but a work in progress I guess. I doubt they'll only have the small talk and love and affection towards each other. I mean Hutch and Vivian.

When I was playing through this update, I first felt like Vivian was sacrificing her own life and body for Hutch's job (which I guess that was entirely understandable) and Hutch knows it (when he saw them in the backyard for the first time), but just doesn't want to tell her about it. It just feels like both Hutch and Vivian were just evading from the shit they've been through recently (more like Hutch evading his wife ever since from the first dinner with Christian, the boss) . And it looked like it was going to get worse until the end of this update where they talked about it. I was like, "WOW FINALLY! "I thought it was going to get even worse as Hutch will distance himself from her wife even more, but it didn't.

 

[Shar4263]

I don't think so, it has nothing to do with it.
It was her decision to meet her husbands boss at his office.

Spoiler: kiss

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When he kissed her a second time, she expected it on her lips and was disappointed when he kissed her cheek instead.
The strong sexual tension between the two was through the roof and she broke at that moment.
The extra-marital intercourse was invitable from that point on.

Maybe this sounds plain, but Vivian is just a sex starved wife and probably bored in her twenty-two year long marriage.
Besides the boss uses the art of persuasion and knows how to manipulate people to get what he wants.

But if we are honest no husband would have allowed this:

Spoiler: offer

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Normally the host would offer the bedroom to the invited guests/couple and he would taken the sofa instead.
It's still a game with porn logic involved, so it needs to be play out that way to progress the story.
The dev did something right, when people discuss fictional characters and their motivation in a porn game.

She just knew what she was getting into the moment Christian hit on her on the first meeting, although DEV didn't show the first sex scene we can assure it was little to no resistance from her.

Accept it she is a whore with weak will power, anyone request her, blackmail her or little force her and she is ready to spread the legs.

Also I yell at every husband in NTR games but this MF is special(more like specially retarded), man is not even beta male, fucker got no spine at all.

 

[Shar4263]

I also think Christian will swing her to every client for the contracts, eager to know who will take her Anal virginity though.

 

[What'sNew]

I like the model. A woman that plausibly looks like she could be in her 30s without inflated balloons for tits?

I agree. Her model cant be praised enough.

I also thought the tattoos she had were in good taste. A lot of games overdo it with tattoos on their girls but here I cant help but think there is a reason for Vivian having these tattoos. I hope Christian brings it up in the future. Maybe she had a wild past before meeting Hutch. hehe.

 

[Zick_Zack]

Even though we haven't seen much of her, I like Addison's character. Also, I think she could be important to Hutch in the future, since we have already seen that she really cares about him.

I wonder what role she will play in future updates.