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Wow...amazing game dude! i'm excited to see what happens next!

 

[SC Stories]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.

Is Hutch so adamant for Vivian to take this "project" because he feels trapped by Christian holding his job hostage ? Or is Hutch just resigned because he saw how much Vivian is actually enjoying it and is slowly letting her go to what he thinks (and he'd be right) she really want ? Or is he simply gaslighted by Christian with his "The man of the house endure and shut his pain" ? Or maybe all of the above.... I just want to understand properly, that'll help me for understanding the dynamics moving forward.[/

Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.

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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.

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Okay... edited to include a gratuitous titty shot for Packard

Spoiler: It's all you get...

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[SC Stories]

Here's a cool fact shared by Sparta158 – in the original version, the first conversation in the office was different (it had a different ending, one kiss, etc.). We can assume that this founding scene caused quite a bit of trouble* for SC Stories, and they tried it in several variations.

TonyMurray
As for Addison and the meeting in the blue suit – on one hand, Addison might have already been used to the visits of "various women" to Chris's office (this also gives context to the scene with the bed and explains Hutch's reluctance to bring his wife to the company), which could explain her irritation. On the other hand, it’s also possible – though we don’t know for sure – that as the secretary, Addison should have been the first to arrive at work. Perhaps she had already seen Vivian earlier (from that first meeting), without Vivian and Chris noticing her.


*I assume that it's really important for the viewer to understand the strong impression Chris made on Vivian.

not her attr. - his


The strong impression Chris made on Vivian – it was she who lost her footing.

That's why SC added another kiss/changed the ending of the meeting. It's clear that she simply has "weak knees" from the experience.

In the firstl version, as she was leaving, she throws in a strong comment.

In the final version, she simply leaves stunned, and in the car, she starts to recover.

WTF are you guys talking about?

 

[lolo540]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.


Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.

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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.

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Thank you Dev, for this update.

We'll have to be patient before we have a bit more to grind. But if the aim is to have a result as polished as a diamond, it's worth it!
Thanks for all your hard work!

 

[JoeBlogs]

When Hutch done talking and went to the bathroom all she had to do is "Don't do it" (I know then the rest of the plot won't happen) but she made up some excuse in her mind that she is doing it so Hutch can cope it and this is good for his ego etc

In the end she did what Christian told her to do, put the blame game on him so she can be carefree. I mean come on how fucked up her logic is, this is how she thinks a man gains his ego or manhood. It again shows how little she thinks of him.

Yeah, as SC Stories so eloquently put it, "A leap of faith" in porn logic.

Question though is what do you define as dark (in relation to this tale)?
1. Violence of some sort, e.g. revenge arc, payback etc. Can be dark if mutilation or death involved.
or
2. Emotional punches, e.g. Vivian falling further into the rabbit hole. However after a certain point, it no longer has any effect
or
3. Something else?

I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose

Interesting, at least that answers that question, although Vivian has an inner monologue too and probably more screen time/speaking role, so far.

 

[Hattyrulz]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.


Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.

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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.

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ty for the update.

is the redhead in the spoiler the character from your first project? can you tell us her name? SC Stories .... would be happy with any form of reply.

think most people didn't get the QT style of writing comment you posted. after referencing the way i remember the story and the style of writing a lot made sense ... even the "leap of faith" in logic(which is better than saying pgl) since i don't want to use the crude term like pgl for this kn.(which i did a lot at the start.... not making excuses)

regarding the chapter release and version you can always use torrent or split the game into part using a compression tool that others have done in this site. like winrar and split the over all game into manageable sizes.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Something else?

SC Stories confirms 0.6 is where the pain begins and that is also the chapter with a lot more Hutch content right from the beginning. So I guess he could mean the inner corruption of Hutch, not merely him witnessing Vivians actions (that's already 0.4) but how this transforms his inner self. Looking into the abyss and then becoming part of it. Self-loathing, self-depreciation, self-humiliation becoming subjectively the cuck he objectively already is and loving it because of hating himself? This is what I would call really dark because it's actual self-distruction on a moral level. Alternatively being eaten up by hate and thereby preparing the revenge-chapter? But I'm not sure if that is the dev's idea of dark and pain.

 

[packard1928]

SC Stories Have a heart ..... THere is over a month to go... Can you give us a better view of Vivian ??? maybe from this release... Like at the end of the game ??? Please

 

[Dealbreaker]

not her attr. - his

Sorry, language glitch. English doesn't seem to have a one-noun-expression for "being attracted to somebody" (native speakers? And please don't say love) and attraction doesn't work in passive mode. I thought it could be attraction to vs attraction for in the sense of attractiveness but thats probably bs. Or can one say attractedness?

 

[CrazyRabbit]

Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time.

Thanks a lot for the answer , so since it's left to interpretation ; we'll see when we'll have the 0.6 updates for complete theories then since it's the Hutch heavy one.

Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

I'm pretty much the same as you for this ; I like one game -> one download.
But if, at the end, you're forced to compressed, maybe that chapter thingy (not a fan but ehe eye candy wants what it wants...)
Then again, some game are 20Go - sized and we download them anyway (no matter how long it takes) ; you could let it be only one download and split it into .rar parts maybe....

but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Oh cool, cause until now it's been sunshine and rainbows for poor Hutch and we don't want that

Jokes aside, thanks for the clarification and kudos for the technical aspect of the game and the writing.
It's really an exception to me to go to an NTR-focused game, so you did something special.

Take care

 

[Hattyrulz]

SC Stories confirms 0.6 is where the pain begins and that is also the chapter with a lot more Hutch content right from the beginning. So I guess he could mean the inner corruption of Hutch, not merely him witnessing Vivians actions (that's already 0.4) but how this transforms his inner self. Looking into the abyss and then becoming part of it. Self-loathing, self-depreciation, self-humiliation becoming subjectively the cuck he objectively already is and loving it because of hating himself? Alternatively being eaten up by hate and thereby preparing the revenge-chapter?

i'm more in agreement with the last statment of how the hate eating up hutch will turn him towards a revenge path. which i think is dark as making good man do bad things is dark in my view. go cigarette man hutch.

SC Stories Have a heart ..... THere is over a month to go... Can you give us a better view of Vivian ??? maybe from this release... Like at the end of the game ??? Please

obviously he has a heart.... thats y he gave us this kn for free... and is even on expected timeframe estimated by him. don't think you will get anymore info than that.... we already know there will be a sex scene from the latest update post... my money is on the women in the bar. which seem logical as the woman is half undressed in that sneak peek we got.

PS: never relent Luc77 never know you might wear down SC Stories like how vivian is wearing down hutch mentaly

Sorry, language glitch. English doesn't seem to have a one-noun-expression for "being attracted to somebody" (native speakers? And please don't say love) and attraction doesn't work in passive mode. I thought it could be attraction to vs attractiveness but thats probably bs. Or can one say attractedness?

smitten or love struck.... not sure if this is what you mean by vivians reaction at the door when seeing the boss. if you want to get technical... then in the words of pam(from archer tv series) she splooshed.

 

[Guszti242]

So, Hutch-centric, that's what I was hoping for. And I would find my greatest joy in it if he got a big revenge on Christian by killing him and then cutting him up into four. And he would ruin his company so that he would get rich and send Vivien after Christian or run her as a whore for the worst clients.

 

[Kenzy01]

when you say '' but v0.6 is where the pain begins '' ı don't think ı can take ıt. What if meteor or something hit world and we cannot see it forever. SC please try to make quick release time.

 

[Kenzy01]

So, Hutch-centric, that's what I was hoping for. And I would find my greatest joy in it if he got a big revenge on Christian by killing him and then cutting him up into four. And he would ruin his company so that he would get rich and send Vivien after Christian or run her as a whore for the worst clients.

Daddy chill...

 

[packard1928]

I still say hutch is like the silent killer. He is stoic in a sense.. seems to be a man of few words. I think ( Just Me ) he will not get violent... But he will get his due on Christian. You come into my house and I am gong to take you down attitude. What he does may not even be lawful... But effective. I also think he will use Vivian as his pawn in this. I do wish they could get back together pre Christian ... But, I realistically don't think it will happen. I think he will use Vivian as the bait, and then let her fall with Christian.

 

[Guszti242]

I still say hutch is like the silent killer. He is stoic in a sense.. seems to be a man of few words. I think ( Just Me ) he will not get violent... But he will get his due on Christian. You come into my house and I am gong to take you down attitude. What he does may not even be lawful... But effective. I also think he will use Vivian as his pawn in this. I do wish they could get back together pre Christian ... But, I realistically don't think it will happen. I think he will use Vivian as the bait, and then let her fall with Christian.

Hutch is embezzling money! And he's turning suspicion on Vivien and Christian.

 

[robrize2169]

would be great to have Hutch gather info on Christian embezzeling money from company, report it to the shareholders if there are such a group with this company, then help them have Christian fired and replaced by..Hutch himself. step 1 of revenge plan. step 2.. divorce his cheating whore of a wife after hiring a PI to get video evidence of her whoring around. and not just with Christian. step 3 have Viv fuck her son's roommate and his twin in a 3some with the 2 young men. have her son walk in on them and explode on her and his roommates. starting a fight with them right there and then. she then watches as the twins beat him mercilessly and hospitalize him. Viv then realizes what her fucking around is costing her. the son disowns her and let's his dad know what she did. more fuel for the divorce. Viv is served divorce papers and finds out that son wants nothing to do with her. she has lost both her once happy marriage and now her son too. she then blames Christian for it all and has him charged with blackmail and rape. Hutch supports Christian against her saying it was all her idea and she cheated on him. but he didn't blackmail or rape her. she ends up alone and living in a tiny little apt. completely broke. fired from her teaching job. she then goes to the mechanic and becomes his whore. the end. hm, not too bad if i do say so myself. lots of pain here..for Vivian.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

My bet on 0.6 is that Huutch who didn't talk much in 0.2 and even couldn't bring on a full sentence towards Christian, will be completely silenced by then.
We will witness from his point of view an absolute detached wife on Vitamin D who drives him to utter despair.
Get your umbrellas ready!

 

[Sparta158]

My bet on 0.6 is that Huutch who didn't talk much in 0.2 and even couldn't bring on a full sentence towards Christian, will be completely silenced by then.
We will witness from his point of view an absolute detached wife on Vitamin D who drives him to utter despair.
Get your umbrellas ready!

I think the exact opposite. He will have to ask himself the question, did I make my wife do this through my distant behavior over several years? i will explain it in more detail later.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

I think the exact opposite. He will have to ask himself the question, did I make my wife do this through my distant behavior over several years?

Not possible if we can trust our DEV!

Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose

...it will rain heavy Huutch tear drops!